Potions Master and Care of Magical Creatures Professor

Shamelessly give yourself a five stars. Unknowingly, I said a bit too much, so the simplified version is: I love Mia and Severus, and this fanfic is about making Severus happy throughout his life. Opinions on the four colleges: In my opinion, the four colleges are the same, and each college has its own advantages and characteristics. The four founders came together like-minded to start Hogwarts. Later, Salazar left due to disagreements over his ideas, but it did not go so far as to antagonize others. The song sung by the Sorting Hat at the beginning of the fifth grade reflects on whether it has affected student unity by dividing students into four houses. Therefore, in my opinion, Slytherin and Gryffindor have never been opposites. Slytherin is not all bad people, Gryffindor is not all good people, Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff are not necessarily selective and neutral. These two schools are also excellent. About the heroine: My heroine, she is just an ordinary little girl, without a prominent family background or a genius mind, but to Severus, she is a warm little sun. Because Si Jiao's life is too dark, I hope there will be a ray of warm sunshine to illuminate him. About being friends with Lily: I'm sorry, I can't describe anything bad about Lily, because Lily is a very beautiful girl in the original book. Since they are two very good girls, why can't they be friends? Mia had no friends before she was six years old. After she was six years old, she met Severus and became friends. But after all, Severus was a boy. At this time, Lily, who was also a girl, a wizard, good-looking, and had a good personality, appeared. Why couldn't Mia like Lily and be friends with her? Regarding the plot: It may be very bland, with no twists and turns, and impossible to abuse. Because I think living an ordinary life is the most rare thing. Friends, lovers, and children are all around you. The biggest worry every day is what to eat for lunch. In my opinion, this is the happiest thing. The Sijiao in the original work is already hard enough, and I don't want him to endure hardship in my fanfic. So I write the fanfic just to make him happy and to see him endure hardship, so just read the original work.

It's a good read. After reading this book, I really feel more and more sorry for the original Snape. The parents of the child's life really have to bear a lot of responsibility. I am very happy that he has also met a mother like Aunt Shafiq, who is willing to guide him and educate him. It's great to have my sister's company.

In my opinion, this score is not directly proportional to the quality of the article. The score is low. The original heroine, CP Sijiao, childhood sweethearts grew up together without being reborn. The whole story is sweet and heart-warming. The heroine's separation to the lion's courtyard may have put many readers away, but I personally feel that there is nothing wrong with it later, and it is not like some paragraphs saying that she will lick Lily. The heroine is very tough, just like the four lions from the marriage era! The heroine is also very powerful. She and Sif fought with four lions (to the point of throwing curses at each other), but the relationship later eased and the relationship was not that bad. The heroine and Sifu went abroad to get married right after graduation (to avoid the limelight) Because the heroine has a good relationship with Lily, she and Sev became Harry's godfather and godmother (Sirius is also a godfather). With their protection, children are no longer needed to fight Voldemort, and adults contribute throughout the book. Everyone is fine [Thinking]

The overall plot is good, the story of Sif and the heroine's childhood sweetheart falling in love and living smoothly. It is suggested that the author should use fewer brackets to mark his or her thoughts, and they can be written in what the author has to say later. From my personal experience, too many brackets can be a bit confusing.

The heroine and Silver were childhood sweethearts. Silver had a wonderful (?) Childhood and did not join the Death Eaters. Although Lily and James are still dead, and although Harry has been sent to his aunt's house, he has a godfather and a godmother. He is no longer dependent on others like in the original book. He is as naughty and mischievous as James. A bland ending, but I quite liked it, everyone was pretty good.

I've finished reading it. It's very well written. I've always wanted to read an HP like this. Most of the stories about the parent generation include all members, but in this case, you can usually only see the parent generation, the story cannot be continued, and the child generation is basically nothing to watch. Therefore, the writing is very good. From the parent generation to the offspring generation, the plot is not missing, and it is neither too perfect nor too ordinary.

I like this style very much. Mia is very cute. Her mother is really good at educating children. Sifu here will be jealous of Lily. Hahaha, he and Mia are childhood sweethearts. They are very close to each other. He is becoming more and more curious about the truth. Who is Mia's father? It's so good to watch. Please come to more.

