Travel Through ****

For now, when reciting poems, don't win too much, it will be boring and embarrassing at the same time╯▂╰. Look at Xianzun, he only suddenly recites poems in some desperate situations, especially when he is in the ninth rank, he is also very Handsome, the characters are okay (›´ω`‹), and secondly, it still doesn't feel good if I have to comprehend it through hardships. I hope the author can change some of the words, otherwise it will look really poisonous (//∇//)

One word, absolutely! The writing is really great. Both the description and the control of the characters' personalities are very good. Although there are some second settings, they are all very reasonable and reasonable. There is no magic modification, but it enhances the understanding of human nature and the understanding of the world, making it more exciting and more consistent with the original book. This is not just as simple as a real person, say it! Are you a real person's trumpet! ! (The author must believe in himself. The Ancestor Biography is very well done, without any sense of violation. His cognition is very profound and he can tell the truth in one sentence. The details are described very well. Don't omit some seemingly insignificant plots just to advance the pace. Many books have been ruined here. Fill out the characters from the details, make everyone's character stand up, everyone becomes profound, and let the true feelings be revealed. Don't stop updating, persistence is victory. As long as the number of words increases, it will definitely become popular. )

The writing is good, the emotional characterization is very close to the original work, and it is very touching. But what I want to say is, is he (the traveler) Founder, or (the original) Founder. The author has been portraying the brotherhood between Fang Zheng and Gu Yue Fang Yuan, and the emotional writing is very good. But he is a time traveler who has been recalling the life fragments of (original) Fang Zheng and Fang Yuan, but what does this have to do with him? After traveling through time, he became a true Founder. Moreover, the author's description method uses the original subjective description instead of the outsider's description. It feels like a real original work, Founder, has been reborn. The emotions between the time traveler Fang Zheng and Gu Yue Fang Yuan are written in a way that is incomprehensible, as if the time traveler is really Fang Yuan's younger brother. Another point is that I feel like the time traveler Fangzheng doesn't have a very high IQ, and everything he writes is a bit strange. I feel that it would be easier to accept the time-traveler Fang Zheng replaced by the reborn Fang Zheng.

The low rating now is to protect you. It's not because no one is watching. You must insist on updating your teeth🥺

Yes, it would be nice if there were brothers () in the back, Ye Shi Gu, Fang Yuan's true love is actually Fang Zheng [learned] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

To be honest, the writing was unexpectedly good. It opened up a branch line based on the original work, allowing us to see Guyue Village from a different perspective. The image of the entire area became three-dimensional.

That's good, actually I want him to reconcile with his brother

Come on author(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!(° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho!₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧̢ ₎₎ ₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧̢ ₎₎ (° ꈊ °)✧˖°Oh ho! .............____________,............., / .-. , ,.--. .-,/_/_/_/_/_/,-', ,. -,-,-- /| / / /- // / / ._/_/_/_/,-' // /-| / /-- / / / `-' ' '`--' '-'_'/_/_/,-' `-''--' `' '-- / / /..................'_/_/_,:............. / / | .'_|_|_|_; -Valentine's Day Gift | / """"""""""""""""" '"""""""""""""""""""'

Apart from anything else, it really has the flavor of the original work. You can tell it just from the poem. Other Tomato fans should be more educated, so go for it [Like]

Write more about the cultivation and training of Gu insects, don't waste too much on extra plots. Tasteless food, dregs

It's like the second real person

The Biography of Human Ancestors is very interesting [like]

Model Fang is reborn. Judging from the original text, you should be able to notice the difference in his younger brother. Moreover, the protagonist's Immortal Gu neither sleeps nor needs food, which is too unnatural. The author quotes a lot of original texts, and I hope to consider the verses again. I came with high expectations, thinking that there would be a lot of book lovers here, but I found that most of them are clouds. However, this book is acceptable in Tomato. The writing style is above average, the advantages slightly outweigh the disadvantages, and the readers are not completely fooled. I hope the description of the environment can be more detailed. I hope more people will read the original book because of these fanfics. Good luck to the author.

Not bad, it feels like reading the original work I just read Chapter 16 and it turns out that he is Founder who has the memory of a time traveler.

This book is the only one among my favorite Xianzun fanfics that I feel comfortable reading.

It's so beautiful, I like it so much, please update it quicklyψ(｀∇´)ψ Why is the author missing? (◇) Come back soon╰（‵□′）╯ Congratulations [Blow a kiss] Don't be afraid of being blocked [Send your heart], the author is no longer here [Cry]

It's easy to write, but it's a pity that it's a little short on the first, and second, the line is too long, and it's hard to reach the length and height of the original. Either the process should be shortened, or the persistence Gu can only be practiced like the original. Come on, I'll give you 4 stars first, and one star will be deducted on the water. I hope you can stick to it.

It feels like an original work [thinking] [thinking] I hope the author will keep writing [angry] [angry]

I've scanned so many tombs and couldn't even give a single rating. I feel a bit uncomfortable, so I'm giving it now.

In this era of scarce resources, it is considered superior.

Very good, but too miserable. He was reborn as Founder and was hunted every day.

Good, the details are described and the emotions are controlled very accurately, and the environment is also well portrayed. When I watch it personally, the pictures and emotions will emerge along with the plot.

It's so pretty! It's so pretty! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] The author will update soon, it's amazing, it's amazing, this writing style is amazing! O>_<o

Is this fan fiction? The training settings and some stories in it are very novel, a bit like fables, which is quite good.

The writing is very good, but some plots are inexplicable, but it does not affect the reading experience. It is worth watching.

I think the author could have reconciled the two brothers.

It feels like watching the original work

I thought he would act like a baby to his brother, which made me laugh to death. I am having fun. Come on, it looks good.

I'm invincible. When I wake up, the protagonist's name has been changed [face covering]

You have the taste of an immortal, and you can also write poems. You already have the qualifications of a sub-immortal.