Comprehensive Comic: About Me Spoiling the Angel

The look and feel at the end is much improved compared to the previous one. The plot after about 40 chapters is quite interesting, and the writing style has also been improved visibly. Except for a small part of the plot that is not very realistic, it can be seen that the author has tried his best to depict a real world and a group of real characters. The more you write, the more you feel that the author has really brought each character to life, as if they really exist in another world. Overall, this is a very good novel and worth recommending! And to be honest, in most fanfics, Yukino is more or less deified, as if she should be omniscient and omnipotent, and will not be hated no matter what she does, as if she is born perfect, but this is not correct. Her strength and vulnerability exist simultaneously. Her strong independence is based on a way of doing things that is stripped of external evaluation, so she can only use the absolute correctness of perfectionism to cover up her shortcomings in dealing with people and other issues. As long as the quantifiable results are better than yours, then I am right. The essence is the fear of being denied under the shell of logic. Why is Yukino always helpless when facing her sister? Because her sister is better than her in all things that can be quantified. Even her mother recognizes Yangno more. Then she has no choice but to show confusion and vulnerability. Because on campus you can use your grades, sports abilities, etc. To prove your correctness under the Neon Campus Evaluation System. But at home, there is no evaluation system at home. If there is one, it is her mother. Her mother recognizes Harano more, so Yukino can only follow Harano's footsteps step by step. The Yukinoshita family wants people who understand the rules and use them, not puppets, so before Yukino can truly come up with the idea of ​​joining politics, it is completely normal and correct for Yukino's mother to refuse Yukino to become the successor. Her bravery and cowardice coexist at the same time. She said she would never compromise or evade any problems. She seemed to be making heroic decisions, but she was always helpless when facing problems. During the school festival, she put all the burden on herself and did not put forward even the slightest disciplinary requirements to her classmates. When she ran for student council president, she also did not communicate with Dango and Hikigaya. It's not that she doesn't dare, it's that she doesn't have this option in her life. Because of the bullying problem in the past, she couldn't imagine that people can communicate. What finally showed up was that she faced the problem bravely, but always chose a cowardly solution. As long as others made trouble, she would collapse, and she would either work overtime until she got sick, or refuse to communicate. Wait, wait, there are too many antagonisms in Yukino's character, and so does Yui's character, and the characters of Yukino and Yui themselves have many antagonisms. They are more like two girls who were bullied. One is a girl who is far away from the group and is beautiful alone, and the other is a girl who integrates into the group but always yearns for reality. While making cookies, Yukino said something unpleasant to Yukino. Everyone likes to be venomous, but if they were scolded like that in life, they would have quarreled or even broken off their relationship. Not to mention the first time they met, but Yukino immediately discovered the real unwillingness to speak superficially, and bravely expressed his thoughts. Can such a girl be an ordinary girl? Anyway, I think this kind of adjustment and communication skills are extremely rare and valuable. Is Yui a gentle girl, or a girl who uses gentleness as a protective color? Just like whether Yukino is a girl with a poisonous tongue, or a girl who uses a poisonous tongue as a protective color, it is very interesting. All in all, this book is the only one I have read in Tomato fanfics where Yukino and Yui are normal people. Yukino is no longer a perfect goddess, but just an ordinary person who has a bullying problem and has a superior family situation, is slightly smarter than ordinary people, works hard, and lacks love. Yui is no longer an ordinary girl with nothing but gentleness in other fanfics. Tenderness is just a background for you. Her bravery, her strength, her hard work, and everything bloom only for you. It's just that Hikigaya in the anime refused this tenderness that belongs to him because of his cowardice and incompetence. Although I personally think that Yui in the book is still not the best in my mind, there is no doubt that this is the best Yui in the author's mind. I can feel the love in the author's heart for the three characters. I feel that these female characters are human beings. Although I personally think some of the dialogues are slightly awkward and some of the emotional developments are a bit exaggerated, I really feel that they are truly living in another world. Just because Yui and Yukino are human beings and not stereotyped idiots and omniscient and omnipotent gods, this book is definitely worth reading. This is extremely rare in tomatoes.

This is the second book that I will never forget. The story is unforgettable and the author expresses his true feelings. I can see your mood, the author, from a letter to the reader. I am deeply moved by your heart. I feel the unwillingness to give in and the love for the characters. Once upon a time, I loved the characters I once loved deeply like you, so that when they suffered some twists and turns that they should not have to suffer, I would also be passionate and full of anger. I want to go to the author to ask for an explanation, but now, I no longer have the energy or motivation to love those characters. But in you, I see myself again at that time. I may not be able to get up again, but author, I hope you will continue to love the characters. Even if you can't last long, I will feel that there are people who still have this unwillingness, this passion, this fiery heart full of love.

