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- Martial Arts
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- Male-Channel Fanfiction
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Explore more →Stay up All Night! ! Hand over All the Novels You Have Read! ! !
I want to read a book similar to "Hong Kong Films: Across the World".
Which Fanfic Is the Most Surprising to People Today? It Still Looks Like a Second Drama After Watching It
Growth-Type Unlimited Flow, Too Many Unlimited Flows Are Too Strong and Boring.
Male or female
Time Travel Martial Arts, One Piece at a Time, No Comprehensive
City, Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Grandmaster
Single heroine but no virgin
Is There Such a Thing as Zhutianliu, the Kind of Novel That Travels Through Worlds One by One?
Is there such a thing as Zhutianliu, the kind of novel that travels through worlds one by one?
Under One Person, the Republic of China and the Heavenly Master Are of the Same Generation
TV Series Fan Fiction
Various TV series about time travel and rebirth
Get All of the Under One Person Series! ! !
God-Killing, Powerful, I Feel Like I Have Fallen Off the Altar, and I Have No Desire to Watch Anymore.
Recommend some good books,
Zhengyangmen Series Don't Dress Like Han Chunming
The protagonist's internal strength is the Nine Yang Divine Skill, and his physical training is the Dragon Elephant Prajna Skill. He can also master the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms
Film and Television World, Don't Fuse, Don't Fuse, Don't Fuse. Can't See the Fusion
I want to read a book similar to "Quick Time Travel: A Film and Television Journey Starting from My Parents' Love".
The Male Protagonist Travels to the World of the Divine Eagle and Falls in Love with Li Mochou!
The male protagonist travels to the martial arts world of the Condor Heroes and becomes a Taoist couple with Li Mochou!
Find a Martial Arts Novel About Walking Around the World and Being at Ease.
Don't want to be an official in the imperial court, especially Jinyiwei, Dongchang and the like, as long as you can walk freely in the world
I'm Looking for a Book Where the Main Character Can Mind His Own Business and Just Mind His Own Business.
I don't care about my own affairs at all
Zhutianliu, Traveling Through Worlds! Beg!
Please Travel to Major Movie Worlds. Only the Protagonist Can Travel Through Them.
Resident Evil series, Marvel series, etc., The protagonist can travel through time and again
A Book That Allows You to Travel Through the World of Movies and TV Shows and Return to the City
The more, the merrier.
Pure Learning Book
They stayed up late looking at their mobile phones, and I stayed up late reading study books, which kept them busy! ! !
💥A Masterpiece That Was Made a God by One Person
Recently, I Like to Travel Through All the Worlds, but I Can't Find a Good One.
Is there a Jinwu start, and then Jiu Shu-Liao Zhai-Xian Xia-Honghuang?










































































































So far, it seems good. The plot and writing are fairly smooth, and the understanding is incredible. It's not the kind of understanding that can produce two magical skills with just two clicks. The second volume is not so good for one person, but the others are okay, except for the character of the protagonist. Apart from anything else, the protagonist lives until the heroine dies of old age. During these decades or even nearly a hundred years, his mentality and character have not changed at all. It is as if the years when the protagonist and the heroine had children were fake, and he is still scheming at every turn. Is this the mentality and demeanor that an invincible great master who has raised the upper limit of the martial arts world by an unknown amount in the past hundred years should have? Later, Master Tian also said that the protagonist was arrogant. I didn't see the arrogance, but the arrogance was real. He got distracted during the fight with Zhang Zhiwei, or he didn't care about Zhang Zhiwei at all, and just wanted to let him show off what he had learned. At this age, I really think I am nine years old. I have lived for so many years without any composure. It is as if there is a ghost chasing behind me, asking the protagonist to repair faster. It is normal to be anxious in the first world. After all, the protagonist has a family, even if it is not for himself, it is for his family. In the second world, when the heroine dies, shouldn't the protagonist slow down? Things will eventually turn against each other. After being anxious for so many years, it is a good time to adjust your mentality. Normal people will be quiet for a while and walk around alone. This is not only to learn more about the people and practice in other worlds, but also to adjust their own mentality.
