After Turning into a Loli, I Was Actually Targeted by the Heroine

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Why is this book so abstract? Is it because it is the result of the combined thinking of four authors? ? Seriously, this is the first and only book that crashed for me. . . Well... It's not because of the knife (it seems like I don't have one now), it's mainly because of the plot, which is too convoluted. . . Although it is not the whole plot, just a few chapters, but they are connected one by one, just like that... Uh... Math problem? Anyway, I mainly focus on this "Su Bai's past and present life, so many Su Bais?, Reincarnation, heaven and Su Wan... Uh, I forgot, sorry [grievance] is what she has experienced in her life." Overall, it is still very, very good to watch, except for some twists. (My only request is that you can write it more straightforwardly? It's really uncomfortable if you can't understand it... Do you know that you are reading a novel alone in the middle of the night, and suddenly a math question hits your face and you feel [crying] [crying] [crying]) So why did you go in?

It looks good, I love it, like a python wrapping around it

It was so cruel. Others were mainly incarcerated and only beaten a few times. If you break off your fingers and beat them for 30 days, Ye Ling will become more or less violent. From the beginning of Chapter 27, I always felt like something was going wrong.

How shameless, I feel like I'm almost torn apart [smile], Chapter 26 is so outrageous

It's okay, the books written by four people are just different [face covering] [OK] The brain circuits of the four people are just different [face covering] [OK] Unbelievable

It is indeed a work jointly created by four people. This imagination is bigger than that of John F. Kennedy [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The plot is very novel, and it is one of the few novels that made me read Hong Wen. I feel that some of the plots are quite awkward. I always feel that Ye Lingtian gives me a Momonosuke look. Those chapters of Su Wanyun are really outrageous, and my cerebellum has shrunk. These should be foreshadowings. Come on, author!

Great, give it a thumbs up.

Beautiful, so beautiful

I want a knife I want a knife

Personally I think it looks pretty good [laughs]

Will Wan Yun come back? Author, can you send me a message? It's really sad that Wan Yun was suddenly killed by a knife. I like this character the most.

Add a knife, you know? I want to see blood flowing like a river

I can give 96 points, and ask the remaining two questions separately, with a perfect score of 10 points.

I hope there will be more knives, but the ending must not be be, the wife is chased and the crematorium is organized!

OK, I need 5 stars for this outrageous plot, but it's a pity that there are too few heart-wrenching plots!

I really like reading content like this. I hope the author will work hard and I support you.

This is still of average to upper quality, the content is okay, but the knife is a bit lacking, and it doesn't feel too sharp. The plot behind it is too difficult to understand.

Five-star praise encourages the author [laughing]

It looks good, but there are a lot of typos

Five-star reviews are very nice

Really great, highly recommended

Tnnd, it makes me dizzy, but I have to say that the plot is novel, not entirely classic, and also very appetizing. Come on [like]

Is there something new in the fusion book?

Interesting, even more interesting than the introduction

I think it looks pretty

Like to watch loli shows

No one said a word after looking at it

Author, can you resurrect that "sister"? It's too cool Let's forget it. I can't take any knives anyway.