The Founding of Huaxia

Farewell to the five-star review. As of October 3rd, I have read Chapter 103 of Corpse Remonstrance. Let me talk about my feelings. Generally speaking, it is just one sentence. Women often change their gender to the harem. The female protagonists have their own characteristics, but most of them are domineering and strong. In contrast, the male protagonists focus on family power, their military force is weak, and their emotional lines are mostly passive. If they change their gender, it means that various tyrants are pursuing the direct daughter of the Prime Minister. There are a lot of official fights. If you like official fights, you can check it out

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

Who is the boss who opened the trumpet 🙂? The writing skills are so profound. History, tactics, characterization, court layout, the writing is very good. This is not an online article author, he is clearly a writer. I didn't expect Tomato to have such a high-quality article, but the plot of the early battle is a bit long, which makes me dizzy. The protagonist can't walk when he sees a woman. He has a bit of a woman's heart. He is too cowardly towards the opposite woman. It makes him feel unhappy. He has a feeling that he can't live without a woman. No matter how big the mistake the woman makes, he forgives and then accepts it. [Start] I felt very tired in the later stages of watching the war. I thought I was reading a military novel.

The author's writing is very nice, but when it comes to the last part, you don't have to worry too much about the opinions of some readers. Just write at your own pace. There are some female characters in the back, so you should cut them off. Otherwise, the three views will actually look very awkward. If you really accept everything and become a stallion, it will be very... It's understandable that the author is writing a book for the first time. After all, being easily led astray by readers is a problem faced by most new authors. Some characters are not meant to be the heroine at the beginning. Some of her previous backgrounds are not suitable for whitewashing, and the later ones are nondescript and affect the perception. However, I think the book is still very interesting, whether it is the emotional side or the political side. Come on, author💪 Also, I think the author's portrayal of the mother image in the novel is really good, especially the queen. She has the conflict of positions at the same time, and the kind of mother's love for her children. It makes people feel that she is very contradictory, which makes her feel more three-dimensional. Because people are inherently contradictory creatures, and the conflicts and contradictions between their own feelings, status, and responsibilities make her feel particularly real and particularly attractive.

This book is very good. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are very deep, and each character is vivid and lifelike. It is not as good as a Tomato novel, but it is so good. It shows the entanglement and calculation between the royal family to the readers, which makes me feel depressed and powerless. I still like the invincible and refreshing article. Come on, author!

It's rare to see a harem story in which the heroine has a distinct personality. The emotional description is very delicate, very real, and makes people feel deeply involved. The author's literary skills are very strong, and some sentences are appropriate to the situation and the situation.

It's really, really nice to read, and the author has great control over the details, except for a few things that I feel are a little bit off. But the author really understands history, and has also covered it in divination and other classical high-sheng academic texts. The whole text is not a brainless read, there are many brain-burning parts. Last but not least, this book has a fast pace and is a harem novel, which suits me very well. Big cheers for the author, this is the first time I'm so excited and the first time I've written so many comments. Because it's so beautiful 🥰🥰😘😘

The first part is okay, there are enough emotional scenes, but when it comes to the second part, the female protagonists don't appear much and there are relatively few emotional scenes. Then the whole second part is full of yelling, scolding, and cold voices, and there are few calm ones. What I personally feel is more poisonous is that the protagonist's harem tends to fight among themselves, which is not the same concept as the Shura Field. Also, why does it feel like the super hero princess passed the super hero to the protagonist? Then when I saw the back part, I felt more and more that the protagonist was not outstanding, and the comments were basically embarrassing. It was all because his father paved the way for him. How can this person be played without deletion? It gives people a feeling that everything can be done with him without him 🙂 🙂 🙂 Strengthen the prison and delete his father. Although it is a strategy in the back, it is basically about his father's abuse of food. Chen Qun and the emperor who can fight with his father are both dead. There is no suspense in the next game. Also, the author of Ya has foot control. This can be used. When you control Ya, the front and back movements are coherent. Many people have said how to achieve that posture😳😳😳 Overall, the writing is good. It's top-notch (particularly in classical Chinese). But it's the same sentence. Delete his father, strengthen the prison, and add more Shura fields. But don't betray me. Different people like different heroines. Li Weiming was almost killed by others, so let me ask you, how can you let the readers who like her live? 🙂 🙂 The one who wants to give five stars is his father Ni Tian and He Lao Lun Cai. I will give you four stars. Hey, if you don't improve, next time you will get three and a half stars😏😏😏

Among Tomatoes, it is definitely the best. It is not a stud novel in the traditional sense, but a harem novel, in which the heroine is portrayed very intelligently. The plot of the novel is also good. Although there is nothing new, the writing style is good, especially the ancient style is very good! I haven't seen such a wonderful novel in many years. Really, the layout is great and the characters are very three-dimensional. It's really good!

Let me first talk about my opinion on this novel. It is well written. Both the character description and the plot of the story are well written. The characters are vivid and the plot is interlocking. It can be seen that the author wants to write this novel to be independent from the popular ancient soul-traveling novels. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The writing style is a bit rough. The description of details in many sections is just a quick glance. For example, in the perfume, the author only wrote about how the product was produced, but the process of production and discovery was indeed touched upon. The overall process of the story is also very compact. If you read it a little faster, you will feel disconnected from the rest of the story. I took a look and found that this is the second novel published by the author, so these shortcomings are normal. I believe that the more I write, the better.