What's Wrong with the Alchemist's Ability to Tell Fortunes?

It's very beautiful. The heroine's character and her strength make me feel great! ! ! ! ? ? ? There are just a lot of typos and sometimes I can't understand [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

The overall plot and storyline are quite good, but there are some minor flaws and problems with some words. Maybe the author has written more books, so some problems will arise. But a good story can always make people ignore these.

It's quite good. I like to watch this kind of movie without books, with a female protagonist and a female protagonist. Novels like this are about competition and slander. Nowadays, novels like this are often published in books, little junior sister. The original heroine was pampered and slandered in all kinds of ways to dig up her spiritual roots. The heroine was reborn or passed through the book and entered the worst school. I hate it and am tired of seeing it.

If the author is writing a book for the first time or inputting it by voice, forget it. If not, just spend ten minutes scanning it with your eyes and you will know it yourself.

Beautiful, clear thinking, beautiful writing As someone who has CP, I think the two of them are quite easy to get along with. Both the male and female protagonists have hidden identities, especially the male protagonist who has a big secret (I was shocked when I found out that the male protagonist had hidden identities) Recommended

The story is very good, but there are too many typos that affect the reading, and sometimes it is a bit ridiculous. I hope to see more works from the author, come on✊

The content is okay, but can you confirm the name of the heroine? Shen Jiuli for a while and Lin Youyou for a while.

It's good to read. I only read it twice in between. I have been reading this book for the past two days. It's still the same sentence. I'm still very picky about books. It's rare to read it from beginning to end. Everyone has different tastes. This book is very suitable for me. What do Jiu Li and Xiao Yi say? There aren't many emotional scenes, Zhang only confessed after 400, but it's pure love, any mentality has a reason, and Jiu Li's story before that didn't have too many ups and downs. Our protagonist Jiu didn't suffer at all. I like this, it went smoothly, but it's not very smooth, it's the kind that makes people watch it, hehe, anyway, I like it Huan, things tend to develop. The heroine herself is very strong, but she still gets her own opportunities to grow in the process, but the emotional drama belonging to the male and female protagonists is also a good seasoning. Ahem, there is a saying that our Danfeng master is Master Xiaojiu, and that Jiang, hehe, not bad, I don't particularly care about the others, push push push, push hard! ! Oh, yes, although there are a lot of typos, but if you read more novels, you will definitely understand what they mean. It is not a delay for me. The author occasionally double-edited the books and confused the names of the protagonists of the two books [laughing]

It's just that there are a lot of mistakes in the front. It's okay. It's pretty good-looking. Come on, update it. Come on, I saw the typo. Thank you.

Can I know whether the protagonist in the book is Shen Zhixi, Shen Jiuli or Lin Youyou???

The story is good to read, but there are a lot of typos and omissions, which suddenly appear, which affects the perception. The ending is a bit rushed. The author could have described it more, but I still feel that it is not enough. Some parts are confusing and I can understand it, but I still want to understand it better. Extras I want to read a new book when it comes out. I think it should be a very interesting setting and story. There are also many scenes describing eating that make me hungry. Who can understand how hungry I am when I read all day until early morning and see those delicious places described in the book [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's quite good-looking. The female protagonist is very powerful and knows a lot. The male protagonist has always been very powerful. There is an age difference. There are just a lot of typos. I hope the author can correct them. There are also a lot of descriptions of food.

It's very beautiful, the female protagonist is very powerful, she has a group of lovely friends around her, the male protagonist doesn't appear much, the author gives a lot of support

I think it's pretty good, but it's too short, and the heroine's name is always wrong. Can you change it?

I couldn't stop reading halfway through it. It's the book with the most typos that I've read in so many years. I turned to the end to take a look at the ending.

Apart from too many mistakes that I don't want to mention, the story is quite interesting. The heroine's mentor and family are very nice and doting on the heroine. The heroine's character is crisp and clear. There are enough pitfalls in the story that were filled in until the end.

The plot is interesting, but there are too many typos. If the author revise it, the rating should be higher.

I suddenly wanted to ask if this is Xiuxian on the Tip of the Tongue. I love it, I love watching it, I want to watch it, ahhh, I'm so greedy, I really want to eat the iced milk tea and stew made by my junior sister.

The different articles on cultivating immortals are mainly about metaphysics. Especially after arriving on another continent. However, the world view does not feel particularly huge. After the two worlds arrived on another continent, their cultivation levels were downgraded. The highest level of cultivation is still the ascension stage. It's not the kind of traditional immortality writing. It feels like the heroine comes here just to eat melon and then cook delicious food. Basically no one can escape the heroine's meal. The front part was pretty good, especially the melons that were so outrageous that my pupils were shocked, hahaha. Needless to say, I also had a great time eating them. I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to your new work. The most important thing I want to say is that there are really too many typos, too many, not ordinary. It is simply more serious than taking a Chinese class! The author should be careful when coding, okay?

It looks good. I like this. It's a pity that it's still being serialized. Come on, author!

The plot is very interesting, but some sentences are not smooth to read and some words are misspelled. I hope the author can make corrections [shy]

I think it's pretty good-looking, but the details in some places are super rich, but in other places the details are not very good. Come on, come on, it's beautiful\(//∇//)\

It looks good\(//∇//)\ but there are a lot of typos. I recommend [making faces][making faces][making faces][smirking][smirking][laughing][laughing][shy][adoration][adoration][send heart][sending heart][flying kiss][flying kiss][laughing][shy][shy][smirking][admiration][smirking][do Make faces][Blow a kiss][Make faces][Make faces][Send hearts][Smirk][Smirk][Blow a kiss][Laugh][Adore][Shy][Shy][Laugh][Laugh][Admiration][Make faces][Make faces][Make faces][Send hearts][Snicker][Laugh][Shy][Laugh][Laugh][Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's wonderful. I can't write a book review, but I think the protagonist is very charming and knows a lot about time travel and past lives. It's too early to tell. There are a lot of typos and bad sentences. The heroine's name will be written wrong from time to time (Lin Youyou)

It looks good, but it would be nice if there was no male protagonist. With the male protagonist, she becomes the strongest man's woman...

It seems that the author didn't decide on the name of the heroine at the beginning. Shen Jiuli and Lin Youyou changed the name in various ways, and then the wrong name scene was Shen Jiuli holding Shen Jiuli's hand, and Yi Chiyuan holding Yi Chiyuan's hand [Thinking] But for such a book, after reading it, I feel curious [laughs]

It is lively and interesting, and the key content is also very interesting for those who like to listen to gossip and stories that are sometimes funny. It's important to say it three times: if it looks good, it looks good.

I can only say it's pretty good. Can. It's easy to get yourself involved when you're not watching it, and you can derive another plot. Anyway, if you can, I actually quite like the heroine and her senior brother.

It's very interesting. The author should update it every day. I just found this book and I finished it in a while [crying]

A very interesting novel, highly recommended! However, there are some typos in some places, which greatly affects the reading experience. Can the author correct it? (No malicious intent)