HP: the Black Defense Professor from China Is 100 Million Points Strong

No, absolutely not, how can you put chili oil in tofu! ! !ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

The characters are vivid and the plot is interesting. I particularly like Jian Yun's character. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I can find a lot of foreshadowing. I feel that the ending will be unexpected (trying to do reading comprehension. Jpg) (I am only a primary school student, and the reviews are not good, so don't scold me [cry] [cry] [cry])

Overall, it's pretty good-looking. Although the protagonist is a male, it doesn't have the vulgar flavor like other HPs with a male perspective. It's just that it's a bit too fantasy later on. But overall, it's pretty good. I'm looking forward to the follow-up episodes.

It's a very good book. I'm halfway through it now. I feel like the rating is low. I'll give it five stars. The book as a whole is more daily oriented and has its own thing based on the original plot. I like this kind of narrative. The protagonist's character is a bit naughty, but at other times he is quite reliable. He is a normal person, and his interactions with friends and colleagues are normal. There is no weird feeling that makes people pick their feet. The brotherly relationship with Riddle is very comfortable to watch. This brother is not in vain, he is not rebellious, and he is a good boy. It's just that using that soul lamp is a bit too self-sacrificing. If there is no limit to the number of times, that's no problem. If the number is limited to 5 times, I seem to be ready to use it all. As the protagonist, I feel a little aggrieved. Of course, if the subsequent protagonist can have the ability to recruit souls without using this prop, that will be better. [You taste carefully] I haven't finished reading yet, so I'm just speculating. Old Tom's Yun Yao in the same period seems to be younger mentally and relies a lot on his brother, while Little Tom's Jian Yun in the same period is just chopping up melons and vegetables for the enemy. Could it be that during Yun Yao's period, Jian Yun didn't travel to the past, but Yun Yao became Jian Yun in chronological order but lost his memory? Originally, I guessed that Jian Yun used a time turner to go back in time and become Lao Tang's younger brother, but after seeing half of it, I felt it didn't seem like it anymore, so I leaned toward the current guess. I don't know if my guess was correct. The author's writing is so fascinating that I had to scratch my head now [Learned]

Wang Po sells melons, sells herself and boasts ಥ_ಥPlease review the book, the villain kneels down to thank you readers (｢･ω･)｢Hey

It is no exaggeration to say that this is the best HP fan in my heart. Of course I want to give it full marks, in my heart it deserves ten stars, but in order to prevent the magical removal rule of tomatoes, I have to endure the pain and squeeze one. I think I will always see it on my bookshelf and can read it at any time. It gave those regrets a perfect ending, and it saved the world in my heart. Jian Yun is the perfect protagonist in my heart. He has the ability, responsibility, responsibility, and the courage to enter the game, so that he can save everyone in this disaster and give them a good ending. Thank you author, thank you Jian Yun. Has the author published a physical book? Do you want to collect it?

I finally finished reading it, and I couldn't bear to leave it. Teacher, hurry up and start a new trap—— It's a very exciting story, and the writing is very good. The most difficult thing is that the integration of the self-contained world view and HP settings is relatively slippery. There is no strong sense of separation, and there is a logical line in it (you don't have to completely throw away your brain to read it) It can be felt that the author loves the characters in the original work very much (except for a certain pink toad). Each character is well portrayed and everyone has their own highlights (Good Ais Cult and GGAD) In the last few dozen chapters, the original protagonist was banished and the highlights were left to the original characters. It was really bold. (Of course, Jian Yun's return in the end was very impressive.) It was very enjoyable to watch. (Quietly) In fact, it was a bit frustrating to watch the Ministry of Magic part in the middle, but when I think about it carefully, it is logical and more conducive to the development of the plot. Besides, our Professor Jane did not suffer. Some readers in the comments section of The Final Battle said that they felt that the protagonist (Jian Yun) was dispensable. It may be that Jian Yun did not appear in those chapters. But his figure is everywhere. As Si Jiao said, the seeds planted by Jane have sprouted. Jian Yun's preparations and preparations all along were for the victory of the decisive battle. And I just love to see this kind of perfect collision between Chinese and Western cultures, flying swords, spells, formations, hot pot, tofu noodles... I just feel that the extras are not enough, and I also want to see the relationship between Si Jiao and Jian Yun (I want to knock... Cb is also very good)... Can we expect HP to have a cameo in the next book (Praying) Teacher, update soon... (Makes a hungry sound)

The score of 7.9 Is really low. This book can definitely be rated as 9 or so. The plot is very good and the relationship between the characters is also very well described. The author updates it very quickly. I don't feel like it is a eunuch. In short, it is very interesting and interesting to read.

In terms of perfection, OOC is very serious, but for the sake of everyone really being alive (the dead ones who lied to you are also resurrected [like]), it is a five-star novel. Unfortunately, some plots are more arbitrary and the advancement is not very rigorous. I can only give it three and a half stars. By the way, I support Snape's marriage with the protagonist for the sake of peace in the wizarding world and the world of immortality [OK]

On the whole, the characters created in this book are pretty good, and each of the original characters does not have too many bad characters. However, there are some places where the protagonist's behavior is a bit confusing, so I hope the author will correct the typos in the article after finishing the story, and think about how to improve the protagonist's character and behavior. This book is very well written, very warm in daily life, and it makes up for a lot of regrets. [Top post][top post][top post]

This book is so good, why is it rated so low? [Cry]

Very good-looking, will definitely be popular, save a butt

It's good to read. It's one of the few hp fanfics that can leave an impression on me. It's logical and has a correct outlook on things.

It's so good and interesting. I hope the author won't stop updating or give up the article. It's already very sad. Recently, many novels I read have been stopped. Please, please stick to it.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen Arianna resurrected.

Nice! ! ! It's more about daily life and saves a lot of people who are in trouble. The male protagonist is very strong, but it's not a dimension-reducing attack. The plot is also very interesting (I'm short of words💦, but this book really touched me!)

This is so beautiful. The plot is also very international, it is more about daily life, and it also has Chinese elements, which is very good, and the combination of the original work is also very appropriate, the number of words is also very large, the logic and perception are very strong, go for it, the author is great!

The content is good, but I need to update it quickly╰(‵□′)╯ I should be able to satisfy you, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes~ In just two days, I tied it. (Cautious, shivering)

Encourage me, the subject matter is very new and it is an unexpected way [Sending Hearts]

I really like this plot, it should be very good

So pretty! I really like the male protagonist's character.

The writing is good, and the perspective of the story structure is also very novel. The story is complete, and the actions of the original characters in the advancement of events are consistent with the characters' thinking patterns. Hopefully another book that follows the story will be of the same caliber.

It's a very nice fanfic. Every character in the author's works is very full and the details of the story are also great. It also has a happy ending. I highly recommend it and I'm looking forward to the following stories. I hope it will come soon.

It looks good. I don't speak much. I just think it looks good.

It's very interesting. The progress is a bit slow at the beginning but it doesn't affect it. It's very interesting [get it] [laughing]

It's quite good-looking, with novel ideas. Don't read the title to read the text. It's really good-looking. I think the only ones that can rival it in my mind are "Chinese-style Education" and "Traveling through Hogwarts with Game Resources"

Excellent novel with rigorous logic. The plot is compact, not sadistic, not vulgar. Fits my imagination. I like it very much and recommend it. This article ended on purpose. To be honest, I was very sad to leave it... I look forward to the next novel being as exciting as this one.

So far, it's very interesting. The protagonist is really a typical Chinese teacher, so cheers😊

Why can the author write so well? Please give me a tutorial [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

In a word: It's good to watch, but too many typings delayed me from continuing to watch.