Don’t Swing That Sword, I’m the Author!

Sure enough, be aesthetics is not limited. How can I put it? It is very well written, especially the tragedy in the front. It made my heart ached when I saw it. The miserable fate of everyone in the front is contrasted with the beautiful ending in the back. It is like a dream, as if they have entered a fantasy world again. The endings of everyone in this book before Yue Xi changed it are so real, just like reality. Good people die to protect the world of cultivation, good people are plotted by people with deep thoughts, and they die without a complete body. Those who love will not get a response until death, and those who love do not have a happy ending. Chivalrous people are trapped in darkness, cunning and greedy people sit on the high platform, cowardly people hide in the back and enjoy peace, and the evil spirits who call the wind and rain are People also experience ups and downs, do not understand emotions, and do not know how to love. Everyone is struggling to live, but they cannot live well and cannot get what they want. No matter they are contented people or greedy people, no one has success and no one has a happy ending. No one in this world can become a god, which means that no one can be liberated. Yue Xi is like a god. He created the world and distributed suffering to everyone. More or less, no one is spared... I think the ending of this story shouldn't be like this (although I love him, I don't think I can force the ending to be changed). After all, how can God show mercy to the world? Suffering is destined, right? I think the ending that is more suitable for the original world is to let the world line go smoothly, to atone for sins, and to pay back when it is time. Yue Xi will always stand by Gu Feiyu's side and teach him He loves, loves himself, loves the world, accompanies him to repay the debts owed in the past, and lets himself go after repaying, and lives the rest of their own life well. Everyone is walking on the original track, everyone has a determined destiny, God can create a happy world, but the original incomplete world will never disappear because of the birth of a new world. Time cannot be turned back, we are just mortals, they are just the same. The ending of the story of this book is that Yue Xi put down the suffering of 16 years old, and rewrote the fate of that world, letting go of them who were struggling in that world. Now Yue Xi's heart is full of love, and the new world is also happy, but the past will not disappear because of rewriting, 16-year-old "The Supreme God" is popular all over the Internet, but they were not happy when they were 16 years old. Now the moon shines on the forest, but he and they all have a happy life... Life really can't go back. There is no god on earth who will rewrite a happy ending for us, but who can say for sure, but just say with emotion, do good deeds, don't ask about the future, cherish the present, and look forward. How should I put it? Every character in this book is well-shaped, or very well-shaped. Everyone is so vivid that it is really hard not to empathize with them. I have nothing to criticize about the character creation in the story. Maybe the only thing I have to mention is that people are multi-faceted and not pure. There will never be pure good and evil in the world.

Brother, I'm not telling you, this book is really good. It can be regarded as one of the few on Tomato that has a lot of ideas. This is my first time to post a long review, so please forgive me. (Contains mild spoilers) First of all, let's talk about the advantages. In terms of plot, although it is a more common beginning of the book, but different from other works, Yue Xi originally wanted to write an ideal Gu Feiyu when he was sixteen years old. However, due to many personal and family reasons, the plot became more and more crazy, and Gu Feiyu became a heinous person. Of course, this is the preface. After the book, as the plot progresses As you unfold, you will slowly find that it is not just rebirth, but the 707 system is not that simple. It can be said that it is interconnected. Every chapter and every paragraph is a key point. The plot is not procrastinating and there is no unnecessary nonsense, but there are all the details that should be included. It can be said that the details are very appropriate. A casual sentence in the front may become a huge foreshadowing in the later chapters, or it may become a tear point. From the search for Xuan Tianzhu at the beginning to Yue Xi's impulse to return to reality and rewrite the novel to make up for his sixteenth year at the end, every step is very reasonable and the connection is very natural. It is not like forcing the character to do something unreasonably in order to let the character go through such a plot. Then in terms of characters, the story of Mo Li and Song Yaoguang, from the regret of separation to the sadness of meeting but not agreeing with each other to the final happy ending, and the character of Feng Zhi, the master of Sanqian Palace, a chivalrous swordsman with a broad mind, who first appeared to adopt a child who was tortured by the Divine Doctor Mansion, followed by various rescues of Yue Xi , and the invasion of demons, he single-handedly resisted thousands of monsters, and finally self-destructed to delay the retreat of the people in the city, saving countless lives. Just as the greedy Shi Yuandu commented, "Although Shi Yuan is just a selfish and greedy person, he also knows that in the current world of cultivation, only Feng Zhi is worthy of ringing this bell again." There is also daughter Jiang Jianyue. Although she is an assassin, she must repay kindness. She follows Yue Xi to Changtianhuang and protects Yue Xi all the way. She is a heroine who is not worthy of the name. She is particularly sassy and has a lot of popularity in her part-time job. Finally, let's talk about Zheng Mo. He seems to be greedy for life and afraid of death, but in fact he has the self-esteem of the people of Changtianhuang. He knows that everything is an illusion. In fact, there is only one person left in Changtianhuang. He does not blame anyone and just dies peacefully. How can it not be considered a relief. In fact, every character in the author's works is described in detail, and every character is lifelike. It can be seen that it has been carefully crafted for a long time. No character is perfunctory, so I will not point it out one by one. I would like to point out two shortcomings in my opinion. One is that each character is different and you can guess who it is with just one sentence. However, many characters are more or less similar, such as Ying Beiqiu, Shi Yuan, and Lin Bu Nian. They all have greedy characters, which is why they cannot ascend. Different people will say a sentence in different ways, but in some places, some characters' words are relatively common and do not match their personality characteristics. The second is the emotional line between Yue Xi and Gu Feiyu. From the beginning to the end, the 2.0 Version of Gu Feiyu is still relatively obvious. You can see his paranoia, so it is natural to love him. However, the 1.0 Version of Gu Feiyu may be more of a kind of sadness (I don't know how to describe it) because he knows that he has been surpassed? Of course there was hatred for abandoning him, but later I thought about it and found that I couldn't hate him. At first I just wanted to send him home, but later I just wanted to protect him from getting hurt. Besides Yue Xi's emotional line, he felt more guilt and reason for Gu Feiyu. He should like his characters as he should. Maybe Gu Feiyu's kindness to him made him fall in love step by step, but at least it was not reflected in the article. After reading it, I felt that Yue Xi fell in love very suddenly, and could he really distinguish between guilt and love. I hope I can add more in the extras. Overall, I think this book is very good. After all, it is the first time for the author to write an article and he cannot be too harsh. I have read too many brainless articles by Tomato. After reading this article, my brain was really purified. I am not a common black yandere, and I am not a brainless beauty. It is a strong amway! ! You have to read this book with your brain in mind, otherwise you may not be able to follow the subsequent plot, but if you follow the author step by step, you will find that it is really interesting! ! Amway, you won't lose money if you invest in it.

