Naruto *********

A very nice book. There's nothing sinister about it. It's good for a first-time novelist to be able to keep writing hundreds of chapters. Some people are also defiant. Do they think they are the reincarnation of Lu Xun? Directly attack the author personally. If he has no quality, he thinks better than anyone else. In fact, he knows nothing. [Shy] Why don't you write a book yourself if you are so good at commenting? Are there any "sharp reviews" on Driftwood every day? [Laughs] [Laughs] [Laughs] You can twist your brain 180 degrees and you can't even think of these nonsense words. You are so superior when you are reading, why don't you go to the book circle to produce food. It's also 666. If you don't want to read it, just don't read it. What's wrong with attacking the author [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] The meaning is unclear haha [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Support the author, it doesn't matter if you don't update [crying] It's okay to take a rest [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][love][love][love]

I will read everyone's comments on this book carefully. I am just a novice. I will humbly accept everyone's criticism and work hard to make corrections. I can't satisfy everyone, but I will try my best to do this well. If you have any questions about the plot or toxic points, you can @ me. I will reply when I see it. I hope everyone will not resort to personal attacks. Thank you for your support [blowing kiss]

Xiaodu, in fact, if an Uchiha has the Sharingan, he is a genius, just like the immortal body of the Senju family...

Being so close to Ben Zi Lei, is this a hint that I'm going to do something clever? It's kind of interesting.

This book is so funny, so beautiful, so beautiful, I like it so much, I like the author so much, you must not stop reading it, I like you so much! ! ! So much fun! ! ! I can laugh at Minato's actions for the rest of my life, hahahahahahahaha, it's so damn funny! Author, you have a funny factor and are so good at making things happen! ! ! A Fei who collects poop, pink and tender spots, Namikaze who wears women's clothing, and the protagonist who likes elbow strikes. All of them make me laugh! !

It's still very interesting, but I really want to see the author write about the protagonist and Minato [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's very interesting, but too little. Is there any similar book on Tomato? I really like the character of the protagonist. I hope there won't be a female protagonist

It's very interesting. The first part is a little bit toxic, but the second part is very interesting.

Super funny... I almost laughed out loud

I hope it will have a single heroine or no heroine and it will not be discontinued or unfinished. I hope the author can write 1 million words. Please.

There may be some unreasonable details in the first few chapters [Start], but the subsequent plot is still very exciting and interesting [Thinking]. If you can encourage the new author more, please give me a five-star review [Like]

It's good that Madara actually has Alzheimer's disease

A parent in the Tang Dynasty lost his magatama and was attacked and died. He can't speak Mandarin, and he can't use his glasses. He doesn't dig out his eyesight. People can see how they died. They say you are filial. If you want to take revenge, tell me about your advantages in time travel. See if Tobirama can help you. You are said to be unfilial. You, a Tang Dynasty person, still know how to resurrect your parents.

It's so short. Is the author also so short?

A well-written novel. There are not so many passionate fights, only dull daily life. The interaction with the supporting characters is very interesting. The character of the protagonist is well established. Let me talk about the parts that made me feel uncomfortable. There were too many interactions with Ben before the 100th picture. It can be reduced appropriately. Too much will make you tired, but you can hide these in small details. The second time I saw Xiaonan The character is really fascinating, and the characterization is very good, but I don't understand why the protagonist is brought in, which gives people a vague feeling of ambiguity. However, the official supporting role is Yahiko, which makes it feel like a big drag. When writing female supporting characters, I suggest you add your own ideas from the beginning, and don't be vague. I saw an ambiguous book about Konan and Yahiko, which is very good, but I have no desire to read it. It is not recommended not to write down the heroine. Probably 2-3 are the most suitable, just slow down the progress.

I think it was handled pretty well😊, and there aren't any big poisonous points so far.

This book can indeed be just a personal evaluation, but it is a bit short and I read it in less than a day.

It looks good, but the rating is too low [eating melon]

Now that I have seen it, although I said I haven't read much, I have read the comments and the author's comments, which are quite good. It's okay to write for the first time after hearing the advice. So far, it's okay, but I have to say one thing: the intrigues in Konoha Village, the murder of friends in Mizugakure Village, the poverty in Hidden Village, the low-status Tsuchikage Clan, and the unity of Kumokage Village.

How come there is such a beautiful novel😋 It's not like other Naruto novels. Every day I just discuss policies with Danzo and burn my brain. This novel was specially prepared for me.

It's quite exciting, good luck to the author

The first few chapters are a bit confusing, but I can accept it. The later chapters are really super good. Why are there so few people [crying]

Still very good Although some settings are not very good Writing is also a bit lacking But overall it's ok

Let me read all the luxury magazines👊👴

So far it looks pretty good [like]

The first few pictures are a little bit toxic, but it's actually okay to skip the first few and look at the back.

It looks fine at the moment, it's just short and a little small, um, no other problems.

It's so cool. I like such crazy books.

Quickly update @Moqiongshu @ raccoon dog @ Duaisangtangju Why is the rating so low? I need another one [Cool]

The plot is coherent and the characters have obvious personality traits and lots of laughs.