Don't Move Your Sword, I Am Really the Author!

Sure enough, be aesthetics is not limited. How can I put it? It is very well written, especially the tragedy in the front. It made my heart ached when I saw it. The miserable fate of everyone in the front is contrasted with the beautiful ending in the back. It is like a dream, as if they have entered a fantasy world again. The endings of everyone in this book before Yue Xi changed it are so real, just like reality. Good people die to protect the world of cultivation, good people are plotted by people with deep thoughts, and they die without a complete body. Those who love will not get a response until death, and those who love do not have a happy ending. Chivalrous people are trapped in darkness, cunning and greedy people sit on the high platform, cowardly people hide in the back and enjoy peace, and the evil spirits who call the wind and rain are People also experience ups and downs, do not understand emotions, and do not know how to love. Everyone is struggling to live, but they cannot live well and cannot get what they want. No matter they are contented people or greedy people, no one has success and no one has a happy ending. No one in this world can become a god, which means that no one can be liberated. Yue Xi is like a god. He created the world and distributed suffering to everyone. More or less, no one is spared... I think the ending of this story shouldn't be like this (although I love him, I don't think I can force the ending to be changed). After all, how can God show mercy to the world? Suffering is destined, right? I think the ending that is more suitable for the original world is to let the world line go smoothly, to atone for sins, and to pay back when it is time. Yue Xi will always stand by Gu Feiyu's side and teach him He loves, loves himself, loves the world, accompanies him to repay the debts owed in the past, and lets himself go after repaying, and lives the rest of their own life well. Everyone is walking on the original track, everyone has a determined destiny, God can create a happy world, but the original incomplete world will never disappear because of the birth of a new world. Time cannot be turned back, we are just mortals, they are just the same. The ending of the story of this book is that Yue Xi put down the suffering of 16 years old, and rewrote the fate of that world, letting go of them who were struggling in that world. Now Yue Xi's heart is full of love, and the new world is also happy, but the past will not disappear because of rewriting, 16-year-old "The Supreme God" is popular all over the Internet, but they were not happy when they were 16 years old. Now the moon shines on the forest, but he and they all have a happy life... Life really can't go back. There is no god on earth who will rewrite a happy ending for us, but who can say for sure, but just say with emotion, do good deeds, don't ask about the future, cherish the present, and look forward. How should I put it? Every character in this book is well-shaped, or very well-shaped. Everyone is so vivid that it is really hard not to empathize with them. I have nothing to criticize about the character creation in the story. Maybe the only thing I have to mention is that people are multi-faceted and not pure. There will never be pure good and evil in the world.

