Holographic Online Game: the First Warlock

It's beautiful. The writing is very good and very enjoyable. I like the setting of the female protagonist, the warlock. I don't really like the heroine's suitor at the moment, and I feel it's weird to write about him... The style of painting has changed from the epic online game of Xifanwang to the romance of "This woman is so different" I hope the heroine is uniquely beautiful and has no cp, and it would be better to write more strong female leaders.

Super pretty! ! ! Five stars out of 10! ! ! ! There are so many advantages that I don't know where to start. Let's talk about the most obvious ones first: 1. The writing is proficient and sophisticated. When reading, you can find that whether it is plot, plot, emotion or thinking, the transition is very smooth and has a strong sense of substitution. 2. Play the game seriously! ! ! ! (It's so rare to find articles that can do this. I've been looking for it for a long time, and finally found an article that seriously plays holographic online games, and the game settings are really huge, and the plot has reasonable and detailed settings. It's really rare. This alone deserves to be ranked among the top of the game article rankings. (In conventional systems such as tactics, priests, thieves, etc.) 3. The whole text is fun and entertaining, mixed with some qualities worth learning, making people feel that the heroine is excellent and real. 4. The game setting is very attractive and the characters are cute. Many plots have a strong sense of substitution. Especially those who can play games. Overall, this is a very good and very good article, although it is a bit short. I will probably have to work hard to fatten it up from now on. Please give me another hundred copies of this thank you. I have been looking for such a book for so long! ! ! Leave a long comment, remember my hobbies in Tomato, and click here to tweet! Super pretty! ! ! Full marks to you💯💯💯! ! !

Not bad, the game settings are very thoughtful, I hope the heroine will not have cp. I really miss the feeling of reading holographic online game articles such as Hunter World in the early days... It's a pity that there are so few such topics.

Top-notch, absolutely top-notch online game novels. In this era when pure holographic online game novels have declined, it is really rare to find this kind of novel from Tomato. After I first read the Lost Leaf Trilogy and The Master, I can no longer find novels of this type that can make me read. What kind of online game novels are there now? Everything is there, except that there are no online games. Either the advent display, the god-level talent at the beginning, or deep hatred. Online games, what you play are games, just like the love and hatred in Warcraft, the joyful friendship of relatives and friends in Sword III, especially this kind of holographic online game, the ratio of games to reality has a clear focus. I hope the author will work hard.

Very good, the characters are very three-dimensional, the heroine is so handsome, it's so satisfying to win by stepping on the enemy! The supporting characters also have their own characteristics, the best friend is cute, and the future teammates are also very reliable. This may be because the heroine was used to being a lone wolf in her previous life. In this life, there is actually no similar type of fraudulent strategy behavior that deliberately recruits former bosses and gives small profits and big rewards. Just like many ordinary game friends who happen to meet, they have nothing to do with the bosses in the growth period. There is no deliberate attempt to please, but a smooth and natural way of playing games together based on the character of the person involved; even the most deliberately befriended late-stage businessman is open-minded and does not deliberately redeem anyone with favors. The businessman uses this to gain momentum to earn a living, and the heroine does not want extra rewards to make the other party miserable. These interpersonal relationships are handled very comfortably!

My mom actually found a holographic fairy product in 🍅. Looking at the game environment instantly made me dream back to Holographic White Moonlight Hunter World [Sending My Heart], and Nightingale's plot writing style made me wonder if the returning copywriter was secretly writing a novel, hahaha, really great writing! [Sending Hearts]

It really has the atmosphere of the holographic novels of those days. I love so much. It doesn't matter if there is CP or not, it depends on the choice of the protagonist and the author. Click to read the comments, there are a lot of people shouting no cp, no cp. Once or twice is okay, but more often than not is a bit annoying. Back then, it was normal for holographic games to have CPs, and they looked very nice. In the male version, thieves' CP runs throughout, but in the female version, the fireworks and love and killing are pretty good too. At present, I think many books are not recommended to have CP, purely because the author is not good at writing. Don't kill him with one stroke. Maybe it's because there aren't too many chapters yet, so the flavor is not the same as others. The plot setting is a bit interesting. The plot has a lot of freedom. In addition, the protagonist also seems to be more of a team, not a pure lone wolf. There are many people around me who are very suitable for team building, but I don't know when this team was established. Updated evaluation on 24.10.25: The plot book after the end of the group book once again feels less like an online game and more like the second world of the game shell. This game is safe. . . It's really not too high.

