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I think the relationship between the two male protagonists and Teacher Liulingxian can be better expressed, and I think it looks better that way. [Facepalm] I also tried to write a book a few days ago. The subject matter is similar to the book Liulingxian Teacher. I have encountered some creative bottlenecks recently and I think I can learn from it. (Any similarities in the articles I wrote are purely coincidental, or I will mark them in parentheses. I hope Teacher Liulingxian doesn't mind) It would be interesting to see the contrast between Akainu

Hey, I feel like the writing is better than Bai Yun [eating melon] but the author, can Ace not die [almost crying] and can Xiao Sa not become an old uncle [almost crying] To be honest, Akainu is old, emm. If it really doesn't work, I think it's not a bad idea to keep Lobo (or others, like Hawkeye or something like that [laughing crookedly]) [laughing crookedly] Let's just say, it's not normal for a boyfriend to break up [makes a face] I think the protagonist's appearance will last forever, so it's great to find a handsome guy with the same good looks [laughs] Also, you must have a good relationship with the protagonist, you can teach, but don't have any conflicts [I'm about to cry] Ahem, as for Xiao Sa, try not to be OOC. You can make some changes, such as not attacking civilians casually, but you can't let pirates go, especially when you are Akainu. (It's not impossible to go our separate ways because of different ideas, right? [Laughs crookedly] [rolls eyes])

Come and comment, good reviews will praise you [laughing evilly], negative reviews will criticize you [crying]

It's frustrating enough to feel aggrieved, but it's not so easy to relieve hatred. I hope there will be the ability to contain souls later. It would be even better if the dead who had a crush on the protagonist could be resurrected.

It's really not bad. It's different from other pirate fan novels. It has its own main line and many original plots. So this book can only be said to be a new book set in the pirate world. The protagonist's character is a bit mean. The interaction with Sakaski is very interesting. This mode of getting along with friends is also a highlight. Very nice! Looking forward to the ending!

In fact, in the original work, I felt that it was quite outrageous for the Navy to give the Magma Natural Devil Fruit to a newcomer. The author did a good job in changing it. The protagonist is serious when he should be serious (but rarely is), and he is really funny when he is funny, but he can always achieve his goal, which is very good. All in all, it looks good, gkd

Good looking but a bit sad about the friendship🌚🌚🌚

It's so beautiful, the best Akainu [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Looking forward to the next one

Missing second Ren Tianye Yui Oh smooth and stable I am very grateful for the winter vacation of the happy installation. Field investigation ashes healthy and happy My second aunt has the feeling of climbing the mountain Linlin always shushing being scolded by you, it will be better to watch next time vvv no no no then you whisper slowly oh oh oh oh Leo works overtime no: v eat eat eat every day $ there are many people thank you senior fifteen night

It looks great. Does the author still have any in stock? Every time it is updated at 0 o'clock, it has never been interrupted. Suddenly I discovered that I have read three books by the author Da Da. The first two-male protagonist One Piece I came across was also written by Da Da. I have to say, it's really good (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

It's good for now. I hope the author will update it more. I'll read it first and then come back to read it.

Obeibei, fragrant and beautiful (♥∀♥)

It just ended so smoothly [crying][crying][crying]

Hao Kan, I want to see Sakaski's performance that is different from the original work [Learned] Is it gone? It feels like the protagonist becomes Saka's white moonlight after death [crying]

Overall, this book is good, but there is a bit too much foreshadowing in the early stages. And I like Akainu's character. I'm looking forward to the rest of it.

This is a prequel, and the prequel is very good, and the backquel is also great. It's just a pity that it's a friendship between the two male protagonists, but the relationship is pretty good, it's delicious, 🐜🐜🐜🐜🐜

Good-looking and can be taken care of

Yeah, ok, it looks good [like]

So far, it looks great.

I like it, looking forward to future plots

I've finished reading the updated version, and I really want to know what the scene will look like on top in the future. Expect expectant expect expectant

The plot is really good, do you want to eat Canis-toothed Red Lotus?

Very good book

This is the second time I've tried it. I couldn't find any other meal replacements, so I just used it to give it a try. It's really beautiful(❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

It's good to read. I really like this type of book and the character of the main character.

It looks great, I love reading it. The character setting this time is super interesting. Thank you for the author. ੭ ˙ᗜ˙ )੭

Dry food article IQ is online, I feel good

Very good book, very interesting story.