Brother, I'm not telling you, this book is really good. It can be regarded as one of the few on Tomato that has a lot of ideas. This is my first time to post a long review, so please forgive me. (Contains mild spoilers) First of all, let's talk about the advantages. In terms of plot, although it is a more common beginning of the book, but different from other works, Yue Xi originally wanted to write an ideal Gu Feiyu when he was sixteen years old. However, due to many personal and family reasons, the plot became more and more crazy, and Gu Feiyu became a heinous person. Of course, this is the preface. After the book, as the plot progresses As you unfold, you will slowly find that it is not just rebirth, but the 707 system is not that simple. It can be said that it is interconnected. Every chapter and every paragraph is a key point. The plot is not procrastinating and there is no unnecessary nonsense, but there are all the details that should be included. It can be said that the details are very appropriate. A casual sentence in the front may become a huge foreshadowing in the later chapters, or it may become a tear point. From the search for Xuan Tianzhu at the beginning to Yue Xi's impulse to return to reality and rewrite the novel to make up for his sixteenth year at the end, every step is very reasonable and the connection is very natural. It is not like forcing the character to do something unreasonably in order to let the character go through such a plot. Then in terms of characters, the story of Mo Li and Song Yaoguang, from the regret of separation to the sadness of meeting but not agreeing with each other to the final happy ending, and the character of Feng Zhi, the master of Sanqian Palace, a chivalrous swordsman with a broad mind, who first appeared to adopt a child who was tortured by the Divine Doctor Mansion, followed by various rescues of Yue Xi , and the invasion of demons, he single-handedly resisted thousands of monsters, and finally self-destructed to delay the retreat of the people in the city, saving countless lives. Just as the greedy Shi Yuandu commented, "Although Shi Yuan is just a selfish and greedy person, he also knows that in the current world of cultivation, only Feng Zhi is worthy of ringing this bell again." There is also daughter Jiang Jianyue. Although she is an assassin, she must repay kindness. She follows Yue Xi to Changtianhuang and protects Yue Xi all the way. She is a heroine who is not worthy of the name. She is particularly sassy and has a lot of popularity in her part-time job. Finally, let's talk about Zheng Mo. He seems to be greedy for life and afraid of death, but in fact he has the self-esteem of the people of Changtianhuang. He knows that everything is an illusion. In fact, there is only one person left in Changtianhuang. He does not blame anyone and just dies peacefully. How can it not be considered a relief. In fact, every character in the author's works is described in detail, and every character is lifelike. It can be seen that it has been carefully crafted for a long time. No character is perfunctory, so I will not point it out one by one. I would like to point out two shortcomings in my opinion. One is that each character is different and you can guess who it is with just one sentence. However, many characters are more or less similar, such as Ying Beiqiu, Shi Yuan, and Lin Bu Nian. They all have greedy characters, which is why they cannot ascend. Different people will say a sentence in different ways, but in some places, some characters' words are relatively common and do not match their personality characteristics. The second is the emotional line between Yue Xi and Gu Feiyu. From the beginning to the end, the 2.0 Version of Gu Feiyu is still relatively obvious. You can see his paranoia, so it is natural to love him. However, the 1.0 Version of Gu Feiyu may be more of a kind of sadness (I don't know how to describe it) because he knows that he has been surpassed? Of course there was hatred for abandoning him, but later I thought about it and found that I couldn't hate him. At first I just wanted to send him home, but later I just wanted to protect him from getting hurt. Besides Yue Xi's emotional line, he felt more guilt and reason for Gu Feiyu. He should like his characters as he should. Maybe Gu Feiyu's kindness to him made him fall in love step by step, but at least it was not reflected in the article. After reading it, I felt that Yue Xi fell in love very suddenly, and could he really distinguish between guilt and love. I hope I can add more in the extras. Overall, I think this book is very good. After all, it is the first time for the author to write an article and he cannot be too harsh. I have read too many brainless articles by Tomato. After reading this article, my brain was really purified. I am not a common black yandere, and I am not a brainless beauty. It is a strong amway! ! You have to read this book with your brain in mind, otherwise you may not be able to follow the subsequent plot, but if you follow the author step by step, you will find that it is really interesting! ! Amway, you won't lose money if you invest in it.

So pretty! I just hope that the previous emotional line can be clearer and more detailed. Although it is also very exciting for Gu Feiyu to feel that "I will never regret it, and I will never regret it even if I die", but rather than guessing, I hope that his complete mental journey can be presented. 707 Is more obvious. Why did the God of Creation who gave him happiness abandon himself, the proud son of heaven, and choose another unworthy one? He should have hated Yue Xi as the author, but when we really saw him, it might be because of his out-of-touch and familiar nature, or because he called himself with a smile and relied on himself in this unfamiliar world. Yue Xi first had a natural affection for the protagonist in his novel, and later knew that he was giving to the world and suffering to Gu Feiyu, but this was just because of his youth and frivolity. Just as he thought, Gu Feiyu was the epitome of his sixteen years old, so Yue Xi loved him almost instinctively, hoping that he could live a good life and embrace the beautiful life that belonged to him from the beginning. Therefore, when he revised the book later, Gu Feiyu became the favored son of heaven at the beginning. But I don't know when Yue Xi really started to fall in love with Gu Feiyu, because I don't think Yue Xi fell in love with Yue Xi so early, but what Yao said later overturned my idea. Yue Xi fell in love with Gu Feiyu as soon as he entered the sect? I don't know, so I wonder if I have loved Gu Feiyu from the first day he was born. Whether it is the first version of him or the second version of him, it is still him. But ten years have passed, Yue Xi has forgotten this love, but seeing him at the age of twelve, Yue Xi still hopes that he can live the first version of his life, not the second version that he wrote out of anger.

