Started as the Champion of the Dutch Team

I have recently read the best novel about a protagonist who plays football. The protagonist has ideals, talents, golden fingers, plans and means. In fact, I have never really liked watching Chinese or Chinese-American football plots, because inevitably there are always many authors who know the plot of the YY national team. Unless this is a one-on-one game, otherwise under the current environment and national conditions, if your YY national football team wins the championship and achieves good results, I think it is better than the YY player who plays football is a superman, picking 11 against 11, but this looks like the same It's not interesting at all, it's completely distorted, and I don't like it. I always feel that no one in the current national football team is worthy of winning the championship, even in the novel. Some of the author's thoughts are very interesting. I personally think it is very deep and resonant. I hope everyone can live up to their time and strive for the top when they wake up. Su Xun only studied hard when he was 27 years old. The earliest time to plant a tree was ten years ago, and now, come on, there is still no one who has surrendered to the world!

It's well written and has a good rhythm. You don't need to write an invincible flow, just improve slowly. Average 3 goals per game? It's so fake [laughing and crying] All I can say is that the more you write, the more fake it becomes. You can either add points and forget it if you win. You write the opposite side so well that you make comebacks every day?

It is also relatively friendly to readers who don't understand football. I simply like career advancement stories and am following this author's second book. There are few emotional lines and almost no female roles. I can basically ignore it, so female readers can also read it. There are some internal jokes in the football circle, but many of the comments have explanations. If you don't know how to skip them, it will not affect the plot. Although the protagonist has a cheat, he still needs to put in corresponding efforts, and the look and feel is better.

The writing is very real and beautiful. He is not the kind who is amazing at the beginning without any attributes. He is also not the only support in the team. He is a C. The author also gives a chance and wants to see Sun Yu play in AC Milan [laughs][laughs] I also started reading from the author's internal version of the book, which is also very interesting. [Understood][Understood]

Jia Fu, Blue Fox, Red Army, these six words define Sun Yu's club career.

Come on guys come on

If the elder brother doesn't want to code, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. That's right. The elder brother is weak and needs a lot of rest. The younger brother urges the elder brother like this. It is the younger brother's fault. It hurts the elder brother's body. The younger brother is also very distressed. However, no matter how painful the younger brother is, the elder brother must also renew. Are you right? Brother!!

There are some minor issues, but they are all acceptable. It is much better than those that have certain attributes at full level from the beginning.

You can write it! You can be ranked first among Tomato novels about football.

Another good book, I have to catch up again [shy]

Makes sense, not bad.

It's pretty good. It's not about the national football team.

Sun Ke, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

I always feel that the end is not the end. The more I write, the better! But overall it's okay. Come on!

Overall it's okay, but the ending is too rushed

The author's characterization has improved compared to the previous book, but I didn't understand the transfer of small teams. Football novels are an extension of football culture. Even if fans don't have a home team, there will be a few teams that they like. It's very reasonable in YY. The small teams don't bring in traffic (other than that, there's nothing else. Free novels will be five stars as long as they are not poisonous)

The overall feeling is that there is not much description of the game, but more information and knowledge introduction. However, it is still a playable football article, but it ended suddenly at the end, so I could have continued writing.

Pretty good, don't be misled by the ratings

The author's writing is good, and the plot concept is okay, but there are too many expositions, which affects the smoothness of the novel.

Come on, follow the story and get stronger, run young man [laughing and crying]

I caught up on it from the last one. Good luck to the author. I hope there will be more updates every day.

It's a pretty good book, but the score is low and the heroine is missing.

Well written, keep up the good work!

It's a pretty good book, but suddenly it was cut short [face covering]

It shouldn't be such a low score,

After reading it haha ​​😄 please give me a good review!

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Very exciting and beautiful

The article is not very long, but it is very exciting!

Okay, but it ends too quickly