So pretty! I just hope that the previous emotional line can be clearer and more detailed. Although it is also very exciting for Gu Feiyu to feel that "I will never regret it, and I will never regret it even if I die", but rather than guessing, I hope that his complete mental journey can be presented. 707 Is more obvious. Why did the God of Creation who gave him happiness abandon himself, the proud son of heaven, and choose another unworthy one? He should have hated Yue Xi as the author, but when we really saw him, it might be because of his out-of-touch and familiar nature, or because he called himself with a smile and relied on himself in this unfamiliar world. Yue Xi first had a natural affection for the protagonist in his novel, and later knew that he was giving to the world and suffering to Gu Feiyu, but this was just because of his youth and frivolity. Just as he thought, Gu Feiyu was the epitome of his sixteen years old, so Yue Xi loved him almost instinctively, hoping that he could live a good life and embrace the beautiful life that belonged to him from the beginning. Therefore, when he revised the book later, Gu Feiyu became the favored son of heaven at the beginning. But I don't know when Yue Xi really started to fall in love with Gu Feiyu, because I don't think Yue Xi fell in love with Yue Xi so early, but what Yao said later overturned my idea. Yue Xi fell in love with Gu Feiyu as soon as he entered the sect? I don't know, so I wonder if I have loved Gu Feiyu from the first day he was born. Whether it is the first version of him or the second version of him, it is still him. But ten years have passed, Yue Xi has forgotten this love, but seeing him at the age of twelve, Yue Xi still hopes that he can live the first version of his life, not the second version that he wrote out of anger.

Oh my god, it's so beautiful😇 I think the emotions of the protagonist are relatively delicate. Depin has experienced so much and returned to modern times to fulfill the reader's dream. Author, you must write something in the extra story🍗 (doge

Oh my gosh, what a brain-burning short story. Everyone has their own way and life, but they are entangled with each other. Everyone's IQ is online. The new settings are amazing. Abuse? I'm not sad, it was all perfect in the end, I really cried and laughed, and the last few chapters gave me goosebumps. Wow wow wow, the author is really awesome. Every character has flesh and blood and something they want to protect. Try your best to give everything just for the other person to be successful. Not cruel at all! ! ! ! ! ! Show them all to me! ! ! It really saved my book drought temporarily! ! !

A very cool book... Everyone has a brain except me Looking at him, hey, this one is a good person, and so is this one. Then, holy shit, why are you like this, shit, why do you change your face, and then, shit, shit, shit, shit Ignore the suggestion if you are not smart enough, you will understand it anyway if you look at it) anthracene. It's so good to watch, sometimes it really gives me goosebumps. It's a great book, and it will definitely be rated high.

