I Wanted to Be a Licking Dog, but Accidentally Captured the Heroine

Quietly give yourself a good review [send a heart]

I'm here, I hope I won't be blocked again.

Ahem [eat melon] It's good, don't get killed by three [sneaky laugh]

It's good-looking. Although the male protagonist is initially set up as a dog-licker, the female protagonist's personality is also very lovable. Some people may not like the subject matter, but I don't care. The emotional scenes are very delicate, and the daily life is also very funny and quite sweet. It was written like that in the middle period, but in the later period, it was able to circle back to the introduction in a way that I didn't expect. It's really amazing [like] [like], come on, I look forward to a smooth ending. [Laugh]

What can I say? The heroine character in the front is a bit too bad. We don't have to write it like this if we don't need to. Filling in the pitfalls later seems a bit hasty. Of course, writing about the relationship between the male and female protagonists always ends up being too misunderstood by the female protagonist, which is unnecessary. The misunderstanding results in the male protagonist being a little short-tempered. When it comes to filling in the "male protagonist realizes his mistake" later, it feels weird, and the emotional description is not very sincere. , Emotions are always judged based on favorability, and the writing can be more lively, such as "85 favorability is very different between the original work and the current stage", or "Why is the predecessor's 85 favorability confession that he is the elder brother, but the male protagonist's 85 favorability confession really makes the heroine think deeply and sad." This is also a little thought as a reader. The subject matter is indeed very novel. I love reading it. If you write more, the author will do your best! ! !

Does the author remember me? You should still remember it.

Never marry a woman, I can still accept it if a woman's body marries a man's body

From the first to the third book, the author has been blocked all the time, and I am afraid that this one will also be blocked [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Don't get killed again. Last time I just saw the male and female protagonist making progress and they were killed [face covering] There's been a lot of buzz lately, please give me some exciting news, the author, the number of readers has plummeted [face covering]

Overall, it looks okay, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is quite uncomfortable to watch. The ending is also quite sloppy, written very suddenly, and is basically finished in a few chapters. I hope the author's writing will get better and better, come on! [Sending Hearts]

Good-looking and good-looking. The one soul and two bodies of an ordinary person and a big BOSS is like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger (although it is not pretentious). If you like this kind of setting, do you have any recommendations for similar books?

I read it for a while and it was pretty good. Unfortunately, I didn't get to read the author's first book. I and I want to read it [crying]

Japanese! I like to read this kind of narcissistic novel. The author should consider the female body! ! !

Very good, as long as you don't create the consciousness of the clone, this is a taboo

In terms of general rationality (the old career is sick), it is a good work, but the description of the male and female bodies is a bit stiff.

Come on, come on, there are very few two-body articles but some readers really like it. Although it was banned before, there is too little interaction between the two bodies. It is too restrained for you to feel comfortable writing. The female body can be used to make the female protagonist jealous, and the male body can also help the female body solve problems to a certain extent. There is really little connection between the two bodies now. Anyway, come on!

This novel is really good

CP, so annoying This book is slow-burning, full of details, and very real! Those who like stallion stories and harems can go out. ┭┮┭┮Wow, you are the first twins series I have read... How could you throw a tantrum? How could you! ! I want Ye Qingyu, Ye Qingyu, Ye Qingyu

To be honest, I kind of like this kind of role-playing novel. Although I can't understand some of the handling of the female character, overall it's still pretty good [laughs]

Very nice, to my liking

Love watching it, looking forward to confessing [laughing][laughing]

Very good, please write it quickly.

OK, characterization is average

Not enough, not enough

I feel that this book is not as good as the author's first two books

Are there any other similar books like Don't Cultivation to Immortality or City?

It's okay, but there is a real problem with your twin arrangement. It's obvious that the two people share memories, but their personalities are completely different. They are two completely independent personalities.

I said why are we so familiar? It turns out to be you [laughing evilly]

It's normal, but nothing unexpected. I want to see Mr. Gu get picked up by the big bird. Otherwise, I'm sorry for this character.

I hope the author's book will not enter the dark room