This is a novel that truly has incredible understanding. Other novels of this type are all disguised as having incredible understanding, but in fact they are just like systematic indoctrination.
You can write. More than 98% of the works. But at present, the combat power is a bit collapsed. The imperial palace has two innates, and Jianghu has none. If there is any conspiracy and trickery, they can be killed directly. The third world went to Hokage, and the fate was over. Sure enough, it hit the street.
Rewatching The Magician brings unexpected rewards, haha, I wish the new hot pot work a great success. Get on the Ferrari track early [laughs]
Yes, yes, this is the real enlightenment that defies heaven. Read a thousand volumes and you will know your heart; travel thousands of miles and you will know your path! This is the use of understanding, not the so-called full level understanding. In fact, the system sends a lot of messy things.
The enlightenment described in this way is quite decent. It is difficult to evaluate any of the god-level enlightenment techniques nowadays. Hey, how should I put it? It looks a bit interesting, but now that I have a childhood sweetheart and a child bride, I don't think it's that good. It's weird.
Very good, this is the real understanding that goes against the sky, not the kind of understanding that goes against the system. I hope the author can continue to write. There is also an author who is not a harem, but hopes to have more female protagonists, and not to accept vases, but to accept female characters with potential and qualifications, so that they can accompany the protagonist to go further. If it is a vases, forget it.
It's good-looking, how should I put it, avenging the old man (adoptive father), taking care of Qingmei, changing from the arrogance and arrogance of the time traveler to peace, and there is a touch of warmth. It's a pity that the protagonist is extremely talented, but he is just a world of few people and a dream of many people. For most of us ordinary people, it is just a dream, and reality is just wallowing in the quagmire. It should be noted that when he was young, he had great ambitions and was once considered to be the best in the world. Come on, everyone who works hard deserves to be encouraged.
After chasing it from the magician, there was an unexpected surprise! This book is very fast-paced and I like it very much [laughs] [laughs] The writing is good and the characters are well drawn!
The writing is good, but the author doesn't dare to make major changes to the plot. He sticks to the main plot and only dares to make some changes and additions outside the main plot that have little impact. Personally, I don't like this style. I'm worried about the main plot, so I can't let go. It's not enjoyable enough to read.
I was deceived by the label. It was originally promised that there would be no heroine, but later on I fell in love with Lu Huaer and even talked about having children. I would like to comment here to avoid being deceived!
I've read a few chapters and I think it's okay. Tomato is a rare author with good writing skills. Why is the rating so low? The back is really not that good
After reading the whole story, the protagonist's understanding does not feel stiff. Very well written and hope the author can keep it up.
This is what I want to see, it's so cool
Although it is the first world in the world, it is really well written. I read it in one sitting. It is a really good book. Good luck to the author [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
The writing is really good, but the plot suddenly gave me a miss. It's a pity that the flowers are gone. After all, it's only the first world. Zhutianwen is like this, if you can't find someone who can go on with you, it's better to have no heroine. But there is no tragedy in the world! I hope the flowers can come back to life later!
The progress is good so far and it's worth watching. A person with knowledge and understanding who is a genius can truly realize it on his own, rather than something created out of thin air.
Come on! Author, authors like you are rare, please do your best.
I can give 90 points to Swordsman, 100 points to One Man, and 70 points to Naruto. Maybe I don't like watching Naruto. I want to skip over to Harry Potter and wait for the next one.
Swordsman and One Person are my favorites, especially One Person. It has reasonable logic and a perfect ending. It is the best among so many One Person. But after entering Naruto, Harry Potter became a bit unwatchable. Maybe it's because of the difference in world style, so it's a bit weird when watching it. I won't say the ending at the end.
Anyway, it is the common people who are harmed by the charlatans, and the court is oppressing them. Only the court people are caught and killed. There is no need to worry about rapists and kidnappers. The court takes care of them. The court just needs to suppress the people, but the protagonist has to think a lot. The protagonist wants to make the world chaotic and roll up, and he doesn't care about the people anyway. The protagonist just needs to stick to his own bottom line [staring], saying that he has his own bottom line, but I don't see the soul of modern people, but it is surprisingly indifferent. It doesn't feel good to look at it. If it is just aboriginal, there is nothing to say. Modern people are surprisingly indifferent. The goodwill of ordinary people cannot arouse a trace of disgust towards criminals. They can only watch with cold eyes, capable, but not caring. Anyway, if you like to watch this kind of behind-the-scenes stuff, you can check it out. The writing is okay.
