Under One Person: Refining Gu! Refining People! Liantian!

In some places, it can be seen that the author wanted to write something light-hearted, but this needs to be discussed. The protagonist is not weak, but the descriptions are not quite right a few times. The reputation is not wanted, the reputation is ruined, etc. In fact, there is no such description at all. The mission failed. I think the protagonist is weak in the eyes of the supporting characters, but he does not seem to be weak. . The main force itself has begun to become stronger. The protagonist should have some pretense, for example, he can pretend to brag to certain people, similar to my goal is to be the best, because he is going to become an immortal in the first place, and it is not about telling lies, spanning the dimensions before and after the novel. In fact, if you have the opportunity to add a few descriptions later, it will be quite touching. Find some appropriate opportunities to show it. And I don't want to get into trouble. This is okay, but be careful, because there are always some plot characters and content. Don't keep emphasizing it. It is easy to feel a sense of contrast when you actually encounter relevant things. When the protagonist is weak at the beginning, it should be described that he has not yet achieved his destiny and has not officially embarked on the path of Gu magic. There are some things that cannot only be known by the readers. The protagonist must have an identity and a name in this world, and his growth trajectory does not necessarily have to be invincible. But if possible, I hope that the protagonist in the eyes of the supporting characters will be more perfect. Now from the reader's perspective, the protagonist is gradually becoming a Gu Immortal, but he cannot stumble along the way. He always seems to have won, but he has never officially won. There is also the rich man. In fact, if he helps with the treatment, it will be over. He is a saint in front of others. There is no cause and effect, and there is no conflict. Although the protagonist hides, there is no problem. Of course, comments are always based on what comes to mind and are based on the author's plan.

To you readers! Dear readers, I am sorry that I have no way to continue writing this novel. After all, this is just an experimental novel. The purpose of writing it was just to test my own ability to grasp a story with a huge world view (it turns out that I am still too green). I know that doing this is very irresponsible to the readers who support me. After all, since everyone is willing to read my novels, it means that everyone still recognizes my writing ability. Here I would like to solemnly say to those readers who have collected this novel: I'm sorry! Hahaha, let me liven up the atmosphere. I think the author's writing is very good. Come on hehe (*^ω^*)

It's okay, but I didn't understand the part about He Feng Shayan's mission. They all live in a normal-sized villa in the same house. You just came after the fight here. If you are an ordinary Gu Master, you are fine. You are a melee fighter. What does it mean to run like an ordinary person?

It looks good. I think we can add a Gu that can sense Qi. Is that okay? Author

Damn, the score is so low. The book is so good, but no one reads it. [Angry][angry][angry] Today I need a wave of five-star support. Bring me today's Power Generation for Love.

It's not bad. I don't follow the original plot like other fans. Most of it is my own original plot, which is very novel.

Where did the Gu Immortal Art come from? The system still brought it, was it taught by the Gu Immortal?

It's so pretty [like] It's so pretty [laughs crookedly]

May I ask why the protagonist in front of you doesn't have primitive Gu?

It's okay. Why are there not many people? The progress is a bit slow. Go rescue Chen Duo and let's travel around the world together.

It's beautiful, but why are there so few people?

Not bad, only one tree

Good looking, love it, like it

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

From the beginning until now, I feel this book is quite good. Can't find any poisonous points

This book is quite good, but the chapters are a bit short.

My beloved Immortal Lord is reincarnated

It's very beautiful, why is the rating so low?

Big cheers for the author

A pretty good book! ! ! ! !

Become an immortal! Great Love Immortal

Hey, it's such a pity. I finally found a good novel, but it was just in the middle of the novel and it disappeared. What a pity. I am a person who does not read novels but is still updating them.

Looks good, pretty good.

Very good, not bad.

Come on, I love the author

This book is very nice

Good, good, good, good

It's really good

What happened to the eight skills training?

It's okay. It's relatively free [making faces]