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Farewell to the five-star praise. As of October 3rd, I read Chapter 103 Corpse Remonstrance. Let me talk about my feelings. Generally speaking, it's just one sentence: women frequently turn into harems The female protagonists each have their own characteristics, but most of them are overbearing and strong. In contrast, the male protagonists focus on family power, are weak in military force, and mostly passive in their emotional relationships. If the gender is changed, the tyrants from all walks of life pursue the prime minister's legitimate daughter. There are a lot of official fights. If you like official fights, you can check it out The characters are very distinct, but the emotional line is inexplicable. If the hidden line can be refined a little more, it will not look so abrupt, especially the scene with Liu Shishi and the two powerful princesses. In comparison, the Lu family is much better. There is a long way to go, but we are destined to meet again

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

The author's writing is very nice, but when it comes to writing, you don't need to be too concerned about the opinions of some readers. Just write at your own pace. There are some female characters in the back, so you should cut them off. Otherwise, the three views will actually look very awkward. If you really accept everything and become a stallion, it will be very... It is understandable that the author is writing a book for the first time. After all, being easily led astray by readers is a problem faced by most new authors. Some characters are not intended to be heroines at the beginning. Some of her previous backgrounds are not suitable for whitewashing, and the latter ones are nondescript and affect the perception. But I think the book is still very interesting, whether it's the emotional side or the political side, author, come on💪 Also, I think the author's portrayal of the mother image in the novel is really good, especially the queen. She has the conflict of positions at the same time, and the feeling of mother's love for her children. It makes people feel that she is very contradictory, which makes her feel more three-dimensional. Because people are inherently contradictory creatures, and the conflicts and contradictions between their own feelings, status, and responsibilities make people feel that she is particularly real and particularly attractive.

This book is very good. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are very deep, and each character is vivid and lifelike. It is not as good as a Tomato novel, but it is so good. It shows the entanglement and calculation between the royal family to the readers, which makes me feel depressed and powerless. I still like the invincible and refreshing article. Come on, author!

It's rare to see a harem story in which the heroine has a distinct personality. The emotional description is very delicate, very real, and makes people feel deeply involved. The author's literary skills are very strong, and some sentences are appropriate to the situation and the situation.

Who is the boss who opened the trumpet [smile]? The writing skills are so profound. History, tactics, characterization, court layout, the writing is very good. This is not an online article author, he is clearly a writer. I didn't expect Tomato to have such a high-quality article, but the plot of the early battle is a bit long, which makes me dizzy. The protagonist can't walk when he sees a woman. He has a bit of a woman's heart. He is too cowardly towards the opposite woman. It makes him feel unhappy. He has a feeling that he can't live without a woman. No matter how big the mistake the woman makes, he forgives and then accepts it. [Start] I felt very tired in the later stages of watching the war. I thought I was reading a military novel.

It's really, really nice to read, and the author has great control over the details, except for a few things that I feel are a little bit off. But the author really understands history, and has also covered it in divination and other classical high-sheng academic texts. The whole text is not a brainless read, there are many brain-burning parts. Last but not least, this book has a fast pace and is a harem novel, which suits me very well. Big cheers for the author, this is the first time I'm so excited and the first time I've written so many comments. Because it's so beautiful [adoration][adoration][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Let me first talk about my opinion on this novel. It is well written. Both the character description and the plot of the story are well written. The characters are vivid and the plot is interlocking. It can be seen that the author wants to write this novel to be independent from the popular ancient soul-traveling novels. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The writing style is a bit rough. The description of details in many sections is just a quick glance. For example, in the perfume, the author only wrote about how the product was produced, but the process of production and discovery was indeed touched upon. The overall process of the story is also very compact. If you read it a little faster, you will feel disconnected from the rest of the story. I took a look and found that this is the second novel published by the author, so these shortcomings are normal. I believe that the more I write, the better.

