Dream Girl: The Beautiful Girl Everyone Loves

It's okay, but it's too watery and I can't stand it. The way of pronouncing people is a bit weird. It's my problem that I can't stand it. However, I saw that the first few chapters basically don't describe the plot. They all describe the appearance and temperament of so and so. There are also a lot of descriptions of clothing, and the updates are slow to begin with. It's still so watery. I've already read half of it, and the official plot hasn't started yet.

The description is very detailed, but there are too many useless things. For example, a chapter is written about just washing your face. I came here to watch singing and dancing, not to watch you wash your face [awkward laugh] Besides, every time the whole family goes out, the appearance must be described in detail. Once or twice is fine, but too many words make it long-winded 🤦 It is not until chapter 12 that I get to the point. The previous part is so long-winded, it can be shortened into 2 chapters.

Very pretty, but so little

It feels very good, cheers for the author 👍