Totally 5 stars for me... The writing is delicate, and the characters and stories are perfectly analyzed, especially the copy of the opera. I can deeply feel the display of poverty and vanity in this book. Each of the supporting characters is fleshed out, and the background story fits the character's personality and development. I haven't seen such a good story about strong women in a long time, and it made me think that such a game really existed. Next is crazy literature Please write a few more chapters. If you don't see the update, my beautiful qualities and even my soul will be lost. There is never a moment when I feel that chasing updates is so difficult. Wow.

It's well written, every dungeon and story is fleshed out, and the fighting scenes and clearance areas are all written in an immersive way, making people feel comfortable all over. It's updated very quickly, and I can't get enough of it [I'm full]

It is based on the theme of a holographic game, but I was surprised by the author's penmanship and writing skills. All aspects of the game are well constructed. The background plot is old-fashioned but interesting. The combat upgrades of the game that I prefer are completely satisfying. The heroine has high execution ability and is very enjoyable to watch. The character design is subtle but vivid. In addition, the author should have a strong pursuit of words. Some descriptions of unfamiliar expressions may even appear "too literary" in this kind of article. This is not a particularly serious book review, but the writing style is indeed a bit wasteful for this platform. It is good enough that it can be said to be clear and honest, and it will be good at other types of writing.

I found gold in the waves!! It's just not enough to watch [crying][crying] I really look forward to the heroine joining her best friend who lost her scumbag, the hunter who is afraid of society, and the businessman who can't afford to eat to form a team. I like how everyone can save each other and rely on each other to create a world in this game world.

This is my first book review after reading so many books. The reason is that the score is seriously inconsistent with the actual book. It should be at least 9+. The characters and game are indescribable. I hope I will be lucky enough to catch up to the end. I also hope that every subsequent reader can give a score based on respecting his heart.

The pace is neither fast nor slow, and the plot is well controlled. I have never felt frustrated while reading this novel. The heroine has a strong ability to handle things. She basically solved a conflict in two chapters. I really like this clean and neat character design. Now the strength and money are quite strong, and the momentum is almost rising. Some of the author's game terminology is very professional, and the skill settings are also very reasonable and will not cause drama. In fact, there is another thing about the author that is outstanding, that is, she is really good at describing the environment and details. She uses synaesthesia well, very delicately, and has strong expressive skills. Moreover, the heroine is not the type to be pushed away, she is the cowardly escape type. She has always pursued pursuits and always understood what she wanted to do. Her arrangements are well organized and comfortable to read. The copy and prop introduction she writes are full of online game taste.

Extraordinary perfection. I can actually see this kind of writing in Tomato, and at the same time, the understanding of online games makes people who also play online games feel surprised... It's great, great! ! The reason the score is low now is because there are not enough people to rate it. It would be better if I were a little fatter. Please update.

It's good to read. I can see that the author is very experienced in writing and the characters are vivid. After seeing Chapter 22 of Green Jasmine, Little Stammer and Little Ghost couldn't help but comment. Come on, the author, it's so good-looking [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss] The last time I saw such a beautiful holographic article was in 2014. At that time, I dreamed of being able to play holographic games. In the blink of an eye, 10 years have passed, let alone holographic games. Holographic game novels have become the tears of the times. It is not easy to find a good novel [almost crying]

Such smooth writing! Excellent tomatoes! I like to command and play dungeons the most. It's so exciting! They are all good babies [crying] This is the passionate article for us grown-up women to read! No low-level female competition! The girls in it all have their own highlights [please update] Please feel free to watch! ! At the beginning, I was also worried that the senior would be the male protagonist! ! Not at all! Watch with confidence! The heroine is very sober! Currently Chapter 97 is about to be updated soon [Note]

It's okay. It contains a lot of men, but the female characters (except for the best friends) are all good, and there are no ugly depictions. The writing is very good and the plot setting is smooth. I will change the rating later to see how it develops.

Absolutely a good book. I would not be surprised if the author wrote literary novels in his later years. This long review can probably finish the good points of this novel, so I will talk about the flaws of Meiyu. The author may have written ancient novels before, so there is less attention paid to women, but it is by no means absent. As for the male protagonist issue, there shouldn't be one. Her descriptions of men are very objective. The senior originally wanted to take care of the heroine in the game, but only started to take care of the heroine after the heroine showed her strength for the second time. There is no mythical male, and judging from the writing, the relationship will probably come naturally, and the heroine will not be ignored. The heroine is really a normal 30-year-old adult, indifferent but not philistine, focusing on herself and showing kindness to others. The only character design in this article that seems cliche is the hunter. Everyone else has their own unique personalities. (There are shining points that are embedded in other characters and different from other characters, knowledge points of character analysis in "Resurrection") Sorry, when I write, I always ramble without focusing on the point. But now that I have seen it, my initial worries about the male protagonist are gone. Because the core of the heroine is stable enough - she understands her goals and sticks to her heart. She may not achieve success in the worldly sense, but she will definitely make her life peaceful and happy. This is the success of a small person. It would be a pity to abandon this rare and good book because of the male protagonist.

