Divine Gold! What Should I Do If I Cross into a Heartthrob Novel?

It's still a familiar subject matter! I like this style very much~ The author, thank you for writing (ง˙o˙)วRemember to update on time every day. I've been waiting for you for a long time [crying] Finally it's here [crying]

Good reviews! ! [Shy] I finally waited until I started writing a new article [Working on it] It's still a familiar theme

Generally speaking, I think it's okay, but author, you seem to have a lot of holes that you haven't filled in. It's weird. Bai Luojing was saved by the disguised toilet flower before, and then he stayed behind. Later, Bai Luojing was worried and wanted to go back to find him, but I understand that the battle was fierce at that time and I really didn't have time to think about anything else, but I didn't write anything after that, as if I had suddenly forgotten it. At that time, Chen Yanze also said that Master Bai Luojing asked him to come to save people. I thought Bai Luojing might ask [Chigua]

So far, it's quite good-looking. Hey, first of all, I would like to give you a good review. Come on!

For me, the subject matter of this book is very novel, but I don't know when the protagonist will fall in love with the attackers. The article writes too much about the relationship between the protagonist and the attackers. In short, I look forward to the protagonists and the attackers chasing their wives in the later period. The author wrote the article very well, and I am looking forward to the later development.

I like it. It's really beautiful. This subject is quite new to me. I've rarely seen anyone write this subject so well. I highly recommend it. It's not a loss to invest in. It's super good-looking. The characters are very full and the plot is also very good. In fact, I really want the protagonist and Li Xing to be together. The Lord and the Protector are not too easy to fight, but they are both very easy to fight. Both pairs are very good. I love it. I hope the author will do more. If possible, I hope the author will make a story about the protagonist and Li Xing. I really hope they are a couple. They really match me. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The plot has a tight emotional line and it goes by very quickly. The Shura Field is really enjoyable. But in the later stage, it was a little OOC and weird. The whole world forgot that Chen Yanze was the Demon Lord and he was weakened very much due to accidental damage. At first, I thought it was just a strong one, but in the later stage, Ze started to become more delicate, but he is also very good-looking! The above is just my personal opinion, the back part is really sweet

The writing style is very good. The first part is well written and very attractive. When I saw the character of Shou collapsed in the later period, I was a little bit explosive. The ending was a bit rushed. I think it is also good not to have children (for my personal opinion, please don't be angry with the author)

It can be seen that this is the author's first book. It is very good for the first time to write like this. Keep up the good work, but you can consider it when choosing a writing style. You can greatly improve your writing style. The content is what I like to read. It's okay. There is a lot of room for improvement (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

In fact, the overall situation is good, but the emotional line feels a bit strange. In the secret realm, according to the description, Bai Luojing may have some feelings for a flower in the toilet. But after leaving the secret realm, Bai Luojing fell in love with his junior brother. Although they are the same person, Bai Luojing didn't know it, so it felt a bit strange [what]

Nice! Nice! Nice! Say important things three times! ! !

The description of appearance in the content is worth reading [shy]

Not enough, not enough at all T^T [crying] You can skim the previous content, it probably talks about some things about the protagonists. The next part will be much better, and the emotional line of the protagonist's love and the protagonist's attack will begin. It's quite exciting (^V^)[shy], and you can also see that the author's writing skills are also improving (≧▽≦). I just want to ask the protagonist when did he break out of his vest? Please give me more, Qiuqiu~

I really like this kind of book very much. It's really the best book I've ever read! The content and plot are also really super nice👍! Ahhhhhhhh! I'm really looking forward to the day when Chen Yanze takes off his vest! ! Big cheers for the author! I support you! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

The writing is very good. It makes me hope that the author can write more scenes about our protagonist. Almost half of the scenes at level 1 are about other people. My dear protagonist doesn't even know where he has gone.

It looks great, keep it up! (∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡

Please nv1, everyone likes it woo woo woo

You must work hard, it's so beautiful ￣ ￣)σ [currently in development]

I hope the author will update it soon. It's really interesting. I haven't read such an interesting article in a long time! !

It's so beautiful, so many updates [blowing kisses] move forward bravely, sisters, I will keep following [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

It's really beautiful! Big cheers for the author! ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

It's okay so far. The protagonist's character and situation are all right. It doesn't make me embarrassed like other heartthrobs I've seen before [shy][shy] Keep up the good work

It smells so good, I can't bear to look at it later.

So pretty. Why not multiple male protagonists?

I finished reading but I felt a little confused. The previous part was quite interesting. I hope they can all be with Ozawa, and Bai Xi will always be with him. I don't know what's going on. It's obvious that he is more uncomfortable than be. O(╥╥)o

It's so beautiful, I want to steal all the author's manuscripts

Looks good, loves to read, watch more! But, will Baixi come back?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I think I am quite picky in reading articles. This one is really good-looking! ! !

Beautiful! There are just some parts that I don't seem to understand why I fell in love with it [crying] I look forward to a big update from the author! [Adoration][Sending Hearts]

This is really beautiful, I love it\(//∇//)\