My Farm Has Become Real

The setting is not new, but the writing is pretty good. In fact, I shouldn't comment, because there are relatively few chapters, which are not enough to comment more objectively. But let me make some suggestions. First: Obtain items, introduce the functions of items and how to use them, this should be necessary. For example, the protagonist has a blue spirit flower seed. Even if it is a seed, you should explain what it will be like. What does it do? How to use it? Otherwise, there is no introduction at all, why would the protagonist spend so much time planting? Second: Collect supplies, whether it is a residential building or a large supermarket. You have to collect supplies. Regardless of whether they are useful or not, you can probably sell them to the system to get some coins. Including the heroine said that she herself was short of cotton-padded clothes and quilts when winter came, so she could still collect them. Unless the author plans to turn on the manufacturing system and collect materials to make it himself. Third: Core, what is the core of this book? Fighting monsters? Looking for supplies or farms? These are three different writing focuses. /Fighting Monsters writes about fighting scenes and team building to find monsters. / If you are looking for supplies, you should focus on describing the team formation and exploration and collection scenes. /If it is a farm, it should focus on describing the female owner's farming, farm management, and farm upgrading. Choose two out of three. If those two points can be completely written, the novel will be popular in the future and not collapse in the later stage.

Does the author's heroine have CP? Is it Dumei? @Lingwei who likes sea red beans

The plot is very good now, I like it very much, but there is a small flaw: why there are so few (╥_╥) [Request for updates] Dear author, please listen to my wishes, okay [Request for updates]

The novel is relatively short, but the imagination is good. You can continue reading. Experiencing so many game worlds is like a dream, and life is really like a dream. However, the strong, optimistic and sensible heroine is really good.

Super pretty! However, I originally thought it was a lord story or a farming story, but it turned out that I didn't plant much land, and the upgrades were slower than others. The lords didn't exist. Fortunately, there were two friends who could protect the heroine. I'm halfway through it now, but I still don't understand the meaning of the farmer's golden finger. Is it for growing blue medicine? It's a pity it's unfinished

This book is super nice

The subject matter is good and novel. I like this kind of novel very much.

It's wonderful, very beautiful, keep it up.

Looks good, but a bit short~

The subject matter is good, I look forward to the growth of the protagonist