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So far, it looks pretty good. The protagonist has upright views and is not indecisive in doing things. However, the protagonist is a bit young. I hope the protagonist can spend his adult life relatively smoothly. The pace is not too fast, which is pretty good. He can develop his sect with peace of mind. It's nice to watch.

@, What I want to say is all in the post where the author has something to say in your book circle. I hope you can reply to me. I also recommend that all those who read the comments first and then read the book can read this book. Here I will tell you the main situation of the book. This book is a slow-paced novel. Please pay attention to the slow pace! ! ! Then this book is a casual article about cultivating immortals. On top of that, it is about building your own sect from scratch (first, you will learn about your trustworthy friends (children don't have so many calculations, and like to go out in the upper left corner with calculations and calculations) (although the protagonist is a time traveler)) (The sect was established at this time, but it wasn't very decent. Let's guess why it wasn't decent.) After learning how to perform gas readings, he began to teach his own adults, and then he attracted the talents in the village (guys, guess why)) You need to see the specific situation for yourself. Also, the protagonists are children and they need time to grow up. I hope you can watch it patiently. The children will grow up later. And when we were young, didn't we also have a sense of justice because of the education at home?

I think it's quite interesting. It's a novel about building a sect in the context of ancient farming, about the infrastructure route, and it feels good to slowly build it up. Many novels just develop too fast and become boring. Come on, the author, I'll wait for you to have more [like posts]

It's quite good-looking, and the creativity is great. It's not the kind of traditional cultivation, nor is it the kind of writing about family members offering sacrifices to heaven. It seems quite warm and comfortable at the moment, but there are very few updates.

First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler. Although the IQ is not that of a six-year-old child, it is not that much better that he believes that two real six-year-old children will not spread the secret. Whether it's because of inadvertence or because of a need to show off, children can easily say things they shouldn't. What's more, the protagonist trusts two six- and seven-year-old children more than his own parents. It doesn't matter if it's anything else, but this is a matter of life and death.

Very nice \(//∇//)\ This system conceived by the author is very good. It analyzes and adds creation, which is similar to mediating creation. I am looking forward to the following content. One thing that is not good is that cultivating immortals is basically to improve your level and increase your lifespan. The author sets that learning a small spell can increase your lifespan by one year. The difference between the two is too big.

So the protagonist is preparing to turn the world of cultivation into a fantasy world. After all, in general cultivation, one first practices Qi and then learns spells, while the protagonist learns spells first and uses the spells to feed back his cultivation [what] How can I put it, the subject matter is very good, but the protagonist in the early stage is too arrogant, and he started recruiting disciples before he even had the power to protect himself.

It's very comfortable to watch. There's not too much intrigue, and there's no such thing as a person who would rather harm the world than hurt me. It has a warm feeling, which is much better than many family stories.

4 Points for creativity, 1 point for logic

From the beginning, you can directly solve the spells that are as big or small as you want. Fortunately, the spells are not magical powers, and they consume mana, otherwise it would be just like cheating. After all, Fa Tian Xiang Earth has great supernatural powers. It does not mean that it has only grown in size, but its mass has increased year-on-year. As for its physical strength, it is ordinary to carry mountains and chase the moon. It is estimated that other people's attacks cannot break through the defense. If you poke it lightly with your hand, it will crush people to death with the force of a mountain.

Copper coin tree-rich in copper coins Spirit Stone Tree-rich in spirit stones

It took two days to finish the two words "Awesome!", And the plot has developed to the present magical prelude to the world of immortality and has gradually unfolded, making it more and more exciting. In addition, the author has written the spells so well that he has never really been to the world of immortality [laughing evilly]. I really like these spells in the novel. They are not just like other immortal novels that only have various attacks. Instead, they have a magical and magical feeling like Harry Potter. It is in line with the appearance of the spells in my dreams instead of just being used for fighting and killing. It is really great, I love it! ! ! The author quickly writes ah ah ah ah [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

Very nice farming article. The idea is very good. The main reason is that his fingers are a bit big, but they are average. But it's very unique. I feel like this has great development prospects. I can do at least more than 1,000 shots.

Come on, work hard to write well

Overall, it's okay, I can control the rhythm of things, and I won't mess with it for no reason. It's just so that I can develop safely in the future. If I have enough ability, I can solve it. If I can't solve it, there's nothing I can do. We'll see if the protagonist will have a head-on confrontation later.

It is already very good in this kind of subject matter, and I hope it can be more exciting in the future.

Very good √ Cultivation in the village is very unique [Like] Precious friendship and family affection, warm daily articles [OK]

It's a very novel method and looks very easy.

The author doesn't seem to have made it up, as if he has traveled back from somewhere. There are many small details and the design is very reasonable.

Not enough! I really like this rural atmosphere of exploring and cultivating immortality. I am a humble person, but I go against the will of heaven, stick to my heart, and help others and myself. It's not a cool article, but it's refreshing enough. I have seen the latest chapter. The plot is not bloody yet, and there are no big loopholes in the logic. It is worth reading. Currently watching the latest chapter 250, real comments [blowing kiss]

I don't think I can help more book lovers by writing book reviews that are true, objective, multi-dimensional, clear in structure, and substantial in content.

I just like reading this type of novels

Strong ability to innovate. Understand all things

The writing method is novel and refreshing, the author continues!

The writing is very childlike. I especially like the one about getting smaller and building a little house. It's really good. I saw Chapter 100 a few months ago and wanted to keep it for a while. But I forgot to put the book on the bookshelf and couldn't find it. Now that I have found it, there are more than 200 chapters. It's just that the writing style is a bit immature.

The logic is smooth, and the characterization is not particularly surprising. It is an enjoyable novel.

There are some poisonous points, but not more than one or two (for me). It is suitable for slow-paced book lovers. For slow-paced book lovers, it may be a bit fast. The content is relatively good. The reverse help in the first few chapters may be a bit silly.

Okay, keep it up, I imagine going to the immortal's cemetery and analyzing the things inside. Don't stop updating, this book is definitely going to be a hit

The stream is long and has a light and warm story about cultivating immortals. Not only the protagonist has creativity, everyone has their own contribution. I like this kind of cultivating immortality very much.