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The female protagonist is very beautiful. There is no male protagonist. There may be a male protagonist later.
System: Gardenia, you are so beautiful
Su Zhiyi: Thank you for your compliment
The heroine traveled through time and entered the Philippine Dream Girl. The heroine is the apple of her parents' brother's eye, and through her own efforts, she has become the brightest star of the Philippine Dream.
Reader comments
It's okay, but it's too watery and I can't stand it. The way of pronouncing people is a bit weird. It's my problem that I can't stand it. However, I saw that the first few chapters basically don't describe the plot. They all describe the appearance and temperament of so and so. There are also a lot of descriptions of clothing, and the updates are slow to begin with. It's still so watery. I've already read half of it, and the official plot hasn't started yet.
The description is very detailed, but there are too many useless things. For example, a chapter is written about just washing your face. I came here to watch singing and dancing, not to watch you wash your face [awkward laugh] Besides, every time the whole family goes out, the appearance must be described in detail. Once or twice is fine, but too many words make it long-winded [face covering] It is not until chapter 12 that I get to the point. The previous part is so long-winded, it can be shortened into 2 chapters.
It's okay, but it's too watery and I can't stand it. The way of pronouncing people is a bit weird. It's my problem that I can't stand it. However, I saw that the first few chapters basically don't describe the plot. They all describe the appearance and temperament of so and so. There are also a lot of descriptions of clothing, and the updates are slow to begin with. It's still so watery. I've already read half of it, and the official plot hasn't started yet.
The description is very detailed, but there are too many useless things. For example, a chapter is written about just washing your face. I came here to watch singing and dancing, not to watch you wash your face [awkward laugh] Besides, every time the whole family goes out, the appearance must be described in detail. Once or twice is fine, but too many words make it long-winded [face covering] It is not until chapter 12 that I get to the point. The previous part is so long-winded, it can be shortened into 2 chapters.
It feels very good, cheers for the author [Like]
Very pretty, but so little