In ancient fictional time travel novels. Definitely can be in the top three. The creation of particularly high-level cultural heroines is also particularly successful. It's not like other novels that you just know how to copy. The author is really genuine [Thinking]

Among Tomatoes, it is definitely the best. It is not a stud novel in the traditional sense, but a harem novel, in which the heroine is portrayed very intelligently. The plot of the novel is also good. Although there is nothing new, the writing style is good, especially the ancient style is very good! I haven't seen such a wonderful novel in many years. Really, the layout is great and the characters are very three-dimensional. It's really good!

There is no golden finger in this article. If you like it, it is recommended not to read it if it is fast, refreshing, plain or short. The plot is not cliche, but has new ideas. The writing is like a flowing water, the words and sentences are slightly ancient, and it reads like a gentle breeze and drizzle, warm and warm. There are two suggestions: One of them thought it was a bit too light and wondered whether the subsequent plot could arouse strong emotions. Secondly, the pace is too slow. In this current situation where the three golden chapters have been thought out, one must have very outstanding and other advantages to support a three-million-word novel.

This book is of high quality, the woman has a distinct personality, and most importantly, she has high emotional intelligence. The literary talent is very good, but the vernacular writing is not white enough, making it a bit tiring to read. Read every word carefully This introduction is a bit vulgar. If it wasn't boring, I would have missed this novel.

It's hard to imagine that Tomato would have such a well-educated writer, who has studied ancient Chinese and used excellent fictional writing. However, the author's political strategy is probably the author's shortcoming, which is not satisfactory, but the character portrayal is excellent. Moreover, the length of "The Crusade against Xixia" is also a bit too long. There are too many female protagonists, and some of the characters have overlapping personalities. It is more important to be precise than to have many. I hope there are fewer female protagonists and more three-dimensional portrayals. Don't let yourself go too far. When there are countless characters, wouldn't it be a pity to spend a lot of pen and ink on the characters before? All in all, as a reader, I still hope that the books I pursue will prosper and go further. The overall evaluation is 9.5 Points.

Really pretty! I read it during dinner, but ended up reading it all night and finished it at 10 a. M. If I had known better, I wouldn't have read it so quickly! It's rare to come across a good historical harem novel. The author will update it soon! ! 1. The author is familiar with history and poetry. Every time the protagonist is a copywriter, I don't feel artificial. Not only are the poems copied not just bad ones, but they also allow me to search and appreciate them. 2. The characters of each heroine are not the same, each has its own characteristics. Except for the eldest princess Li Shu, I don't like it. There is nothing poisonous about it. I hope that the subsequent plot can be handled well. Moreover, the speed of promoting the heroine is a bit fast. Although there is plot interaction between the male and female protagonists, the relationship heats up a bit quickly, and the heat-up routines are all the same, which can be a bit boring. It is recommended to write more daily life. 3. Although it is a classic historical time-travel novel, and you can see a lot of Lin San's shadow in "The Best Butler", the plot is still quite interesting. There are cases, business, and court. The author's control of the plot made me very comfortable. It should be fast, it should be slow, and there are also some daily emotional interactions. In the middle, I was still thinking that the emperor is so good to the protagonist, how can the protagonist rebel? I didn't expect it to be handled very well (it's just a bit of a knife) 4. Urgent update! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Why is it that the protagonist is always angry, cold, yelling, and cursing when he speaks later? He can't speak anymore, can he? [Awkward laugh] Some suggestions for the author: If you don't know how to add adjectives, you don't have to add them. Can't you just have a normal conversation? It seems that the protagonist has no palace, I hope it can be improved

Super beautiful, the more you look at it, the better it looks [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] The writing is excellent Each heroine has a unique character All have corresponding flower names and maiden names. Really outstanding There is no such thing as the traditional routine of being unable to walk as soon as you meet the male protagonist. The relationship between the male protagonist and each female protagonist is gradual Not only the protagonist is portrayed like this Various supporting roles, the emperor of Dahua, the queen of Daxia [crying] As well as the protagonist's father and mother, their portrayals are impressive. ————————//———————————— I especially like the little phoenix tree and the little bird in the book Xiaoqueer really gives people the feeling of Crescent Moon in the book "The Housekeeper" Especially the part where I saw the little bird for the first time The description of the bird's eyes [laughs] ——————————//—————————— The author can also keep updating three times a day [top post][top post]

The author writes very well, I read it in one go. The portrayal of each of the female characters impressed me deeply. I felt like I was watching The Butler back in the day. The characters' personalities are vivid and vivid... They also have a clear distinction between love and hate. They dare to love and hate.