Oh my god, it's so beautiful😇 I think the emotions of the protagonist are relatively delicate. Depin has experienced so much and returned to modern times to fulfill the reader's dream. Author, you must write something in the extra story🍗 (doge

Oh my gosh, what a brain-burning short story. Everyone has their own way and life, but they are entangled with each other. Everyone's IQ is online. The new settings are amazing. Abuse? I'm not sad, it was all perfect in the end, I really cried and laughed, and the last few chapters gave me goosebumps. Wow wow wow, the author is really awesome. Every character has flesh and blood and something they want to protect. Try your best to give everything just for the other person to be successful. Not cruel at all! ! ! ! ! ! Show them all to me! ! ! It really saved my book drought temporarily! ! !

A very cool book... Everyone has a brain except me Looking at him, hey, this one is a good person, and so is this one. Then, holy shit, why are you like this, shit, why do you change your face, and then, shit, shit, shit, shit Ignore the suggestion if you are not smart enough, you will understand it anyway if you look at it) anthracene. It's so good to watch, sometimes it really gives me goosebumps. It's a great book, and it will definitely be rated high.

To be honest (●—●), there is actually a section in the middle where the author's writing is quite confusing, and I couldn't tell for a while whether it was 707 or Gu Feiyu from another world, but I have to say that the overall writing is really great (//∇//) Yes There is a profound description of the character's heart, which is really great (//∇//) To be honest, Mo Li left a deep impression on me. He is a complex, very complex character, but he is also very gentle. I don't know, I have been talking about Moli Moli, right? Because I always thought that this reason might be Mo's intention to leave? Maybe it's because I've read and understood it [laughing and crying] Anyway, the two protagonists are well portrayed. I always thought that in the later stage, they would be imprisoned in a small black room and forced to make sauce. In the end... I didn't even finish anything, I was interrupted [I almost cried] I was actually very uncomfortable during this period, especially the part about Zheng Mo's death in the early stage really impressed me. I still remember that I took a screenshot [shy] If possible, the author can make another extra story about him. He waited for his family in the end, right? Feng Zhi, I'm really sorry, I really like him, I really want to love him, I'm sorry, I'm sorry m(._.)M Let's talk about our most powerful poison master and milk master, this guy, I have always had very complicated feelings for him... Actually, I am halfway I kind of like him, but at the same time I hate him. It can be said that he is the strongest villain. If he is placed in another small world, he is the strongest villain in the end. It must be him [face covering] Uh, but it is obvious that this guy doesn't seem to want to live in the first place? Okay (~_~;) I don't understand a madman, what is going on in his head? -_-||Mu Zhiming From the beginning of the chapter, I thought this would be a very, very, very, very, very important role... But in fact, it is quite important. Fortunately, the author gave him a very good extra chapter. Author, you didn't write his extra chapter [I almost cried] I forgot the name of the other one. I just remember that his last word is Nian, so let's call him Nian Comrade. I have to say that the author Dada, after the article, describes the complex description of his heart, Actually, I'm really fucked. I was shocked, but it's actually normal. After so many years, his thoughts have become more and more pure. He just wants to ascend. But I have to say, it's still a little heartbreaking (┯_┯). I thought Senior Sister Mu wouldn't die like this, but in the end, I really killed him with a dart [crying] The next step is our sister Jiang Miyue, please accept me. Please, I love you to death, stay with me! ! ! And those two brothers were so damn true. The younger brother committed suicide for his older brother. At that moment, I really lost my fucking brains. They showed me how cruel they were and I rolled seven times on the ground, which then led to dysmenorrhea. [Smile] Oh, yes, and Yan Shu, the worker who was the most brutally beaten in the whole book! Ah, I hope he can stop working like this in the future, and Sect Master Song, I hope you and Mo Li can be together well, and don't be deceived again. I hope you two stay together forever, lock it up! Then... There is Old Man Yin, who is really a pure alcoholic. I, the author, will write more 8+1 for him in the future, but... Drinking is harmful to the body, so be careful about the amount [Thinking] Then there is a young lady, I really can't remember her name, and his sense of existence is a bit low... But he is an ambitious person, and I hope he gets better and better! Let's talk about our protagonist Gu Feiyu. I actually looked it up in the dictionary. The word "" really has a meaning. It's not that I can't believe the author, but I'm just out of curiosity. [Face covering] To be honest, I still hope that this song is real. I hope he can have a game with Qilin Qi with just two sandwich cookies. I believe our Yuexi can do it. To be honest, this is a bit equivalent to pseudo-orthopedics but it is very good. I like it very much (≧∇≦*) Let me think again. Have I missed anything? Oh, yes, and his character Yasha should be able to become good friends with Feng Zhi later on, right? The two of them are really interesting, and they are really interesting when they get along (//∇//) When Feng Zhi died, I thought Ya Sha would come to save him, but I didn't expect it to be too late [crying] And then just when I thought Feng Zhi was gone, he actually still had a trace of his soul that made me cry for half an hour. After seeing this, I felt like I was crying in vain [rolling eyes]

