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The only shortcoming I feel is that it would be better to give the male protagonist a tracking function, but Otherwise, if the murderer can't even be found, what's the point of beating him? No, no, why should there be a female protagonist? Can't the male protagonist be beautiful alone? Besides, this is the kind of novel that punishes evil and promotes good. It doesn't feel suitable to add a female protagonist (mainly I still like novels without female protagonists). Personal opinion

Combat power increases relatively quickly, right and wrong are clearly defined, and punishments for crimes are extensive, simple, direct and fast. There is a plot of giving away a girl. The protagonist knows that he does not like the other party, but does not take the initiative to make it clear when he knows that the other party likes him. His behavior goes beyond the scope of friends. There is a problem of unclear boundaries between men and women. Except for the above poisonous points, the overall enjoyment is medium, the plot is good, and the logic is clear.

It looks good. I hope the protagonist can also develop the Mo Linyuan organization and fight against the wind. There is still something wrong with my mentality. When you are powerful, you must learn to help others, because your power is also borrowed. When you feel powerful, let yourself go. You still have to distinguish between good people and bad people. Don't look too closely. There are too many poisonous points. It was okay at the beginning. Do you know why those masterpieces are so powerful? It's because the protagonist treats good people and innocent people like a spring breeze, and kills guilty people decisively. Relevant information should be stated before the contract, otherwise he is just an evil ghost who wants to live for a long time. This kind of novel is just a piece of cake, and cannot be tolerated.

Not bad. The heroine is written relatively well. She appears less often and is not that disturbing. She is as unknown as Empress Mu. It is similar to Ji Elegy in Body Ghost. Overall, it is comfortable to watch. Although I haven't rated it yet, I hope it will be higher. I am motivated. To be honest, the author also needs to eat when writing. The writing style needs to be improved.

Except for the little girl at the beginning, it has been fun since then

I give myself a five-point rating, right?

Overall, the author is okay.

In order for you not to starve to death, the bookshelf is added and five stars are given! [Smile]

This novel has the same name as the author of this novel.

Not bad, good, come on

The writing was okay, I actually skipped through more than 70 chapters!

The protagonist decisively kills the villains [Like] Come on, author

It's very good-looking. Except for the characterization of the heroine at the beginning, there are no bad points so far. Now that the heroine is stronger than the hero, she can finally have a soft meal

It's a pure and refreshing article with a fast pace. It's really enjoyable, but it doesn't have polished details. I can only say that it's not worth reading for a long time when I'm short of books.

It still feels too kind.

Oh, you wrote well😊

Isn't it stagnant water but also cloudy? !

Not bad, pretty good

The author is very nice. I like this book very much.

The plot progression is very reasonable and suits my taste. The writing is good and the characters make me feel like myself.

The protagonist is so cool. He should be even more powerful in the later stages. I'm really looking forward to it.

It looks good, it looks good, please give it a try, author.

The plot is fascinating and becomes more and more attractive as you go on.

This is beautiful and deserves five stars. I hope the author will continue to do so.

The writing is good and the plot is compact. It is a rare masterpiece and must be given five stars.

I wish I could have a clone skill

It's worth recommending, it has foreshadowing, and it feels generally pretty good. As long as it doesn't end badly, it should be a very good book.

Students who like to watch decisive killings can join the trap! If you have a weak heart, please watch with caution

The characters are distinct and the story has a compact structure. Recommended