This is a rare masterpiece of online game writing. I hope the protagonist will have no emotional lines in the follow-up, so that it will be more comfortable to read.

It's one of those rare novels that can give me the feeling of an early online game adventure. So far, there's nothing illogical about it. If I can continue writing at this pace and finish it, I think it has the potential to become a hit. (Personally speaking, I wish there would be no cp in the next plot. Thank you to the author. Although there is no such sign at the moment, it always makes me feel uneasy)

After reading the beginning, I felt that I haven't seen such a genuine holographic online game novel in a long time. The writing style is also good, very serious and serious, and the design is classic but also unique. It's really good...

The writing is excellent, very delicate and touching. The author is very good at foreshadowing, and the lines are intertwined with each other. The characters are well drawn, and each one has their own unique memory. This is not a brainless piece of writing, there will be some setbacks, but it will all turn around. It's hard to imagine that this is a book that can be seen for free on Tomato [Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts]

I'm so precious, it's rare to read a book that brings tears to my eyes. In the team dungeon, there are real group portraits and nightingale plots. . Regardless of the protagonist, supporting characters, or NPCs, every character is well portrayed, as if the NPCs had a flesh-and-blood existence, and as if the supporting characters could escape from the book's rigid shaping. There is also the protagonist. The protagonist's portrayal is just right. He is rational but not cold-blooded. He is reborn but does not give people a sense of absurdity. Even if he has the experience accumulated before rebirth, he is still limited by his current strength and the background of the character ten years ago. He needs to improve his strength a little bit. Generally speaking, it is the sentence in the introduction - it is not a brainless and refreshing article, but it is indeed a very enjoyable article. Seeing that there is no CP for the time being in Chapter 80, that is, there is no (high probability) male protagonist to steal the "play" (of course, I believe that the author's writing power can make the plot and emotional line the same). Generally speaking, there are no surprises. I don't know why the rating is so low, but when I saw this comment, I suggested that you at least give it a try and read a few chapters.

First of all, there is no doubt that the author's writing style is indeed very good. It ranks high among the articles I have read on Tomato. However, the fighting timeline is relatively long, but the writing is very detailed, which makes people read it. What is worthy of praise is Li Lian's copy, which has the feeling of reading a Western classic. Secondly, the overall logic is very clear, there are no flaws, the description is meticulous, and the setting background is refreshing. It is not too arrogant, but also gives people the impact of the text. Finally, I hope that the author can maintain this quality and not overestimate the number of words.

It's beautiful, very comfortable, and very smooth to watch from beginning to end. The heroine has no clues, and her friends are not very good. She will meet good people, bad people, normal people, and crazy people, which will give people a very normal feeling.

It's so good-looking that even if it has a small number of words, frequent explosions, slow updates, and it's been discontinued for almost a month, I still can't put it down. . . . . When will it be updated? The author is great Well, I was wrong. The highlights of this book are simply insignificant compared to the one next door. Author, please get up and write two chapters before you die. I am going to starve to death.,,

The language of this book is really beautiful, and the descriptions of various scenes and characters' minds are extremely detailed and clever. The author's literary foundation must be very profound. The supporting characters are also comprehensively created, and the plot of the story is also very good. After reading this novel, I want to play this game. It must be only a matter of time before this book reaches 9 points. One more thing, the protagonist has a team. And there is currently no male protagonist, and I hope there won't be one in the future.

It's very beautiful, and the copy is well written. I like the ending of Nightingale very much. The heroine is a real strong person, with a strong heart and strength, a calm and unhurried mentality, and has her own goals and ideals. Compared with the male author, her writing style is more delicate and beautiful, and her inner emotional description is also more detailed. I just don't really want to have a male protagonist, or the male protagonist should not be stronger than the female protagonist, and the role should be as small as possible. The female protagonist's team also hopes not to write ambiguous plots, and friendship and interests are fine.

In fact, the author's writing style is quite good. Although it's very typical of men writing about women, it doesn't have many flaws. It's a bit boring in the later stages. I can't stand it for personal reasons. I prefer to focus on the main plot and not all fights. Overall, I give it four stars. The writing style is really good.

It's so good. Why is it rated so low? It's so much better than those bullshit novels that only have novel settings.