Naruto: Time Travel as Menma Opens with Hinata Confessing Her Love

It looks good, but your chapter is only one paragraph, so pay attention to the paragraphs.

It's very interesting, but the author should break it down into paragraphs.

I like this kind of thing, come on, the author must not stop updating! ! [Thinking][thinking]

Divide it into paragraphs, the author is great

The content is good, I like it very much, but the format seems uncomfortable. Quotes such as paragraphing and speaking must be added [please update]

This book is very good, but I personally don't like it very much.

In the title, write down where the chapter should be broken.

Good guy, where are you writing your essay? [Smile]

I was a little interested, but it turned out to be three or four pages long [laughing awkwardly]

Author, can you repost it? Is it okay to write one sentence at a time? I really can't read the short composition now [crying]

My family, I am farming, I will update later. Great, it's the Dream Come True series

If you ask where these things come from? He directly lied that he got it from another timeline, and Menma and Sasuke felt like they came from different worlds and had no communication.

I can't imagine 12-year-old Menma, and I keep thinking about that oh no hyperthyroidism

I read this book at 4 o'clock in the morning. Still didn't get the first update.

I highly recommend it, but as for the segmentation, Chapter 1 is just a natural segment.

Very nice. I like this book very much.

It's so beautiful, it's really worth watching

The content is novel and looks very nice. I hope the author will update it soon.

It's pretty, but a little lacking.

Restyle it, bro.

This book is super good, I really recommend it, but it can also be based on personal preference. Anyway, I personally feel that it is okay.

It's very nice, but author, can you put some quotation marks around the speaking part?

Okay, okay, emphasize important things three times

Finally found a Menma book, and the heroine is Hinata's

Pretty good. It's just that the first 30 pictures are not segmented.

It's good to watch, the plot is good, and it's more suitable for listening to books