Well, it's a sweet little article, not bad... To be honest, the heroine's identity is really logical! According to the setting of the original work, it is so perfectly integrated into the existence of the heroine, and it feels very self-consistent! The main plot is roughly consistent with the growth path of Si Si. Just because of the existence of the heroine, Si Si's life has undergone earth-shaking changes. The departure of his scumbag father and the second spring of his love-minded mother have at least freed him from the torture of his original family. Even if his mother still doesn't love him that much, he has received enough care and care from the heroine, filling the gap in family ties. The heroine is even more like a cookie, pulling Si Si forward happily~ The school days are also noisy and exciting, and the predators are still feuding, but this time with the help of the heroine, the two sides can even gain the upper hand in the fight! And during the most stressful period, they can also travel around the world to provide magic potion backup to the Order of the Phoenix... The biggest setback in the novel is the departure of Lily and James. Harry suffered for three years, and the stupid dog still spent twelve years in prison... But the dog asked for it, so it's not important~ The plot gradually changes later. After rescuing Regulus from an accident, the heroine and Sisi are doing their jobs as professors. , While raising children, he also cooperated with Dumbledore to find and destroy Horcruxes... Even after Harry entered school, he still fulfilled the heroine's wishes and only had to be a child who grew up healthy and happy. The work of resisting Voldemort head-on was basically done by them... They even did it all the way to the finale... The main plot should be considered a bland and warm daily flow. The most lively and enthusiastic one is the heroine. The other characters, including Si Jiao, are a little bit thin and don't feel like they stand up... The plot arrangement is okay, and the writing is not a novice. It can be read as a sweet article~ Lightning protection: Irene remarried and gave birth to a child. The heroine Sisi is Harry's godfather and godmother (Sirius is also his godfather). It is estimated that ggad reunited after retirement (mentioned!). Sirius was really disgusting when he was a teenager. Everyone except Lily James survived QAQ

I like it very much, it's not that dramatic, but a lot of life is like this. I think that if Harry could do it, he wouldn't want to lose his relatives, partners, and some innocent people in a dramatic way.

After reading the full text, I really like this Sijiao fanfic. The plain happiness is exactly what Sijiao craves in the original work. In this text, he meets his angel, his happiness, and his only one. He no longer stands alone in the darkness, he has his own sun, his own family, and care around him. Maybe the writing style is not the best, but it is the one that makes me feel the most happy in Sri Lanka. Every fanfic is a branch of other worlds. I hope that Sri Lanka in other worlds can always be happy, happy, and safe [Love] [Love] [Love] Of course, I also like the heroine very much, she is a lovely angel. It would be great if my mother could always be here.

It's super good-looking. Although some of the process in this book is very omitted, it does not affect the viewing. After seeing the chapter where Voldemort was eliminated, my heart slowly relaxed. Mia and Snape can finally live a good life without being as worried as before. As a Situ, the only thing I want to read is to make Sijiao happy. Every time I read some of it, I feel really comfortable. The ending of this book is perfect, making Mia and Snape happy forever. Like, it is very beautiful.

Sijiao! Must be happy! ! (Shouting) There is no cruelty in the whole story except that the heroine lost her mother and Harry still lost his parents (so if you mind this setting, please don't read it and give it a low score). The plot of the heroine beating up the big black dog when she was a child was super cool and it was super cool to die in the end without any incident.

An ordinary, warm life, a life that has been painful but with family members still around. Harry's godmother gave Harry a complete childhood, and Snape, his childhood sweetheart, gave him a warm life. There was no war, Sirius, Lupine, Gemini, Cedric, and GGAD were all still there. But Lily James still left.

Well, there is a book that I liked to read very much before, but I haven't read it in the past two days, so I fell back into it again. Uh, I don't understand a bit. I just read the comments, and they were all talking about the opposing positions of Gryffindor and Slytherin. I feel like people don't like reading bios anymore. The introduction is different from the original text, and it may be very OOC. Am I wrong or is the world wrong? Uh, and personally I think it's okay. There is nothing wrong with my core values, so why am I so hostile to the heroine? Don't understand, don't agree, don't approve. Well, because it was a book I read a long time ago. I don't quite remember the general direction of the plot, and I've already seen the ending. I mainly like to read sweet stories and some super sadistic stories. In my opinion, from the perspective of a bystander, it may be a bit OOC. But overall it's pretty good.

The Sect in this book is not a Death Eater, does not have a crush on Lily, and does not tell a prophecy. All regrets have been made up for, and he is happier and more ordinary. He has a wife and children who are on the hot bed, and has his own little emotions that he will not hide. The heroine is also very good, Gryffindor is not a bad thing in my eyes, and the heroine has a very strong character, and she can forcefully confront and rob the foursome. After graduation, some small details can also reflect the heroine's temperament of doing things if she doesn't accept it, which is very refreshing to watch.

So far, it looks pretty good and warm. I may be more receptive to it, because it seems that many readers don't like it very much. Let's take a look at the current lightning protection points: 1. The heroine's mother is from the Shafik family and her father is a Slytherin (who is not revealed), but she was sorted into Gryffindor 2. The predators in this book are relatively rude, which may not be acceptable to people who like James and Sirius. I'll add more after reading it Halfway through, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. The heroine's mother gave the heroine and Si Jiao some good ideas when she was a child, so I think it's normal for Si Jiao to be a little OOC. But I don't know why, it just feels a little weird. So I gave it up for a while, and now I've come back to read it a little bit, and my memory is a little fuzzy. When I re-watched it, it seemed that the indescribable essence of his temperament was missing. I quite liked watching him be eccentric, but in the later period, it seemed that the eccentricity turned into a kind of dry humor, and his edges and corners seemed to become a bit smoother. The edges are still there, just not as distinct anymore. But if this is proof of happiness, there's nothing wrong with rounding the edges. It's just that I personally can't accept it. If you want to watch something ordinary and everyday, you can still watch it.