Rather than destiny, I believe that Ai Gu is Yue Xi's salvation for herself. This book is like a child who was hurt by his original family and uses "The Supreme God" as a catharsis. Later, when it is read into the book, it is a soothing for the soul.

It's very interesting👀The story is novel. Nowadays, Tomato's routines are all the same or the setting is very good but the writing style can't keep up. It's easy to get into trouble after just reading a little bit. This is a niche treasure [love][love][love][crazy][crazy]

It's super good-looking, the plot is well connected, and the logic is super smooth. The pitfalls have been filled in, and the plot is not cliche. There are highlights for everyone, not the heartthrob [full] The characters are rich and the starting points of the protagonists are also different. It is a very novel reading experience. Everyone has their own path to take, and there are reasonable reasons for their actions and actions. This is not a mindless article [blowing kiss] The language expression is very clear and the words are used appropriately. There are no overly gorgeous words, but it can render a unique situation and atmosphere, making people immersed in it. The writing is not a novice [Love] To sum up, if you are lucky enough to get in, there is no need to rush! [Laugh][laugh][laugh] Woohoo, I've finished watching it, it's so beautiful. Although it is he at the end, I feel that the overall atmosphere of the whole text is depressing, full of destruction and rebirth. From the perspective of our protagonist, it's okay, but if I were a mortal or a cultivator with low qualifications, I would choose to be finished directly [hold]

Damn, your writing is really beautiful, very nice, very nice. This is really the first time I have seen this kind of writing. I like it so much. ٩(♡㉨♡)۶ When there are more people, it will definitely have a high rating.

After reading it, I felt really sweet. Many things happened naturally, everyone made their own choices, and the ending didn't seem so important. I can understand Yue Xi's emotional changes. After all, he is the character he wrote. He has poured out the unwillingness and regrets of his youth. When facing a real person, it is difficult not to be moved. The most amazing thing is that Yue Xi returns to reality and the dream about his youth "This is a self-salvation for the past, and it is also to make up for everything that is not perfect." So everyone has a happy ending! (Except maybe Ying Beiqiu?)

It's the author's first book, but I think the plot and everything are very good, and a random sentence could be a foreshadowing for what's to come. Although the author said that he wrote this without any meaning, I think it was really well written and made a lot of regrets come true. (By the way, Mo Li is really gentle when he is not distorted by hatred. There is a little typo. Although everyone was very gentle in version 2.0, Some people still feel that they don't have to worry about what they did in version 1.0.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good!

The teacher's writing is generally very high-level and novel! The memes are all new, but it feels a bit like I was writing in a hurry to catch up with the progress. The development of the emotional line is a little abrupt, but overall it is very good! Big cheers for the author! ! !

