Did I Marry Long Aotian?

As the first novel I have written, no matter how imperfect it is, I choose to give it a perfect score. This article was conceived while writing, so the continuity of the story is not very good. Especially in the first half, a lot of the wording was not to my liking, and the rhythm was even worse. The second half was relatively rushed, mainly because of my lack of personal ability and difficulty in constructing the grand scene I wanted. I will think about the supporting characters who play a lot of roles and even the supporting characters, what kind of background or character they have, and what kind of things their character will push them to do. What they do connects the whole story together, because some inspiration will come out when writing, so only the general direction of the story is determined, and the small stories may be the whims of the day. In my setting, Pei Yan has lived under hatred and high pressure since he was a child, so he lacks compassion and the ability to understand his own emotions, so his feelings for Yu Yu need to be broken down and promoted by his mother. And Ayan had a complete personality before passing through the book, so he can make up for the lack of compassion in Ayan's personality. Obviously, due to limited pen power, these settings were not reflected. Generally speaking, this article is imperfect to the extreme. Their story ends here. I hope our story will not end here. I have already conceived an AB cross-travel story, and I want to write a story about happy enemies who dislike each other but are forced to bond and become attracted to each other after an adventure. If you like it, you can add it to your collection first. I hope I can write a story that I am satisfied with in the next one.

It's good. The author writes the characters' emotions delicately. The protagonists also have mouths. Looking at it later, you can vaguely see that the characters are gradually becoming more three-dimensional, and the characters also really poked me 😘 (this is just my personal opinion)

The writing is okay, except for the poor rhythm control, which sometimes makes me dizzy after reading it, but everything else is good, keep up the good work The character really pokes fun at me!!! Very cute

It's really beautiful. I finished it in one sitting ❤️ 😘

Beautiful and interesting

Nice! It's a delicious sweet story, and there is no bloody misunderstanding between the two. It ended after becoming the emperor, and it feels like it's still unfinished.

I have finished watching it, and now I have watched it for the second time. I really think the plot is very good, the characters are very charming, and the emotional descriptions are also very delicate.

The writing angle is very different. Although it is a through-the-line book, the writing is similar to the ancient Chinese proverbs. It is very natural. I would like to read more. I recommend everyone to read it.

It's super beautiful, the writing is great, the details are appropriate, the plot is not laggy, and you won't lose money if you invest in it.

Good-looking, the emotional line is gradual