This novel is one of the best I have ever read. The author took many factors into consideration to write the "protagonist" of this book (anyone is the protagonist in his own world). The writing is very good, allowing everyone to have their own soul, especially the heroine. No one is born to be someone's vassal. Sometimes I think, it would be great if this was a one-woman book, but when such a person appears beside you, can you not be tempted? [Almost crying] @To be loaded ((つ≧▽≦)つ

One point is deducted because there are a little too many jokes. It was okay at first, but it will get a little boring if there are too many. The main character's personality is very full, and the psychological activities are well described. The plot has no problems or poisonous points. It is a highly recommended comic book. Then if the author has a lot of anime information, he hopes to add some other anime characters.

First of all, I was lucky enough to read this book shortly after it was finished. To be honest, in my opinion, the characters in this book, whether they are the protagonist or the supporting characters, have very distinct expressions. The characters in the anime are too ideal to be honest, but the characters in the text are more real to me. Just reading the first two hundred chapters, I would never have imagined how the three girls would develop later. After all, there were too many depictions of Mahiru in the past, which made it unbelievable that it would turn out like this later. However, the development of the plot in the later stages was indeed beyond my imagination. I thought it would be promoted by the male protagonist overwriting his memory and being discovered. I didn't expect that Yui would block the knife for the male protagonist. I thought it was too much. Most of them were injured, but he was about to die. The plot of the male protagonist returning to China later reminded me of the male protagonist in "Charlotte" who lost his memory but still protected the pamphlet; and although the male protagonist returned to China and decided to forget it, he still remembered it. I thought the little girl and the cat and dog were real, but although they were fictional, they reflected the protagonist's mental state very well. Although Yukinoshita Yukino has less plot, it does not affect the excellence of this book. I believe that the writing style of this book is definitely very good compared to other novels. It is much better than those high-scoring bad works. The emotional description is very delicate. This is also the first time I have written such a long review. It took almost an hour to write, but this book is worth it.

I have been watching it for a long time, and I feel it is really great. It is the only one in the circle of comprehensive comics. According to the extras included in it, it should be a harem. I personally think that the harem is a plus, and there are also tomatoes 💩 I ate too much and it was a bit uncomfortable to eat some thin bran for the first time. As far as the current plot is concerned, the Shiina line is complete, but it also gave me the feeling that she is the heroine. After that, there is a kind of hierarchical differentiation in the rest. As for the harem theme, I feel that it is not very balanced. Also, it has taken so long for the Shiina line to have an explanation and how to connect it to other lines without losing quality. It feels troublesome. And the most important thing is not to follow the hint and write a knife. Although I don't want to eat shit, but I don't want to be knifed [Petrochemical]

The book is very good. Of course, the plus point is that I have my favorite Mahiru Yukino Dango. I pray that the author will not stop writing. After watching the anime, I have very few things to think about in my head, so I will read some fan fiction. After all, their stories have never ended, but I have lost my identity as a bystander.

This comprehensive comic is very good, and it is safe compared to other fanfics (I'm sure) I have read about a hundred chapters so far, with two extra chapters interspersed among them. After reading the extra chapters, I was convinced that this was a harem novel. Compared with other harems, the early description of the emotional portrayal of the female protagonist in this book is very good. I haven't read this work about Mahiru Nagina. The character in this book seems to be the main palace. The early relationship is a bit fast-paced (this is my subjective opinion). I really don't know much about this character, but I am not picky about food and will accept everyone who comes🌝🌝 The second is Yuigahama. I think there is no problem with the author's portrayal of this character. He adheres to the slightly fast-paced writing method of the first fifty chapters, and the emotional value to the readers is full. Moreover, I like this character very much. It may have its own filter, so I can't find any shortcomings. Then there is Su Qing. After the short Tuanzi love line, the author seems to focus on describing the protagonist's outlook on life and his views on other people and things. There is also a small collision between Yukino and the protagonist, which may be a foreshadowing of Yukino's future love line. In fact, I personally felt a little stomachache here, because after reading this, I can clearly feel that the pace is much slower, and the personal subjectivity of the protagonist slowly emerged. It can be seen that the author wants to write clearly about Su Qing's personal charm. Su Qing shows different faces to different people, which may be a pitfall if a group is formed later. In short, I still have one hundred and thirty chapters left to watch the latest one, so I just pulled the lever and ran away halfway. I will give it five stars for the time being. So far, I feel very comfortable watching it.

This is the best book about Harmono and Angel that I have read. I started reading it after I finished it. I regret that I did not discover this really high-quality fan work earlier. It handles the emotions and story line perfectly, and the emotional line is very well written. It is not a refreshing novel in the traditional sense. This book truly describes the souls of the male and female protagonists, which cannot be simply summarized in words. I hope that subsequent readers can calm down and slowly read this story.

