
Immortality: from Low Martial Arts to Prehistoric Times
长生:从低武杀到洪荒
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 284k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Male-Channel Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
15Reads
136Chapters
2Listens
59.7kReads · all time
Gu Long has nothing to write about. What makes him invincible is neither human nor martial arts, only the aura of the protagonist. Except for the protagonist, everyone else can die or cannot survive.
You traveled across the heavens, from the Sentimental Swordsman to the Qin Qin Ji. I find it baffling. What is your main plot? There are a lot of scenes, a lot of dialogue, a lot of narration, it's just inexplicable and a mess.
It's outdated to follow Gulong's painting style. Painting tigers is not the opposite of dogs. It's all about jumping and I can't stand it.
It's a mess, and the protagonist's character is not likeable.
I mean, it's just a copy of The Swordsman. It's better to read the original work. The protagonist is really a shame as a time traveler.
The time traveler is so into the drama
Boring, pretending
The writing is very good, but there are too many gender issues interspersed, which makes it a bit aesthetically tired. It could be better with more plot and less romance. Rate it four stars, keep one ⭐️ for fear of you being proud.
Not bad, a bit interesting
Well written by Gu Longfeng
I hate the riddler
Xun Qin Ji is boring and doesn't match.
This writing is like eating boiled cabbage, bland and tasteless