Recruiting a Disciple: Retiring to Retirement and Cultivating Immortality

It's pretty good, but I don't want the main character to look too young.

In fact, I was wondering whether my writing in this book is a good one. What do you think? It's okay for everyone to complain about bad things, but I also feel like my writing isn't very good.

Not bad, you can keep watching

The writing is pretty good~ (certified by a master [laughing evilly])

Still pretty good

So far I feel okay.

Come on, I really like it.

Good. Worth a look