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The writing is delicate, but I think it should be as little emotional as possible, because people watching this want to see the player's reaction when they watch the classic clips. If you write too much, some people may be impatient. Also, it would be nice if it could be a little more shady. For me, it is a bit literary, that is, I can write some other games to transition. Although it is mainly based on Mi Hua, it will be a bit tiring and boring for players who are familiar with the plot. Other games can be mentioned in one go. So give it four stars

The update is not enough. I have already thought of the expressions of the characters in the article. When I think of this, I want to eat a few Wuhundian elders.

It looks good, but I feel like I have to start from Qi Bao and Cooking Po. I don't need to write all about the pre-civilization, because I've written all about the pre-civilization. How to write the foreshadowing of the current civilization [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] @yanyeye

Although the author did not say that there is cp, I can probably tell that there should be. I'm looking forward to Honkai Impact 3... But I don't like doubles, so I'll give it four stars.

I saw some literature that smells like youthful pain. How should I put it? There are some things that I can't tell the priority from. The worst thing to say is that I don't want to see what the protagonist is like. His role should be to bring the story of Honkai Impact III to the world. What we want to see is the reaction of people in this world to the story, not his love story.

It's so awesome, I wish I could tie the author up and write forty or fifty chapters a day. I can't wait to see the plot of "The Last Lesson" and the Land of the Past. The expressions of those people will definitely be wonderful and jealous~

Pretty good. However, a person may not be able to accept some of the daily descriptions of some of the protagonists I mentioned earlier. However, I think these daily descriptions can better highlight the protagonist and these changes make it more reasonable for the protagonist to play games and the like later, but some people may not be able to accept it. Overall it's pretty good.

Good, the proportion of main comic plots and daily life is very even, and the protagonist does not have those bad family plots. Although there is a female employee who is several years older than the pornographic one, there is no ambiguous plot. It seems that there is a single female protagonist or there may be no female protagonist. Children, I was wrong. There may be no female protagonist. It depends on how the author writes it later.

How can I say that if I want to write comics, I should write comics and nothing else, but the author's description of daily life is also what I want to read. I really like it. How about you open one book about daily life and another about comics?

I originally saw the daily part mentioned in the review and thought it was a replacement book. It's not a cheesy urban novel, but it feels very good to read, even better than some so-called novels of this type. It's not the awkwardness and self-excitement of urban novels at all. The author also grasps the plot very well, and does not keep writing about daily life. He seriously promotes the collapse of the plot and describes the readers' feelings. Good luck to the author. Of course, it would be nice if there were less daily routines. After all, I still like to watch the progress of Honkai Impact plot and readers' feelings.

Describes the story of the civilization before Honkai Impact III in the form of comics. Looking forward to the subsequent Honkai Impact III games.

The book is very nice, the author's writing style is calm and deep, and the mind is peaceful. It is a rare masterpiece among the many refreshing articles about Tomato, which makes people feel fresh and new. The article uses emotional descriptions to describe the protagonist's psychology very well. But I hope to do better in the subsequent plot.

(Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly) (Crawling around brightly)

I am very much looking forward to what kind of expression the protagonist will have when he shows up. Will he have a face full of bitter gourds, eyes blazing, looking like he wants to rush to his house and stab him, and will he regret not sending him a blade before the author even came to him?

I quit the game after playing the last lesson, thinking about picking it up again in the future and continuing to enjoy it. When I saw a fan, I couldn't help but click in and read it, and then I came out with tears streaming down my face. I'm such a bitch [crying] [crying]

Although, it's quite enjoyable, I feel like the author is writing about himself, and it feels like this when he writes it. His love for painting, his family's lack of support, his loss of his first love, and returning to the past is like a parallel world, allowing his past self to make amends [eating melon]

The book is quite good, but if you are attracted by the title, you can jump a little bit. Daily life accounts for a large proportion. But the writing and plot are very good, and it's very comfortable to watch. The only drawback is that there are too few, open to breeding! [Sinister smile]

I skipped all the parts about the protagonist.

It would be better to have less emotional scenes O(∩_∩)O~~

Yes, the author can write at his own pace. Don't listen to them. Otherwise, you will find that there are more and more demands and they will become more and more dissatisfied. This is what an author in my book club said, and it is quite right.

I feel that the author has written very well about daily life, and has used environmental descriptions with ease, and created full-bodied characters in the real world in the book. (Apart from the title and some typos, this work is still good [love] [love] [love])

It's great, I really like this kind of sword-playing game plot.

The plot is not interesting enough. Can you shorten the plot to be more realistic? [Chigua]

No, I've read more than 10 chapters. How come it's like this after not reading it for a day?

I don't know how well the author knows Honken 2. It's best not to be like the clip I saw before, where Mei put on the god-killing armor for the first reunion in the underworld.

Finished the game, it hasn't been updated for a few days, so it turns out it's dead (pointing to the book) [I'm about to cry]

I placed more than 20 tickets near Beitun today. Dry!

Alas, it's so painful, I don't know when we'll meet again

Make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster, make it faster

It hurts, it hurts so much, more people must read this novel, it really hurts [crying]