Finished reading In fact, I rarely read anything lower than 8.0. Suddenly I got interested in reading this one. Although it is only 7.5, I really feel that I should give it an 8.5. Otherwise, I wouldn't have stayed up until 3 o'clock when my phone only had 12 battery left to finish it. The author's writing style was indeed not very good at first, but it became smoother as time went on. After reading a few chapters for the first time, I still have some "little problems" But overall good I feel like the whole book has a tendency to open low and go high. At the beginning, the protagonist travels through the old routine in the book, but then it becomes more and more exciting. After reading it as a whole, I still like this book very much Finally, I wish the author a happy day

I am a long-time bookworm. After reading this book, I thought the story was good. Although it didn't impress me, the story was interesting enough to attract me to read it. My thoughts after reading it are, when the extra story comes out, I really want to see the reaction to the changed "Supreme God" and the life of the protagonists in modern times. If they all come to play, can't you also write it for me? [Sending Hearts]

It's beautiful, my favorite is Feng Zhi!

It looks good, but the emotional line is a bit weird. It feels like we are together like this? However, there was one comment that struck a chord with me. It is indeed possible to look like half a narcissus. And there is Brother 7, I love you so much, although I also prefer the other one. Alas, children who cry can eat sweets.

Not many people saw it, it's really beautiful\(//∇//)\

This is the first novel that shocked me at how quickly the characters were released. All our favorite characters are really dead. I thought they would be resurrected. It's really beautiful. I watched 80 in one go. But you kid, wait for me. Do you think I can't buy a Nationwide Pass ticket? I don't blame you after reading this. Family fun is the best! There is nothing particularly tearful in the whole article, but my eyes really made me pee when I saw Song Mo's CP getting married.

The very cute Yue Xi🥺🥺🥺 I was really touched when I saw the sentence written about Gu "He has now become an adult". After meeting Yue Xi, his life has completely returned to the right track. The characters and the story are very good. He just likes the reunion ending.

The plot was very good and made my brain spin, but the descriptions in some places were so vague that it was difficult to understand. I hope the author can continue his work. The characters are full and meaningful, especially Feng Zhi. I really like this character. [Love][love][love]

It's good-looking, really good-looking. The author has created each character in a three-dimensional way, and the plot is also very novel. I just felt a bit empty after reading the book. Although everyone lived a happy life in the ending, the tragedies of the first two worlds seemed to have been erased. It was a bit unspeakable [crying]. But everyone can live peacefully in the new world. It couldn't be better.

There is a kind of beauty that does not belong to tomatoes. It is a very new setting for me. It is the most logical fairy tale I have read recently. The shortcoming is that there are some language errors, but the wording reminds me of my goddess. Halfway through, I remembered watching Liu Yao, and the supporting characters were all dead. It's so damned good. Except for the main character, not much of it survives (I don't think it's the same thing after the reboot and before the reboot). I read the book reviews halfway through, and when I glanced at it, I saw someone saying "be". My heart suddenly dropped. I don't like watching "be," but I continued reading it after being so entangled with it all afternoon.

Super pretty! The rating will definitely go up

At first I thought it was just an ordinary little sweet story, but then I started working on it at zero frames, with glass slag mixed with sugar. Fortunately, all the regrets (most of them) were resolved in the end. Although the ending may be a bit too idealistic, in my opinion this is the best ending.

It's very good to watch. The plot is very clear and the plot is very interesting. The only thing that may be the reason why I watched it faster is that I think the emotional line is a little blurry (?). I feel that the changes in Yue Xi's feelings for Xiao Yu are a bit unclear. Or maybe Yue Xi liked Xiao Yu from the beginning? But overall it's very interesting, so please give it a thumbs up! I want to watch the extra episode [sending my heart]

Nice! The setting is very interesting. I thought it was some kind of lighthearted and funny article, but it turned out to be very touching later on. Maybe it was because I shed tears. To sum up, it's funny at the beginning, a bit boring in the middle, and touching at the end.

Funny in the early stage, knife in the middle, redemption in the later stage, the description is compact, the writing is a bit immature, but overall it is good, and the ending is HE. But when watching the middle period, it is recommended to be mentally prepared, because it is a real sword, and almost every character has a lot of regrets (except Ying XX) Good ending! ! ! ! ! ! !