绝区零：从扮演摩拉克斯开始无敌

In one word, cool! Worth a look 1: While other Zetsuzu Zero fans are still immersed in the harem, talking about love, satisfying their fantasies and not living hard, this book is trying hard to write the character of the character itself (I won't mention the name, basically the ones with more words) 2: So far, the setting and route of this book are very complete without too much description. 3: The only shortcoming is Thai Marubi (just kidding, the current shortcomings are too few words, and too many special sentences are repeated when trying to create a character. The suggestion here is that you can use other behaviors and expressions to create the character, and you don't have to use the same one all the time) 4: This is also a very important point. I hope the author can control the scale and not write emotional lines blindly. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't write them, so as not to ruin the character. Needless to say, I just wish this book will get better and better [Chigua]

This book is one of the few good books about Zero Zone that I found in Tomato. I hope the author can continue to write more.

Although I don't like pretending to be a pig and eating tigers, this book is pretty good. I just prefer to watch the kind of protagonists who kill everyone and are treated with respect wherever they go. I don't like the kind of books where they are treated as ordinary people and weak people everywhere. However, the plot is good and I can continue reading it. Well, after reading this novel for so long, this one is quite frustrating among the novels about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. When I read The Dragon before, I felt that Lu Mingfei was aggrieved, but it was nothing compared to this book. The protagonist fights with the boss, and the people nearby say that the protagonist is dead without seeing anything. They also don't forget to mention how weak the protagonist is. The protagonist is obviously stronger than everyone else, but the whole world thinks he is the weakest. When he is touched by a random person, others think that the protagonist is dead. They are still there and want to avenge the protagonist. In fact, the skin of the protagonist's defense is not broken by that move, and the protagonist can kill him easily. Added again: I don't understand, why do you have to work so hard to pretend to be weak, even if you just show a little strength appropriately? The protagonist has done so many great things, but people around you still think that the protagonist is the weakest. Is it necessary to conceal it so deliberately?

JueZuZero is the first novel that starts at its peak. I read it and found a lot of five-star reviews. I really want to reward it.

It's nice to watch, but he's clearly playing Morax, but it's written about Zhongli? Morax can be seen as the Demon God of Rock who was arrogant but a little stable when he was young, while Zhongli seems to be a stable but without values ​​​​and wants to retire. (No malicious intent)

Very nice. 1. Zhongli also has no OOC, and the presence of the later system will be much weaker. 2. The relationship between the characters in Juequ Zero is also very clear, and there is no deliberate ambiguity (this kind of Jue District Zero is really rare [face covering]). 3. The plot connects smoothly, and you won't feel awkward when reading the text.

It's very interesting. I'm very interested. Please update 1,000 words per minute, or 100,000 words a day [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's very good in terms of storytelling, especially the setting about Zhongli. It's not like some fan fiction books, which just follow the three skills in the game and don't care about the control of language elements in the setting. This book is very well written in this aspect. Compared with similar Zetsu Zone Zero fan books, the quality is very good and deserves a five-star rating. Of course, if I were to read it, the rating of this book would be around 9.2, Which is more appropriate. Mainly because there are almost no good Zetsu Zone Zero fan books now.

After watching Tomato, I personally feel that this is the most comfortable Zetsu Zero fanfic I have ever watched. Other protagonists who have the ability to infiltrate the game steal the limelight of Zetsu Zero characters, making the roles of Zetsu Zero characters seem like passers-by. Or some of the characters directly become the protagonist's pendant, and simply push all the dangers to the protagonist, and he is responsible for issuing commissions and begging the protagonist to solve problems. But this book, while the protagonist is very popular, also brings the original characters to life. They will be active in their respective fields. The protagonist is just their insurance and will play its role at the most critical moment. The character's personality doesn't have much OOC, and Tsing Yi's jingle can be written well. Well, this is the only fandom in the circle of fans I've read that can write Tsing Yi's jingle. It can be seen that the author did write it after carefully understanding the game characters. This is actually quite rare in these fan fictions that are so popular nowadays, especially in the circle of Tomato. Com. The readers who read the most fan fiction are actually not those who just like to see how the protagonist is in the limelight. You must know that the protagonist's limelight is everywhere in the Internet literary circle. What everyone likes to see is the interaction between the protagonist and various characters. To write this well, the character portrayal and activity of the characters are essential. It is not just the protagonist who takes care of all the important plots that will satisfy the fan readers. Otherwise, what do you want to watch? Can't you just read any original work in the online literature circle?