10 Points is the upper limit of the rating, not your upper limit. It took me a day and a half to read it in one sitting. I can only say that the author wrote it very well. First of all, there is Angel. It can be seen that the author wrote it carefully, and he wrote the real thing of Mahiru, which is as good as the original work. The sweet love is really beautiful! (Actually, to be honest, it's okay to watch it as Mahiru's solo heroine.) Then there's Dango. I'm glad you let us see another possibility of Yui. Yui is too gentle, so gentle that she suppresses her love. However, the author did not let this gentleness turn into regret, and Dango should not become a loser. (However, I am Yukino in the original work.) Finally, there is Mushino. Although basically every interaction is philosophical, this is what Yukino wants. What she wants is not to stick to her side like Dango, but to know in her heart that you understand me and that you are by my side. This is enough. What she wants is not a vow, but the companionship that I know you are by my side. (But I want to complain, Yukino's plot is a bit lacking, and Yukino's feelings in the end are a little abrupt) Thank you for letting me discover the charm of comprehensive comics!

I love watching it. In fact, I was really looking forward to Shura Field at the beginning, but the more I watch it now, the more I feel that the so-called Shura Field will "collapse the character" to some extent. The less I want Shura Field, and even hope that the setting will be a parallel world, and I don't want anyone to get hurt. One party is aggrieved. After all, I have experienced countless regrets in my past two-dimensional career, so I want the girls' relationship to be perfect this time [face covering] Come on, author!

Better than many comprehensive comics There are too many emotions, and he is still a useless literary youth. The male protagonist is too twisted. Is a comprehensive comic just a character added to a world? The most OOC thing is the male protagonist himself, he is so awesome. What kind of tradition is it to scare Yumiko with his domineering look?

The description of emotions is so delicate that it doesn't look like a novice writer at all, and the writing is touching. Some people may not want to read more about the female protagonist, but the human heart and choices described in this book may be worthy of the nature of spring things. I lost my youth and spent it in a mess of mistakes and bullying. I didn't know what I wanted to do, so I came to a strange land step by step, but found that I had no interest in life. Just like the protagonist's state after returning to his hometown, he is crazy and helpless. I am 24 years old, which is not a very old age, but I am always said to have a sense of vicissitudes of life, more like an uncle-like existence. Maybe it's because I'm nagging, maybe it's because I've experienced too many deceptions and bad things. I followed my family's plan step by step and got to where I am now, but when I looked back, I found that I had thrown away too many precious things. In the world of novels, we can look back, but we can only bite the bullet and move forward. Maybe it's a little sentimental, but this book really made me feel something beautiful that I had never imagined.

If I remember correctly, I think I may have said something similar to "You can do it!" Before. (Boldly) If I said it, I hope this sentence brings warmth to those who read it; if not, then I now hope to send this sentence to everyone who has read it. This book is one of the few books that I keep on my shelf even after it has been updated. To be honest, I was initially attracted to the three female leads. Coincidentally, I had just finished watching Angel Next Door, and I was deeply impressed by Chun Wu, so I started to follow up immediately. But the delicate emotional description in the middle and the extremely real emotional portrayal at the end are the driving force for me to keep chasing. I'm very grateful to have come across such a novel that doesn't just blindly recruit the heroine to have an ambiguous relationship, but truly restores the heroine's character! I also learned some descriptions of emotional dramas from this book, and now I am working hard to write my own stories. But these are beside the point. All in all, thank you to the author for this great book. In my eyes, it is a masterpiece that can be called fine chaff. Even though the rating is low, even though few people have read it, and even though the writing may be a little immature, it is still an emotional masterpiece that I, a 3800-hour old bookworm, have always retained. So, I look forward to seeing you again in the future with the author's new articles!

Generally speaking, it is good. It is considered a very good work among the comics in Tomato. The only thing that needs improvement (in my personal opinion) is the moderate use of jokes. When a novel begins with a lot of jokes, readers will not be disgusted, but too many jokes may dissuade some readers, such as When I first saw the gags, I was also playing it, but after reading dozens of chapters, I felt a little bored. The gags appeared too many times, and there were even some repeated gags, which would lead to a worse perception of the novel for some people. But aside from this, this novel is still okay. Come on, author. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It looks good. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air among comprehensive comics. There is no template. The author is very comfortable with the details of the characters and can keep updating. There is no OOC. It can be said to be second to none among the current comprehensive comics.

Hello, come on! Author, you are really great! (Coming from an old bookworm who hardly writes paragraph reviews or book reviews) It took me two days to read this work in one go, and it was already finished when I found it. The score of 9 points is really well-deserved~ I have always loved reading books, but I can't escape the curse of "giving up halfway" - too many books lose interest in the middle. Either the plot is so clichéd that you can see through it at a glance, or the characters are like puppets controlled by strings without any vivid emotions or struggles. Even if they encounter shocking changes, their words and deeds are so stereotyped that it makes people laugh. But this book is completely different! The lines are filled with the fiery and vivid souls of the characters. Their tenderness is hidden in the details, and the beauty is hidden in the bond between each other. As I read it, I felt as if I had really entered a parallel time and space, holding a memoir written by Mahiru himself and narrated with love by everyone. Every page is full of warmth and sincerity. It is really touching! Thank you, I hope I can still read your books.

