I want to write a story about a child constantly establishing a correct outlook on life and growing up under the influence and education of his ancestors! Integrate Chinese martial arts and Tao concepts! To quell the wars of mankind, and thus elevate to the concept of a community with a shared future for mankind! The book of the final joint resistance to foreign enemies
Reader comments
It is an excellent and well-written work that becomes more and more exciting as it goes on. With its unique setting and exciting plot, it opens up a fascinating world.
From the plot point of view, the story has a tight rhythm and constant conflicts. The struggle between different forces for the mysterious space runs throughout, and every turn is exciting. The author cleverly lays the foreshadowing, and as the story progresses, layers of suspense are revealed, making people want to stop.
In terms of character creation, the protagonists have distinct personalities and three-dimensional images. They each have different purposes and beliefs, and they continue to grow in the struggle. The supporting characters are not simply foils. Their existence enriches the story and makes the whole story more three-dimensional.
The writing contains thoughts, which gives the novel a deeper value besides entertainment.
I like the protagonist Ling Qixuan very much. He has a distinctive personality, full of thoughts, and the storyline is very coherent. It is easy for people to get into the storyline. I am looking forward to the exciting content in the future~~~~
Overall, the storyline and characterization are very nice, and the writing is also very good. It is a good book worth recommending and adding to your bookshelf. There aren't many books like this on Tomato these days, they're too voluminous. If a good work comes out, of course it has to be praised [laughing]
The costume drama is quite good. I recommend it. Good luck. The author is great. I'm looking forward to the next one. It's very good and very beautiful. , The writing is smooth and exciting, the characters are very personal, I like it
Very nice to watch as the chase continues!
In order to introduce the characters in the narration, I felt that it was a bit delayed, but writing the later chapters felt much smoother! Just update it first and optimize it later! There is a lot I want to express in the content and story, but I always feel that it is not well written and has not been expressed! This is my first time writing a novel, so I forgive myself! I hope I can optimize it when I have more energy in the future. My goal when writing a novel for the first time is to finish it and don't give up! Come on
Very beautiful, highly recommended!
It's faster and faster. The more I read, the more I feel. The rhythm of the novel is very good. It is very different from the previous fairy tale novels. It is very imaginative. I suggest the author to simplify it more.
It's really beautiful. The author must insist on it. The writing is good. Keep up the good work.
The plot is slow and the content is fascinating. It's so interesting. The author will update it quickly.
The plot has ups and downs and the story content is rigorous. Please give the author a big boost.
Not bad, give it a like, I can't write costume dramas anyway, [face covering]
It's good to watch, and the plot is okay. The setting is wonderful. I finished reading it in one sitting. I'm catching up on it. Come on, update it faster and faster. I can't sleep at night.
Grab the first review. It's a very good novel. It's already on the bookshelf. The author will update it. I'm waiting to read it [Like]
A very good novel, with interlocking plots and delicate and unique writing. After unfolding the foreshadowing in the previous article, you will find a new world. Read more quickly!
Very good, well thought out! Recommended reading~
The story has ups and downs and is so exciting. The more I read, the more I want to read!
It can be seen that the author worked very hard on writing. It is the first time he has written it. The structure and plot are very reasonable and the rhythm is reasonable. It is good. Come on, author😊
A very nice novel. I really like it. I look forward to the author updating it soon.
Very good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Highly recommended, the plot and content are very good
It's very interesting, the plot is great, the male and female protagonists interact a lot and it's fun, the plot is reasonable, please update it, waiting to see it [smile][smile]
It is an excellent and well-written work that becomes more and more exciting as it goes on. With its unique setting and exciting plot, it opens up a fascinating world. From the plot point of view, the story has a tight rhythm and constant conflicts. The struggle between different forces for the mysterious space runs throughout, and every turn is exciting. The author cleverly lays the foreshadowing, and as the story progresses, layers of suspense are revealed, making people want to stop. In terms of character creation, the protagonists have distinct personalities and three-dimensional images. They each have different purposes and beliefs, and they continue to grow in the struggle. The supporting characters are not simply foils. Their existence enriches the story and makes the whole story more three-dimensional. The writing contains thoughts, which gives the novel a deeper value besides entertainment.
I like the protagonist Ling Qixuan very much. He has a distinctive personality, full of thoughts, and the storyline is very coherent. It is easy for people to get into the storyline. I am looking forward to the exciting content in the future~~~~
Overall, the storyline and characterization are very nice, and the writing is also very good. It is a good book worth recommending and adding to your bookshelf. There aren't many books like this on Tomato these days, they're too voluminous. If a good work comes out, of course it has to be praised [laughing]
The costume drama is quite good. I recommend it. Good luck. The author is great. I'm looking forward to the next one. It's very good and very beautiful. , The writing is smooth and exciting, the characters are very personal, I like it Very nice to watch as the chase continues!
In order to introduce the characters in the narration, I felt that it was a bit delayed, but writing the later chapters felt much smoother! Just update it first and optimize it later! There is a lot I want to express in the content and story, but I always feel that it is not well written and has not been expressed! This is my first time writing a novel, so I forgive myself! I hope I can optimize it when I have more energy in the future. My goal when writing a novel for the first time is to finish it and don't give up! Come on
Very beautiful, highly recommended!
It's faster and faster. The more I read, the more I feel. The rhythm of the novel is very good. It is very different from the previous fairy tale novels. It is very imaginative. I suggest the author to simplify it more. It's really beautiful. The author must insist on it. The writing is good. Keep up the good work.
The plot is slow and the content is fascinating. It's so interesting. The author will update it quickly.
The plot has ups and downs and the story content is rigorous. Please give the author a big boost.
Not bad, give it a like, I can't write costume dramas anyway, [face covering]
It's good to watch, and the plot is okay. The setting is wonderful. I finished reading it in one sitting. I'm catching up on it. Come on, update it faster and faster. I can't sleep at night.
Grab the first review. It's a very good novel. It's already on the bookshelf. The author will update it. I'm waiting to read it [Like]
A very good novel, with interlocking plots and delicate and unique writing. After unfolding the foreshadowing in the previous article, you will find a new world. Read more quickly!
Very good, well thought out! Recommended reading~
The story has ups and downs and is so exciting. The more I read, the more I want to read!
It can be seen that the author worked very hard on writing. It is the first time he has written it. The structure and plot are very reasonable and the rhythm is reasonable. It is good. Come on, author😊
A very nice novel. I really like it. I look forward to the author updating it soon.
Very good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Highly recommended, the plot and content are very good
It's very interesting, the plot is great, the male and female protagonists interact a lot and it's fun, the plot is reasonable, please update it, waiting to see it [smile][smile]