The Martial World’s Death Warrant

The work is basically based on the female protagonist. The roles of the male protagonist, the cave master, and the cold king of hell are separated into three parts. The early stage is both Jianghu and fantasy (it is the mirror of the universe 😂 and it does not play its intended role). In the middle and later stages, there are court and house fights? (The senior sister is a Jianghu person but chooses to live as a harem) The ending becomes a Jianghu affair again. It can be seen that the author has worked very hard to write a slightly longer novel, but the rhythm of this story is still a bit slow. . . It's crowded, overall it's pretty good, but there are some places where I can see that the author is stuck. The logic is not broken, but it just doesn't feel profound. The story line and structure are also clear and clear, and the details are not interesting. Maybe I think every character is so average that I don't think they are outstanding. There is no advantage over anyone. When everyone is special, everyone is not special 🍉 So For each character, there is no comparison of who is the key character (except for the main heroine). Although the ending of BE is rare, it is not impossible. After reading the author's ending speech, this choice of BE may express the author's own mood 😂 I guess, come on author, good works are created slowly, and there will always be people who like it. I look forward to your new work! ❤️

I read the comments and said that both the male and female protagonists died in the ending, and then I jumped to the ending halfway through. The author's writing style in the first part was funny and easy, and I wanted to follow it, but the later ones were not so attractive. It's a pity that the female protagonist died together with the second female lead. The increasing number of emotional scenes between men and women is good. It would be better if the female protagonist's psychology and description of the male protagonist's feelings are deepened~~

I like the character of the heroine, and the plot at the beginning is also very attractive, but the rebellion on Cold Spring Island in the later period feels a bit sudden. After all, they were still in love with each other in the early stage? But overall it's still good. I prefer the second male lead to the male lead. He pays silently without asking for anything in return. The male lead feels that he has won in terms of status. I hope that future works will be more exciting and complete.

As expected of a sandbox novel, I laughed from beginning to end 😄, the heroine is a straight woman, it amused me to death, she is super pretty

Really good-looking

I didn't read much so I quickly rated it. The author's writing is very good and not verbose. So far, I really like Leng Yan Wang 🤦. It's a pity that he's not the male protagonist.

Why is the ending so unsatisfactory? Can the heroine and the hero be resurrected? 😢

It's good to watch, but the ending is a little sad. The heroine's words are frank and funny.

A super exciting book! Big cheers for the author!