The author's writing is very good, but the early plot is not well polished. Modern black technology seems very abrupt, and the male protagonist's current sense of drifting with the crowd is not very satisfying. However, the female protagonists do portray vivid images. The climax of the palace should be the small peak of the book. The plot is still coherent and smooth after reading it in one sitting. The author's awareness of lightning protection is still good. At present, it seems that there are no dead girls, cuckolds, or minor green thunder. After the praise, let me talk about the shortcomings and poisonous points of reading. Personal defense is more tricky (currently I have seen the death of the queen) The first is Li Shu. Li Shu's fine points are quite inconsistent with the plot of Tianbo Mansion, and she currently has an irreconcilable conflict with Li Tong. I look forward to how the author will deal with it. Although the female characters portrayed by the author are all flesh and blood, most of the female protagonists are currently very strong, and most of them are sadistic. The main tone of the work seems to be relatively heavy at present. The male protagonist currently does not have enough ability to control the harem, and I am really afraid that the harem will burst into flames and thunder. The two female protagonists are pregnant early, so I hope there won't be too many chapters about the heirs. I've already imagined the scene where the heirs are fighting for power... I hope the author can control it. A proper palace fight is okay, and don't make too many heart-wrenching plots. The process can be sad, but I hope the protagonists can have a good ending (the sight of the supporting character's knife made me panic) and I hope the author won't mess with it.

Awesome, it's been a long time since I've seen a book that made me feel comfortable reading. It's like gold in shit.

The first part is okay, there are enough emotional scenes, but when it comes to the second part, the female lead in the front doesn't appear much, and there are relatively few emotional scenes. Then the rest of the article is full of yelling, cursing, and cold voices, with very few calm ones. What I personally feel is the most toxic thing is that the protagonist's harem tends to fight within itself, which is not the same concept as the Shura Field at all. Also, why do you feel like the super hero princess has passed on the super hero to the protagonist? Then when I saw the back part, I felt more and more that the protagonist was not outstanding, and the comments were basically embarrassing. It was all because his father paved the way for him. How can this person be played without deletion? It gives people the feeling that it can be done with or without him [smile][smile][smile] I strengthened the prison sentence and deleted his father. Although it was a plot later, the story was basically about his father's abuse of vegetables. Chen Qun and the emperor who could fight with his father twice were already dead. There was no suspense in the next game. Also, the author of Ya has foot control. This can be used. When you control Ya, the front and back movements are coherent. Many people have said how to achieve that posture [shy][shy][shy] Overall it's good. The writing is very good, it's top-notch (partially in classical Chinese), but it's the same sentence, delete his father, strengthen the prison, and give more Shura field, but don't betray me. Different people like different heroines. Li Weiming was almost killed by others, so let me ask you, how can you let the readers who like her live [smile][smile][smile] The one who wants to give five stars is his father Ni Tian and He Lao Yancai. I'll give you four stars. Hey, if you don't improve, I'll give you three and a half stars next time [laughter][laughter][laughter]

At first I thought it was a conspiracy, but later I found out it was stamp collecting, which made me dizzy. However, it still seems a bit fragmented in some places. It feels like the author is trying to modify his personal habits or to cater to the public and slowly correct it.

The author is so great, he is really talented and has profound skills. Choose words and make sentences at your fingertips. There are not many people writing traditional fictional historical harem novels anymore, and even fewer are good writers. The limitation of force to below high martial arts was well received, the naming of characters with implicit intentions was well received, and the characterization was even more well received. The author is able to write out the characteristics of seemingly similar female characters, and the plot arranged for each character is very detailed and very attentive. The update speed is pretty impressive, with one chapter having six to seven thousand words, but I still want to read more.