It is quite a good work. At the beginning, the daily portrayal of Elidu was very detailed, and the details of each character were very restored. In the middle period, when it started to be linked with Teyvat, the interaction between the characters of Zero Zone Zero and Genshin Impact was very interesting. Later, when I looked at the chapter names, I thought I was going to write it down, but I never expected that it was connected. The scenes of the two final battles are also grand enough. If I want to talk about the shortcomings, there are too many characters in the later period. When describing some scenes, I will mention all the characters, which is a bit suspicious of naming.

It's a very good book. Although I don't play JueZuZero very often, I still read the fanfic. This book is a good transitional book for me, who has a much higher concentration of Genshin Impact than other concentration of Mijia. The following part of Collapse of Iron is also very attractive.

The remarkable thing about this book is the characters, the way they deal with things, and the timeline of each event. The logical relationships are handled very well. There is almost no boring point in the plot. The development of the story will make people unexpected and expect it. The author is really very detailed. Please support me and hope it will not be unfinished.

It really shocked me! The writing is delicate and the plot is coherent without any glitches (just not enough to watch). It's no problem to read it with your brain in mind, but it's even more fun to watch it without your brain! [Laughs] At present, it seems that it is definitely a T0 level among Zero Two Creation, especially in terms of character maintenance, it is definitely top-notch! I see that now there is no sense of dissonance at all, and the details of the scenes, dialogues, and life aspects are also vivid! Ah? It turns out to be Teacher Wan Geng~ Then it's okay~ (But I still have to mention one thing. Articles with many settings added by the author themselves are more likely to be backstabbed. This is not the first time that Teacher Wan has been backstabbed, so I hope there will be no more discordant voices in the comment area [sending heartfelt messages])

Very good, the subject matter is novel and the writing is very good. It's just that sometimes I feel that Su Li's performance of Zhongli has some problems. It lacks some of Zhongli's calmness, but has more curiosity that should belong to a normal person. Overall, it is very good-looking.

This book is pretty good so far, and it can be considered a good fan novel in Zero Zone Zero. I don't know if the author is going to write a longer ending or a shorter ending? If you plan to code more words and then finish it, it is recommended that you update it more slowly, just like the current two updates a day, and write more about daily life between the main lines, so as to prevent backstabbing. If I wanted to write a shorter ending, I would just write it as it is now, and just pay attention to the actions and language of the protagonist when he plays Zhongli.

It looks good, I love to read it, I update it more often, I update it like crazy, and I update it quickly. This book uses a variety of rhetorical techniques, and through a series of stories about the protagonist Su Li playing Morax and everyone, it vividly depicts the image of Su Li who is majestic, safe, and elegant.

This book is already ahead of its time among Genshen fanfics. Even if it is a bit stuck in the early stages, I don't think it's anything. Well, you can read it. But some people may not be able to stand it, but people like me who have read a lot of books have a pretty strong ability to accept it. However, there are still flaws. For example, in the early stage, the protagonist was obviously very strong, but was overly weakened by the author. The second point is that the author should not let the readers choose the direction of the subsequent plot. This is actually disrespectful and unfair to the readers. Because it is left to the readers to choose, then the minority can only obey the majority. You have satisfied the preferences of the majority, but what about the minority? Therefore, readers should not be allowed to choose the direction of the plot, but the author needs to make his own choice. But overall it's a good book, but I've only read more than 200 chapters. I don't know if the plot will collapse in the future, but I hope it won't collapse.

Pretty good. It's about men's time travel. Own the system. Play as Morax, look for the birdcage, meet Amby by chance, come out calmly, join the Cunning Rabbit, and start a life of debt. Pretty good. The update rate is two chapters a day. Normally give 4 stars first.