The writing is very good, and it is completely different from the comics I have read before. This article has the author's own ideas, and there is no force to speed up the plot. It feels like everything is done naturally. Come on, author, please give me more suggestions [laughter]

This book is the first novel in so many days that I should read seriously. This book is excellent both in terms of writing and the principles contained in the book. The heroines did not fall in love with the protagonist mindlessly and have a harem like other stallion harem novels, but they fell in love because of the mutual help and mutual redemption between the two people. Come on, author, I am optimistic about you! [Sending Hearts] (I just don't know why the rating is so low)

It's more like a pure youth romance novel than a manga. I started with Mahiru and was loyal to the author's writing style. Maybe I would have liked this book if I had left Mahiru, Dango, and Yukino aside. The ending was hasty but not sudden. It's just that if I could talk about it in more daily life, the work would be even better. Generally speaking, comics have more than 3 female protagonists, ranging from 8 or 9 to more than ten, but they only have 500,000-800,000 words. It is not easy for the author to persevere to reach 1 million, so I would like to thank the author for giving me the best reading experience in this paragraph.

The emotions are described very delicately. Although the addition of the system makes the author's description of the male protagonist and the "villains" that appear from time to time seem a bit childish, the description of each main character is perfect. However, I think the male protagonist's character collapsed a bit in the later stages. He was having an affair with Mahiru and Dango at the same time, as if he was keeping a spare tire. He waited until one was confirmed to be in a relationship before kicking the other away. He thought about not hurting the other and protecting the other, but intentionally or unintentionally ignored that he was actually the one who caused the most harm to the other. It would be perfect if the system settings were deleted, the "villain" character design was improved, and finally the male protagonist was made more focused.

Nice! Everyone who saw me here gave me a good read after reading a hundred chapters, and the writing was particularly meticulous after that! If not, just skip to the back and read dozens of chapters to find out! Don't be fooled by the first hundred chapters at the beginning and leave without feeling like you're doing well! [Angry][angry][angry]

The writing is okay, and it can be said to be the first echelon in the manga that is still being serialized (in my opinion). The heroine now feels like it (Yui Hama Yui), and the emotional lines are very delicate!

Perfect Mahiru, the first and last Mahiru fanfic I have read [crying] The author's emotional line is very delicate, analogous to the original work, surpassing the original work, and truly writes a perfect angel

It is a very good work. The author wrote it after careful thinking, and the emotional description is also touching (although it sometimes seems to be literary, but overall it is very good). At present, Shiina Mahiru's emotional line has reached her girlfriend, Yui's emotional line is unfolding but at a low point, Yukino is heartbroken but feels like she has not fully realized her feelings, and the same goes for the male protagonist. It has taken nearly 7,000 pages to reach this point. It can be seen that this article is a daily slow-burn type. I personally like it. Compared with other works that have 4, 5, 6, and 3, 4,000 pages with the heroines showing their true feelings, this article is more streamlined, more natural and real.

The writing style is very good in a comprehensive comic, and there is nothing inappropriate in communicating with the characters that appear. You can now learn a little bit of knowledge in it.

Good-looking, good-looking, (although there were a lot of jokes in the early stage, the author quickly changed them, and they disappeared later, but in the end it still affected the perception a little) Five-star praise, support the author [please update]

The writing is delicate and the emotions are sincerely depicted. The author's writing is very real, and you can feel the character's heart getting closer and closer in the daily warmth. This is love, the resonance between heart and heart. Very well written, keep up the good work!

This book seems to be just an accumulation of small daily things, but in fact it is just a two-way process. When the male protagonist meets three female protagonists, he changes the problems of each female protagonist at the same time, and the female protagonist fills the empty heart of the male protagonist. This natural process is the most beautiful. It does not require any fanfare or big waves. It depends on your heart and comes together naturally. This is the most beautiful love.

It is an ordinary and daily comprehensive comic. It does not incorporate too many animation elements, but it integrates emotions into every minute and second of daily life. Alas, it is really in line with the love we are talking about now, real love, real love is not so dynamic, most of it is smooth, slow and long, with a strong rhythm as the main melody, interesting activities in life from time to time, or farewells, these are all the ups and downs in the score. The writing style of this book is very good. Sometimes the article can really reflect a certain reality of society. Although there are no such perfect people in reality, there will definitely be people who have been confused. From each relationship, they move from vagueness to clarity, from being closed to opening their hearts. Every period of companionship is like dew falling in the desert.