Gu Immortal************

Is the author a professional writer? So far so good.

Very nice to look at. The protagonist is a rare slave. Come on! Keep writing.

It's so-so. Although some things are unreasonable (such as the training Gu), it's still watchable. And this is the first life of a model worker, and the protagonist is equivalent to the second life of a model worker, but he can't be reborn.

Very well written, good luck to the author

There are very few Gu fanfics. It's rare to find a good one, so it must be praised with five stars. [Adoration]

This Daai Xianzun fanfic is very good, with a tight plot and characters. They all have their own charm, but the only drawback is that it is too similar to the Great Love Immortal. What you wrote is probably Gu Yue Fangyuan's previous life, because Gu Yue Fangyuan in it has only been around for a while. Recently, the plot has been very different from the original work, and it feels better than the previous one, but I like the protagonist in it who kills decisively and abandons morality for the sake of cultivation.

Well written and beautiful

The story line is in Fang Yuan's first life and belongs to Nankeyi Meng. It is all illusory. Just like the original Ying Wuxie used the Spring Autumn Cicada to resurrect, the world directly distorted and disappeared.

I really like this

Okay? Did the host see me?

Very good writing so far. Come on, author

It's really good. Using the first week as the entry point avoids the appearance of Fangyuan. The protagonist is currently similar to the role of Fangyuan in the second week. Seeing that he has just been promoted to Gu Immortal, I guess he is trying to get something out of the fire between the ghost and the heaven. I look forward to writing a plot similar to the battle between good and evil in Yitian Mountain. I just found out after I reviewed it that the world of Gu is really difficult.

It looks great, but the cultivation speed of this slave is a bit slow. When will there be a beast king?

It's pretty cool, but I remember the prices in Baohuangtian weren't that expensive. [What]

I love Xianzun very much.

Okay, just a little bit less.

Not bad, very exciting

It's very interesting. If it were Fang Yuan's second life, it might be even more exciting.

Although it is somewhat illogical, it is still a very good book. It is better than most others and is more imaginative and realistic [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The author's writing is very good, and he has a good grasp of the family system and the Gu master's methods. Looking forward to speeding up the upgrade, running a Slave Dao Immortal Aperture is a good attraction.

Very good-looking, decisive in killing, ok, It's just that it's ringing. You can lubricate it. Casual call Otherwise you will be too tired

It's a fanfic that I'm quite satisfied with.

Good looking, one of the few excellent fairy tales

Compared with various messy system tools, this book does have some charm of the original book. Although the pace is a bit fast, it is still a good book.

I haven't read the original novel, but I found that the protagonists of Gu's fanfics all suit my taste. I'm following this one and the other one.

It looks good, but why isn't there our Immortal Lord?

I think it looks good

Very good fanfic.

For now, it looks passable. [Smile]

No more? Woohoo!