
Villain: One Person Eats Three People, the Furnace Controls the Corpse and Refines the Soul
反派:一人三吃,炉鼎控尸炼魂
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 108k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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51Chapters
1Reads
5.8Score
8.6kReads · all time
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Chapter 4: Is it their own PUA, or the bewitching ability of the Human Emperor Banner (Wangui Banner). Let me help you analyze the problems in the first few chapters: ① The logical rigor is poor. The connection between the protagonists after they time travel together is not smooth, and there are some problems with the causal relationship. ②The "psychological" description is too cumbersome. Chapters 3 and 4, which are close to two chapters, are all about the dialogue between Cao Yu and Cao Qing, which is a bit like an old lady's foot wrap. ③The emotions of the characters are not well controlled. Let's talk about the protagonist. He has completely adapted to everything in the fantasy world as soon as he traveled through time. This will make readers feel uncomfortable and disgusted to some extent. I hope the author will work harder.
It's so ink-stained, the author is really good at writing
🐴, System text, the system is useful at the beginning, and then it is the self-introduction panel, but it has no other functions.
It's boring and nothing new.