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It's okay, the concept of the protagonist is quite interesting, and the plot is okay, but if the plot can be made a little more ups and downs, it will feel like it is neither up to down nor down. The rest is the details of the character creation, and everything else is okay. Also, the character of the characters in the novel is not dead, don't be so rigid ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ, it creates a fixed impression. Personal suggestion is that you can try to add an active atmosphere to the protagonist, a sand sculpture or a pistachio-type character that drives the plot (not counting the master and the spiritual weapon, they do not have the role of activating the tone of the article). This can also alleviate some of the unreasonable feelings of the protagonist when walking through the plot.

So pretty

Well, it's really well written.

Come on, the author is great, it looks great [Adoration][Admiration]

I really like Tushan Xiuxiu

You can still watch it, yes you can watch it

It's so beautiful. I like it so much. I've shared it. Cheers, author.

Very nice, good luck to the author

Come on, come on, come on!

It's beautiful, but the author is so awesome, could you please not finish it... I want to read their story again... [Crying] [crying] [crying]