It's what I want to see [crying] [crying] It's really just ordinary and happy. There are no special twists and turns, just as happy as ordinary people. It's really, really good [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Not bad. The ending is a very bland and happy ending. I like it very much. Although the article is over, the story of Si Jiao and Mia is not over yet. Their lives are also dull and happy. I like it very much.

This book is not bad! The eldest heroine, has a CP, childhood sweethearts, go both ways, cool writing, fan fiction. The plot is coherent and the characters have distinct personality traits. The heroine is lively and cheerful, naughty and cute, dares to love and hate, smart and smart, calm and decisive, powerful, friendly, and very close to animals. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

It's very good. Although the plot is relatively flat (compared to other Sri Lankan sect fans), it will be very heartwarming. There is no abuse of the Sri Lankan sect and no abuse of the heroine! The heroine was really cute when she was in school. She almost saved everyone who was in trouble. It was pretty good! People should read sweet articles! ! After reading it, I want to write it myself hahahaha~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~

Looks good! ! ! Childhood sweethearts, and Snape's childhood can be said to be wonderful. Their children are also very cute, and Harry Potter did not have those bad childhood experiences in the original book, and he did not try to be a savior. Most of the things were solved by the heroine. I think it's pretty good-looking, not bad, not bad, not bad (๑>◡<๑)[][][][]

This HP fan with big letters is very, very perfect, and has achieved very light and very light OOC. This is also the first time I have posted a long review. What makes me speechless about this article is that few of the people in this book review have actually watched the movie or even the original book. This article does not whitewash people like James and Sirius. They are very annoying bullies. They can scold James, Sirius and the Marauders. Why do they criticize Gryffindor and Lily in the comment area? ! In the original book and the movie, there is no specific explanation that Lily did not do anything, nor that Lily participated in the bullying. I don't understand the comments in the comment section that they hate Lily and don't understand Lily. In my opinion, Lily is a very gentle person. I even don't understand why the heroine is assigned to Gryffindor and just licks Lily. There is nothing in the article. The discrimination of He Academy is perfectly displayed in the comment area. Some people saw that the heroine was assigned to Gryffindor, not because of licking Lily, but simply because she didn't like Gryffindor, so she wanted to abandon the article (of course, abandoning the article is your freedom, I don't think you need to be shady before abandoning the article, Gryffindor). I want to ask, what did Gryffindor mess with you? ! Then I guess I have read too many Slytherin fanfics, and Hufflepuff has not even appeared a few times. There are only a few people in the comment section who like it. Some people can even tell that they all think Hufflepuff is a loser just because the heroine is a snack. Damn, and I don't think the Sorting Hat will throw the heroine to Hufflepuff just because he likes to eat. If that's the case, then I don't think the heroine's mother needs to mention Newt Scamander, let alone Cedric Diggory. Even in Chapter 25, someone even said in the comment area that the Oolong was invented by the Malfoy family. I wonder if it was mentioned in the original book or the movie. Even JK Rowling's website Pottermore, which is specially registered for Harry Potter, did not mention it. , I think it's because I've read too many fanfics. I think that before reading fanfics, you should read more original works or movies, and then look for fanfics to make up for your regrets. Instead of reading the fanfics here if you haven't read the original movies, or you've seen very few, and even turn on the mic. In addition, I would like to praise the author for his great writing and very good writing. In fact, professorial writing is still relatively difficult to master and OOC. I think it is already better written among many articles. For friends who have read the original book and the movie, please do not open the comment section of this book when reading the book.

That's great, I hope the professor can always be happy. It's not that suffering creates a professor. He is a person. Whether suffering or not, he is a professor.

9 Points, original heroine, non-traditional strong woman, but outstanding in some aspects, CP Severus

It's good-looking, heartwarming and not abusive. Although it doesn't completely make up for the regrets, the two protagonists are very happy and complete. They are a match made in heaven and have a sweet love.

It's very warm and beautiful👀. Ordinary life is also a good life. The Sri Lankans here are very happy. I'm super happy. This book is worth reading [Like][Like][Like][Like] I really like this book because it gives Si Jiao a better life and makes Si Jiao no longer alone.

Mia is very cute, and Si's character fits the original work very well. Lily is also very cute, and she is not OOC at all. The writing is really good and warm. Maybe too few people have read it, and the rating is a bit low, but don't be fooled by the rating. It's really beautiful (o´ω`o)ノ

It's quite interesting. He is the most cowardly Voldemort I have ever seen [laughing and crying]

It's good to watch, the plot is not cookie-cutter, please give the author a big boost

It's very beautiful, I can't describe it in words. Sri Lanka is very happy and free of abuse (except for the heroine's mother)