After reading the whole book, my understanding is truly incredible! Very beautifully written! Especially the first and second volumes, I read them several times. Although I don't really like conspiracy bosses and the like, I also read the first and second volumes several times. The shortcomings are that it was written too briefly and too quickly, and the strength in the later stage was increased too quickly, which made me want to collapse, and then I was forced to separate myself to limit my strength, and the world selection was not very good, but the writing made me feel quite satisfied! One last thing, start the next one! ! ! !
The pace is not sluggish, the characters are full of personality, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the protagonist's combat power is not overwhelming, which meets all the essence of Shuangwen. Once many authors change the plot, they don't know what to write next, so they forcefully suppress the protagonist's combat power and make the plot follow the same path as the original work. This book is different. It does not suppress the protagonist's combat power. After changing the plot, the subsequent rewriting is even more exciting, and the characters of the supporting characters are also very consistent with the original work. The protagonist is also written with affection and justice, making people feel very comfortable with his character. When I read cool articles, I usually read them to the end. They are fast food articles that I can swallow in one gulp. But I have been following this book, and every day it is updated, the plot will advance. Unlike some authors, a piece of nonsense that has nothing to do with the plot can go on for more than ten chapters. The author of this book also updates a lot every day, which is very suitable for reading books. My personal rating is above 9.6
I'll give you a bottle of oil at the beginning. It's interesting. It's really interesting. I can't resist this poison. Come on.
This star is deducted from the will of the world under one person and the world of Naruto. To sum up, before one person's ending, it is regarded as fairy grass, and after one person, it can only be regarded as ordinary food and grass with no flaws.
The writing is really good, especially the one-person piece. I haven't watched the latter one. I haven't watched Naruto and I don't really like Harry Potter. So after reading Pig's Feet and writing One Person, it's considered finished. Especially worth seeing. The author wrote the one-person chapter particularly well, and I highly recommend it.
I like to be proud of the world and be inferior to one person. Naruto didn't like it very much and skipped a lot of it. Harry Potter is okay, but Marvel just sucked it up, which is a pity. Overall, it's well written, although it's poorly finished and has flaws. The world is not well organized. After becoming a fairy, it's not a bit fun, and it loses one star due to the bad ending.
The writing of Swordsman is pretty good! It's very artistic, and it's not a simple novel. It's thought-provoking. I only watched the first world. I liked traditional martial arts, but the subsequent worlds felt like I was on the wrong track. I just keep following martial arts and gradually advance to high martial arts!
The writing is okay, but there is something strange about Ah Qing in the front. Tomatoes generally do not accept such a setting. Come on, the author, I will give you a long review. Update it quickly. Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent. Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent. Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent. Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent Urgent.
The overall writing style is very smooth. Xiaoao and One World explain the power system very well, and the protagonist's high understanding is also very distinctive. Unfortunately, some content was blocked for a period of time due to sensitive content, resulting in data deterioration. In order to control the combat power, the world of Naruto makes the protagonist act as an old man who occasionally takes action, and the main stage is left to the Sannin himself to act as a backdrop for his existence from time to time. It seems that the author wanted to cut it off in this section, but was persuaded by the editor to come back. Harry Potter still does the same thing, becoming Hermione's grandfather. The difference is that he may have taken Hermione in to inject new blood. In fact, I personally think this emotional line is quite well written, more detailed than Lu Hua'er's. The first half of the story is still above the standard. But in the second half, the author obviously messed up the rhythm and mentality of the readers who shouted for a single heroine in the comment area and the Potter world, and wrote this section hastily. Because some readers complained that they didn't want to read Marvel, the author changed the outline again, but after detouring for a few chapters, he returned to Marvel and became an ordinary person doing scientific research, saying that something at home was unfinished. Overall, it's a bit of a pity. The last fifty chapters were messed up by fault-finding readers and life, so it could only be ended in a hurry. But then again, the discussion of cultivation in the second half is basically about simply understanding the laws - understanding higher laws. The story is not that exciting, and there is nothing to be done about the poor data.