I don't know how to evaluate it. Anyway, it's just two words: it's good-looking. Also, is there no heroine? It's okay to have multiple female protagonists, but never have a single female protagonist. If you really want to have a single female protagonist, it's recommended to have only one female protagonist, Billy [smile][smile][smile]

The writing is good, but you need to recognize the combat ability of the character created by the game. No matter how weak he is, he can fight alone. To get an ordinary bad reputation, I think the average evil-browed girl is between level 7 and 9. If a character can be cornered by more than a dozen people, If Luoli is defeated, then the Investigation Bureau and the Public Security Bureau will not face the attack of Hollow Zero Zero. The game describes that there is greater pressure. In the game, hg levels 1 to 10 are level 10, which is the level of the Dead End Butcher, and levels 7 to 9 are ordinary notoriety. Also, Tsing Yi is a robot. He has no attributes or hot weapons and is unlikely to be damaged quickly. In terms of strength, it is impossible for the cave robber's weapon to knock the weapon away. After all, he can fall from a very high place without any minor injuries. The cave robber's weapon cannot damage Tsing Yi's body within a short period of time, even if he is not an ordinary cave robber. , There is still no way to beat Qing Yi, and sneak attacks are useless. After all, she is a robot. If she does not hit the transmission device and energy device such as the information processor, she can basically fight you even if the energy is not used up. In the end, except for robots, she cannot use attribute energy on her own. It depends on the power of equipment to have attribute power.

I follow it every night. Although there is a certain gap between it and the real Zhongli and it is not that perfect, your articles still deeply attracted me for half a month. I read two of your articles before going to bed every day before I can fall asleep peacefully. Thank you for your unbridled imagination and hope to continue to work hard.

What do you want to do when you are driving and singing? I have seen the clothes that can be renewed at the beginning of school and I am very happy. Every time I open it, the little girl from Huaguoshan has a good sense of layering. I continue to watch it. It is not enough to drive. It is convenient to go to the subway entrance and use it directly.

This book is one of the best fanfics I have ever read! ! ! I really recommend it, the plot is relatively smooth, it is a fanfic that I can read in Weisan, and the writing is also top-notch! [Shy] At this point in the plot, Zhongli from the original world has not appeared, and he almost disappeared when Su Li traveled through time. There is reason to suspect that Su Li is actually Zhongli! It's just that I have temporarily lost my memory, and the system is just an opportunity! The character creation is also great! ! ! It feels alive! Ambi! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Broken sound) Finally! ! ! ! Author, please read more, I am willing to uninstall all other book friends Genshin Impact and Zero Zone Zero for you [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

It looks very cool, come on, I hope the harem story, please, author, come on! What's the point of watching if there's not a female lead? If there's not a female lead, I'll give up. I hope that if I wear a divine costume, I can get a divine costume soon.

Evaluation: It's good in the early stage, but you need to get used to it in the middle stage, and it's also good in the later stage. Complaint: It's a pity that the author wrote it too early, otherwise according to the current plot of Genshin Impact and the author's setting, the travelers must know the Star God, what the Star Core is, and even know about the Star Dome Train. After all, they come from outside the universe.

The writing style of this novel is very beautiful♪Every sentence is carefully crafted♪Every paragraph is full of emotion♪The author uses various rhetorical techniques such as metaphors♪personification♪symbols, etc., Making the whole novel full of poetry and artistry♪

The writing is very good. From 1 to 150 years ago, it was all about daily life, but the writing was not boring and slow, but the writing was very interesting. After the Ruoduo Dragon King, the writing started to be about fighting, but the Teyvat people who passed through it were very interesting and very well written.

The description and imitation of Su Li's character are also very good in role-playing novels. The author's intentions and the plot are well-founded. He also writes the true temperament of the emperor. It can be seen that the author understands this character carefully. Reward

Although I haven't played the Zero Zero Zone, I still think it's quite interesting. The content is also very rich and full of joy. I still want to see Su Li's expression when everyone knows that he is the master of the elements. I must update it here. Although there are three pictures a day, it is still not enough to watch.

It's useless to say more. I like the characters and the story types just because I'm afraid of being stabbed by the official. I'm a little cautious. Don't read the three chapters of the daily update. The story is a little less. It takes several days to push a line. But it's actually not bad. There is hope. It's not the kind of interruption. I'm adding a follow-up review, no matter what the usual reviews are, it still deserves 5 stars.