Reborn as a Lolita, I, the Most Powerful Person, Choose to Be a Loser

It can be seen that this is a self-written article by the author. The setting is good, but some aspects have big problems. The plot is not well prepared, the characters appear too suddenly, and the communication between the characters is also a bit illogical, a bit like the irrational Japanese style. The protagonist setting problem (personal understanding) The setting of high IQ and ruthless quotient is very interesting, but the performance is very strange. I thought that such a character is: outspoken, rational analysis and then drawing conclusions. The way it is shown (probably like the Ex-Machina in the game life, but because it is a human and has more characteristics on this basis) now gives the impression that it is a stupid lolita with advanced technology. The insertion of the protagonist group is also very sudden and the writing is too hasty (too many appearances at once), which makes it difficult to establish the character image. The overall writing style is Japanese (probably) plus the above series of topics, no matter how you look at it, it feels awkward However, as a student, it is great to decide to write a novel and stick to it. Although there are some problems, it is not difficult to see your efforts. I have also tried to write a novel and really tried it before I know how difficult it is to write well. So I hope that these so-called things I have proposed can help you. After all, I am not a professional and I cannot clearly point out the problems and provide suggestions. Come on! I wish you can persevere, your writing will get better and better, and you can perfectly convey your story through the story [Sending Hearts]

A book disguised as a science fiction world, Ganges Beaver

It can be determined that the protagonist has died psychologically. The negative buff of the protagonist directly turned him into a real stupid loli. If there are no kind people to help, it will only become worse.

I still want to see it! ! ! (Jumped into the book and was crushed to death by the book) I think the v2 version is better than the v1 version! , Please update the author (dark crawling) (knock out a random book friend) (throw it into the book) (waiting for update)

The content is very interesting, but too short

The plot changes are pretty good, I'm just waiting for the author to finish them.