It's really good to watch. I read it word for word. The protagonist values ​​love and justice, and the heroine is not a brainless person. She has a knife, but she immediately gives the audience the desired result, and they finally get together. The heroines each have distinct personalities, and the characters are delicately portrayed. They are really beautiful to watch.

The author has a strong literary foundation and the plot is compact, but there are just too many female protagonists [face covering] This is my second read. I stopped reading it when I saw Li Shu was rescued and returned to the palace. I have saved hundreds of chapters. Mainly because I feel that there are too many female protagonists and I can't write about them. And there are only a few ways to deal with women. I thought that the thoroughbred horse novels will be better in the future, at least I won't accept them anymore. Now I'm back to read the later ones. The male protagonist said he won't accept them anymore, but the women in the family helped him accept them. Anyway, I don't know where the upper limit of female protagonists is.

The author is a bit biased, and his writing style is excellent when describing the struggle for power in officialdom. However, when it comes to real-life action, the story is a little lame, and the logic is difficult to reconcile. But overall it's an enjoyable article worth reading, especially the description of xp is really professional [like]

The writing is great, and the main plot line is flawless. It is coherent and coherent. It even feels like the author has great ambitions. It is a very manipulative harem novel, which makes me a little uncomfortable as a newcomer to harem novels. After all, I have always thought that novels either have a harem but not the writing, or the writing is not a harem. The first thing I am not satisfied with is that the update speed is quite satisfactory, and I am worried about how long it will take the author to finish the grand character story and the main plot; the second is that the protagonist in the early stage is indeed a bit strong and not worthy of his ambition. The gentleman's heart of bringing peace to the world is indeed admirable, but he is often kidnapped and framed without martial arts, and he is a bit licking when he sees a woman (especially the old brothel lover who is the most obvious). Of course this is all subjective opinion, overall it is very nice☝🤓

It's a good read, the plot is not procrastinating [like], and it also adds some content that everyone likes to read [shy] (I've never seen a book like this, which makes me open Yellow Tomato from time to time to see if there are any updates) [face covering]

Although I have just read a few chapters, I can see that the author's writing style is much higher than those of casual writing. If there are no poisonous points in the following and the writing style is maintained, I will continue to follow it [Like] [Like] [Like] I can only say it's awesome 😋

It's cool. The author's character creation is quite successful, especially the sharp contrast between the several real dragons raised by the queen and the loach. My scalp felt numb when I saw it. I haven't eaten this kind of fine chaff for a long time. What hard times we lived in the past [crying]

The author has ideas, writing skills, and solid literary skills. He also has an idealism in writing books. He really wants to learn stories well, not just to make money. There is also a sense of literary youth, which reminds me of one of my favorite historical authors, the thieves and the three idiots. Unfortunately, the three idiots died young. I hope the author can keep writing. Maybe this book is not in line with the current popular trend, but good books will never be buried in any era. It is the luck of Tomato that the author publishes the book in Tomato, and it is also the luck of the majority of readers. The author's writing style is really good, and he also writes very well about love and love. However, when he writes about politics and war, it is really too idealistic. I don't understand politics very well, but what the author writes is really too simple. The war is really full of poisonous points. In ancient times, wars were about bad ones, not better ones. Whichever side is not so bad can win. The author writes about the army and Napoleon. Like the Imperial Guards, they misjudged the lethality of bows and arrows. In fact, the lethality of bows and arrows is very small for soldiers wearing iron armor. However, since I said that in ancient times, fighting was worse than bad, so the soldiers were basically unarmored. The lethality of bows and arrows is indeed great, but it is obviously impossible that the guards of the palace and the soldiers of the aristocratic families can also be killed by bows and arrows on a large scale.

It looks good, with flesh and blood and brains, but I want to ask, who is this princess? Who still remembers [what]