Cultivation: One Draw Every Day

After reading more than 20 pictures, I feel that it could be made into an animated novel, and it is very comfortable to watch. It's good to write it slowly, but when you see the clone, it's a bit outrageous. Although you said that the clone is a soul, you can't help but feel uncomfortable. . Overall, the characters written later are more agile, but I still feel like something is missing. It becomes a bit of a hodgepodge in the later stages. Although it's okay, it's still a hodgepodge.

Not bad, it's well written, and it suits my taste quite well. Keep it up, you've already been recommended, and it can get better and better. Too many typos, one star deducted

There are a lot of typos, but not too many. Can the lottery system be used to draw the system? For example, chat groups, exchange malls, civilized creations, creative workshops, module additions... It's nice to have an enemy and destroy them quickly. It's not handled cleanly, but it's not the protagonist's fault. It's a bit reckless, but I have the resurrection point and the confidence, so it's not too reckless.

The writing is very good, but can you follow up quickly? Not enough. It has been collected and has the potential to become a big hit.

If not for any other reason, the system of many children and many blessings appeared in the end, although it is a castrated version.

It's pretty good. The plot seems reasonable so far, but it's a bit off topic when it comes to the chat system.

Well, it's very good, please update it! 😎😎😎

Just so so, you can take a look if you are bored.

It looks okay, but the skill of summoning the mythical beast has never been used. It inherits attributes at 220%. This is not a natural human shield.

The plot is coherent, one star is missing to make you proud