Returning to the Ruined Building at Dusk

First time posting a comment. Although the story line is quite long, it is beginning to become clearer now. I stopped reading it once before and saved more than 200 chapters. It is actually quite easy to persuade people to quit when the story line is extended. There are also many characters, and there are quite a lot of people who need to remember them. There are also many holes that the author has buried. Let's see how the author fills them. However, overall I think it is still very interesting, the story is quite exciting, and the characters are well established. Shen Yichen has grown a lot from the original boy who went down the mountain, and has also subtly changed many people. For example, Sister Qing and Sister Yan are the best examples. In short, come on, I hope the author can achieve better results

Overall, it's pretty good. There are too many pitfalls and it feels a bit messy. I hope it can be filled out. Also, I hope to see the protagonist become smarter. He is really too stupid. He just came out of the mountain at the beginning. It is understandable to be stupid, but after experiencing so many things, his mind should slowly grow up.

Not bad, looking at it now. Keep watching

The character of the protagonist is quite unique, and the psychological descriptions of the characters are very vivid and flexible. It's quite good, and the characteristics of each person are portrayed in a very stylish way. Do you feel like the description is too much? The plot is a bit slow

It's good to read, and I came across a good book for free time, [smile]

There are a lot of pitfalls, and the story is quite fascinating. It's rare to see such excellent works in 🍅, but its popularity is quite low. I don't know why.

It's really good to watch. There are only a few people who can watch Tomato. Why are there so few people watching it [face covering] It's very interesting, thank you to the author; I keep reading.

It's okay, there are new ideas, especially after the talkative sister (Qing Jie) came out, it made my head hurt to watch it. There are also random digressions here and there, spoilers and sentimentality, and the question of why you don't work hard to enter Immortal Land is mentioned no less than eight times, but in the text description, the protagonist has never practiced, and he is either drinking or playing dungeons. The gags should be appropriate, the text should be concise, and the foreshadowing should be concise and concise. Good luck. In the past three days, I have read no less than thirty books. Some have read more than ten chapters, some have read hundreds of chapters, and some have not been able to finish the first three chapters. Tomatoes just taste like this. There is no marketing or robots to swipe the screen. It is honestly very difficult. In fact, the author should not give up. Fewer spoilers, fewer exclamations, and tell the story well. This novel of yours is much better than Tomato's many romances about breaking up an engagement, Hehuan's romance, the mistress's taking his sister's romance, and Thirty Years in the East of the River and Thirty Years in the West of the River Don't Bully the Young and the Poor. Come on, I hope it will be completed one day.

Needless to say, it's so beautiful [laughs evilly]

It's very interesting, I hope the author doesn't stop it I have saved more than 500 chapters, which is almost enough to read.

I hope not to be stabbed, I hope not to be stabbed

I really want to know who Shen Yichen will fight against in the end. . . His dad? His master? Or his master? I can't understand,,, and where is Ji Xuanfeng? There is no news at all about this legendary figure! ! ! ! Looking forward to Wulang Bookstore

It's very beautiful, but I don't know why so few people watch it.

Be sure not to miss out, give away, or be green! ! !

It can be seen that the layout is very large, I hope it will not end in a sloppy way.

It's nice to look at, but the more you dig into it, the more edges you dig, and the author can't control it [thinking]

The writing is excellent and the subject matter is classic. It can be regarded as the legend of a strange hero

Although boring, this is a common problem among good novels

You have to eat it so soon, how many heroines are there?

It's quite special and different from all the fantasy stories I've seen before. I hope I can finish it and stop being a eunuch.

A dream language that talks about everything in the world. The protagonist is not brainless, every choice he makes makes sense, and the plot is novel.

The content is interlocking and interesting.

Not bad, very pretty

Calm down and take a look, it's not bad

Good looking, good plot

The world of love, hatred and hatred

It's not easy to write people like people.

It's nice to read, but I feel like there's a lot that I haven't written yet.

I feel like reading Dream of Red Mansions [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Support me. I made a head start on Lingxu Mountain in front of me. Although it's complicated, I can see how big the layout is. It's worth continuing to read. I haven't read the rest yet, so I hope it's not bad [Blow a kiss]