Destiny? Fortunes! Women! You! You're All Mine

Let me support myself shamelessly first😁😁 In fact, it should be said that it is a little more traditional, step-by-step, and the pace is really not particularly fast. But the protagonist will not be suppressed or aggrieved. Some settings have some foreshadowing, but maybe my writing skills may not be able to write what I imagined. This book is my first attempt at writing. Just try to present your own ideas and settings. I hope I can finish the first book. I hope you can give me more advice. Thank you very much.

I've seen the latest chapter, and it's okay, nothing weird. At first, I saw that the lucky characters could only be conquered, and I was a little doubtful that it would limit the protagonist. But the protagonist is still decisive, there is no procrastination, and there is no insistence on destiny points. If he is unhappy, the first protagonist is also killed. However, after seeing the destiny points obtained after killing the first destiny, the system was upgraded and changed this. There is no need to conquer lucky characters, you can also gain luck by killing them. However, I suggest that the author can make some changes if he revise the book, otherwise some people may not be so patient and leave directly after the meeting. However, this is supposed to be a long novel. Author, you have to hold on. I have seen many newbies who can't hold on and will stop updating. Support the author, you are really active in replying to the comments. Also, the fact that he is not a supervisor is really good, and he is quite meticulous in recruiting women. Not many of them are just given for free, but they seem to be given for free, that's what it means. I think if the author is not good, you can also consider opening up a romance novel. Personally, I have read some in 🍅. The emotions and psychology of the female protagonist are quite delicate, but I don't know if the male protagonist can grasp it.

It's okay, it's not the extremely cold villain setting I've seen in most of them. At present, if I want to describe it, it is a bit of a scumbag, with the demeanor of a family member. The heroine has already collected one of the fifty or so chapters, and any actions she takes are not eunuch actions. The feeling it gives me is that the emotions are described in some details, regardless of whether the protagonist is good-looking or not. I still prefer this kind of one with a little more delicate emotions, better than a bulldozer. Anyway, let's keep working hard.

It's okay. The supporting characters I met don't seem to be pure cannon fodder. The descriptions and shaping are acceptable. I can completely watch it. Come on, the author. The most important thing is not to be a eunuch in the end.

Keep up the good work, author. The IQs of the characters I write are all online.