Another World ***************

I hope the author can live a peaceful and happy life. I see that you wrote about bullying as if you have experienced it, so give me a hug [love]

Give it a 5 and start your critical review: 1. No, bro, your protagonist only has a half-handed sword and is not an orthodox two-handed sword. Did you eat the shield so you don't have it (there is obviously a shield that can block spells, but ordinary wooden shields are not expensive if you don't have money). 2. Is the helmet a halo suppressor for the protagonist? Oh, it turns out that the protagonist doesn't even have an aura, so why not give him a helmet (preferably one with a face shield, if you don't have enough money, you can get a chainmail headgear) 3. Is the protagonist's throwing ability sealed? Even if he doesn't use throwing axes/throwing spears/fire oil bottles/spell props, he must at least bring some handy rocks. Nothing else, I'll make it up later

I was confused, but I couldn't understand the plot of the vicious female supporting character in the early stage who had a secret crush on the male protagonist. Later, the black drow elf was really good as the eldest wife, and it was so satisfying. Long ears are the best!

It's a pretty good Western fantasy novel. I felt a little frustrated before getting to Claudie, the main female protagonist. Also, the length of the early chapters of the two female protagonists was a bit too overwhelming for the male protagonist. Although it was obvious that she had a crush on the male protagonist, she felt a little uncomfortable when it came to the extra chapters. (Personal opinion, harmless) Generally speaking, it is highly recommended [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

I rarely comment, but I mostly give negative reviews, but I found this book to be very detailed. I read it all night and it still hasn't lost its power. Although I have just gotten into it, I feel that if it is written like this, I feel that I will not be able to read books written by other people in the future. Suggestion, the details can be more free, such as the inexplicable corpse bones on the branches on the roadside, and there can be more general categories of weapons. Just write it normally. Suggestions are just suggestions. I still like the unknown to be more immersive. Come on [Blow kiss]

The front is a little depressing, but the back is pretty nice, hehe Seese

Come on, I actually feel pretty good after getting through the first 25 chapters or so, but I feel like I'm going crazy with too many words. I hope there will be less crazy words later on. Come on!

The style is rather strange, a bit crazy but not very crazy, but it just feels a bit interesting.

It's pretty cool. It's a bit frustrating at first, but it's still fun afterwards.

Western Fantasy Harem, the early stage is a bit depressing and the text is confusing, but the plot of the later story is reasonable and exciting, which is reasonable considering that the author is a novice. It tells the story of an adventurer who constantly fights monsters and experiences various adventures to continuously improve himself. The overall evaluation is a little below half fairy grass. The previous articles are a bit discouraging.

Not bad, intriguing

Very pretty, very pretty

Admire the author's perseverance

There is something wrong with the economic system, but there are no other major problems.

When I read the first chapter of this book, my expression was the same as when I first saw Pop and Pipi.

Support, hhhhh, the author generates electricity purely with love

The plot is okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch this after reading too many cool stories [laughter]

Taihao chopped off Dian Dian and liked it very much

It's so good. I've read this novel before, but was put off by the cover and title. Then I came back and found it's very good. Author, how do you insist on writing more than 700 chapters? I have been reading since you wrote more than 50 chapters, and within a few months, you have reached more than 700 chapters.

The content is quite rich, much more interesting than the running accounts written by some children🌹 Come on, meow

The beginning is very discouraging, so take your time and read it. I've read too many cool articles, so I'll look for something sad to read [Thinking]

It's a casual adventure story about another world, and it's very good. [Sinister smile]

It's really good-looking, but if you don't like this genre, you should be careful.

Although the writing style is a bit poor, it looks good and if you can read it, it is a good book.

Do you have any clue that you are always being paid attention to by Shen He? Author [Sneaky smile]

Good old guys, it has the flavor of a light novel.

Not bad, the plot is okay

It feels a bit like a light novel

Looks interesting

Author nb, so beautiful