To be honest (●—●), there is actually a section in the middle where the author's writing is quite confusing, and I couldn't tell for a while whether it was 707 or Gu Feiyu from another world, but I have to say that the overall writing is really great (//∇//) Yes There is a profound description of the character's heart, which is really great (//∇//) To be honest, Mo Li left a deep impression on me. He is a complex, very complex character, but he is also very gentle. I don't know, I have been talking about Moli Moli, right? Because I always thought that this reason might be Mo's intention to leave? Maybe it's because I've read and understood it [laughing and crying] Anyway, the two protagonists are well portrayed. I always thought that in the later stage, they would be imprisoned in a small black room and forced to make sauce. In the end... I didn't even finish anything, I was interrupted [I almost cried] I was actually very uncomfortable during this period, especially the part about Zheng Mo's death in the early stage really impressed me. I still remember that I took a screenshot [shy] If possible, the author can make another extra story about him. He waited for his family in the end, right? Feng Zhi, I'm really sorry, I really like him, I really want to love him, I'm sorry, I'm sorry m(._.)M Let's talk about our most powerful poison master and milk master, this guy, I have always had very complicated feelings for him... Actually, I am halfway I kind of like him, but at the same time I hate him. It can be said that he is the strongest villain. If he is placed in another small world, he is the strongest villain in the end. It must be him [face covering] Uh, but it is obvious that this guy doesn't seem to want to live in the first place? Okay (~_~;) I don't understand a madman, what is going on in his head? -_-||Mu Zhiming From the beginning of the chapter, I thought this would be a very, very, very, very, very important role... But in fact, it is quite important. Fortunately, the author gave him a very good extra chapter. Author, you didn't write his extra chapter [I almost cried] I forgot the name of the other one. I just remember that his last word is Nian, so let's call him Nian Comrade. I have to say that the author Dada, after the article, describes the complex description of his heart, Actually, I'm really fucked. I was shocked, but it's actually normal. After so many years, his thoughts have become more and more pure. He just wants to ascend. But I have to say, it's still a little heartbreaking (┯_┯). I thought Senior Sister Mu wouldn't die like this, but in the end, I really killed him with a dart [crying] The next step is our sister Jiang Miyue, please accept me. Please, I love you to death, stay with me! ! ! And those two brothers were so damn true. The younger brother committed suicide for his older brother. At that moment, I really lost my fucking brains. They showed me how cruel they were and I rolled seven times on the ground, which then led to dysmenorrhea. [Smile] Oh, yes, and Yan Shu, the worker who was the most brutally beaten in the whole book! Ah, I hope he can stop working like this in the future, and Sect Master Song, I hope you and Mo Li can be together well, and don't be deceived again. I hope you two stay together forever, lock it up! Then... There is Old Man Yin, who is really a pure alcoholic. I, the author, will write more 8+1 for him in the future, but... Drinking is harmful to the body, so be careful about the amount [Thinking] Then there is a young lady, I really can't remember her name, and his sense of existence is a bit low... But he is an ambitious person, and I hope he gets better and better! Let's talk about our protagonist Gu Feiyu. I actually looked it up in the dictionary. The word "" really has a meaning. It's not that I can't believe the author, but I'm just out of curiosity. [Face covering] To be honest, I still hope that this song is real. I hope he can have a game with Qilin Qi with just two sandwich cookies. I believe our Yuexi can do it. To be honest, this is a bit equivalent to pseudo-orthopedics but it is very good. I like it very much (≧∇≦*) Let me think again. Have I missed anything? Oh, yes, and his character Yasha should be able to become good friends with Feng Zhi later on, right? The two of them are really interesting, and they are really interesting when they get along (//∇//) When Feng Zhi died, I thought Ya Sha would come to save him, but I didn't expect it to be too late [crying] And then just when I thought Feng Zhi was gone, he actually still had a trace of his soul that made me cry for half an hour. After seeing this, I felt like I was crying in vain [rolling eyes]

Rather than destiny, I believe that Ai Gu is Yue Xi's salvation for herself. This book is like a child who was hurt by his original family and uses "The Supreme God" as a catharsis. Later, when it is read into the book, it is a soothing for the soul.

Damn, your writing is really beautiful, very nice, very nice. This is really the first time I have seen this kind of writing. I like it so much. ٩(♡㉨♡)۶ When there are more people, it will definitely have a high rating.

It's super good-looking, the plot is well connected, and the logic is super smooth. The pitfalls have been filled in, and the plot is not cliche. There are highlights for everyone, not the heartthrob [full] The characters are rich and the starting points of the protagonists are also different. It is a very novel reading experience. Everyone has their own path to take, and there are reasonable reasons for their actions and actions. This is not a mindless article [blowing kiss] The language expression is very clear and the words are used appropriately. There are no overly gorgeous words, but it can render a unique situation and atmosphere, making people immersed in it. The writing is not a novice [Love] To sum up, if you are lucky enough to get in, there is no need to rush! [Laugh][laugh][laugh] Woohoo, I've finished watching it, it's so beautiful. Although it is he at the end, I feel that the overall atmosphere of the whole text is depressing, full of destruction and rebirth. From the perspective of our protagonist, it's okay, but if I were a mortal or a cultivator with low qualifications, I would choose to be finished directly [hold]