Zhan Shen: I Have a Deck of Playing Cards

The relationship between the protagonist and Lin Qiye is not obtrusive at all. This is something I have not seen in other fanfics. The plot is very smooth and logical, and the character of the protagonist is also quite likable. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The emotional line between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is rather abrupt

The story is very well written, the protagonist's abilities are very novel, and the emotional line... Is a bit awkward. The key is that the story is super active! Just a quick mention: I want to see the protagonist and Qiye Kuo [smile] If you mind, just pretend I didn't say anything, don't get in a bad mood [smile]

1. Emotions: I just want to say, is it possible not to have a female protagonist? It's okay to have no cp. If there is a female protagonist, I will really die. Even a single female protagonist is not okay. I can only accept family ties and friendships, because I come here to have fun, not to fall in love [face covering] 2 Plot: I really like the setting of poker cards. I can't walk when I see it. The plot is not very awkward, and the protagonist's abilities are not as high as the sky [blowing kiss]

Beautiful, so beautiful! I hope it can be carried forward forever! [Cry][cry][salute]

It's resonant. It would be better if there are two male protagonists. I beg the author to make two male protagonists! ! Mu Hanshou! !

It's very interesting. I just hope the author can work hard and don't take a break [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Overall, this book is okay. The main reason is that the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not very well written, some places are a bit abrupt, and Zhao Kongcheng's role has been increased. It can be seen that the author likes Zhao Kongcheng very much. The characters are well described, and Xiao Huihui is so cute! If you are interested, you can watch it yourself

This is really interesting, but I suggest the author not to overdraw the future too much, not to reveal the identities of some gods too carefully, and to maintain a sense of mystery. I feel that maintaining a sense of mystery can only contribute to the efficiency of this novel.

It's quite good to watch, with a lot of original characters, and some iron-breaking elements. It's a double-chef ecstasy to have a part-time job. My rating is: unexpectedly beautiful😄. The author also pays great attention to the readers' reading experience and also solicits readers' opinions.

It's very beautiful, and the writing is very subtle. There is no part that does not involve the protagonist. It is written purely with Mu Han as the main character, but it is a bit lacking. [Thinking] Please author, please hurry up and give more to the children. [I'm about to cry] It's not enough! It's really not enough! [Cry]

I have an idea. Normally, there are 55 playing cards purchased, and one card contains business information. You can set this card as a whiteboard without displaying any information. The effect is "sealed" and the sealer's skills can be used, similar to game cards [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] I hope the author can "flip" me (///΄◞ ◟‵///)♡

Very nice! But there are fewer people Ah, I'm sorry, author, I didn't know it was you in that group.

I have been a Tomato book fan for six years, and this book is the best among all the God-Destroying spin-offs I have read. I hope the author can stick with it (it should be six years, or five years if not).

It's a very good fanfic, and it makes up for a lot of regrets about killing gods, but why is there a heroine after there was no one as promised? It's better not to have anything at all!

Damn it, why did it get removed from the shelves? Did I get reported? Oh my god, I'm so speechless. I finally found a book that was removed from the shelves so quickly. It's not finished yet. There was a book that was taken off the shelves before, but it can be updated and I can read it. I don't know if this one will work [crying] [crying] [crying]

Great review, looking at the character who loves Lao Zhao and turns into a boy and girl, I thought it was about a gay man. Excellent, so great. The first few dozen chapters are all about gay men, and then a female protagonist appears in the back. Excellent.

Great, this book definitely has great potential. Although its current rating is very low, I dare say that when it becomes popular, the rating will definitely rise to 9.5. It is still low now, and the world view is not complete, but I can guarantee that it will definitely be extremely exciting later on, and it will probably not be weaker than the original text.

No, but is this novel really written by a man? Why does the male protagonist in it act like a female protagonist and make small gestures and tone of voice? He also leans on a man's shoulder and says hum... Oh, this is making me feel awkward [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]

Awesome, it hit the spot that made me laugh. It's so hard to hold back laughter in front of elders (￣y▽￣)~*hahaha

Please, please don't ask for a female lead! ! [Sending my heart] The writing in Zhanshen fanfics is basically not very good. If the writing is good, why does it have a female protagonist (✪▽✪) [face covering] Big! Big!

Perfect, except for the ten-year contract that was a bit abrupt, the rest is great. They all said that the heroine has problems, but I don't think it's a big deal. Maybe I don't understand this well. Anyway, this is the first Zhanshen fanfic that I saw a shitty yellow button. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Report! Great author! I, Xiaoyu, apply for the cp of Lin Qiye and Xiaohan! As long as you agree, I am Xiaoyu! I am willing to hold the banner for Ye Han throughout my life! ! !

Why does the author's novel show that it has been removed from the shelves? Is there no way to update it in the future? The novel is very interesting, so don't stop updating it [please update]

How can I put it this way? The protagonist was pretty good in the early stage, but when he gave away forbidden items, the reason was a bit too casual, which made many people think that the protagonist was so generous and casual, and didn't think about himself. But it was really a foreshadowing. Later, the protagonist invited those who had taken his forbidden items to join the special team. I think it was well written.

I personally think this book is very successful. It can be seen that the origin of the male protagonist is also very grand. It would be great if he can control it. As for the female protagonist, I think it is best to say Liu Ying. If you don't like it, just give her such a powerful forbidden object. It's true. . . I don't feel as serious about the emotional line as they do. Although it's a bit baffling, it's basically reasonable. The author is still a prolific writer at present, and he also added some original stories of his own, which is quite good.

Very nice, okay. I personally have never read God of Destruction. I originally wanted to read the original text, but since I don't want to take a knife, I found a fan novel to read. Not only do I understand the plot, but I don't have to take a knife. This novel is very interesting to me.

Reply to comment: The protagonist is obviously Nanliang

I have read one or two, but I feel good about the author. I beg you not to be a eunuch. You can suck, but not to be a eunuch. Please, I finally found a subject I like.

This is an imaginative and creative novel with a unique setting and wonderful plot. The author has unique insights and in-depth understanding of fantasy novels. I hope the author will continue to maintain his creative enthusiasm and bring us more wonderful stories and works. The work is very beautiful

Author, please don't stop updating😭I can't see the update date. Do you want to stop updating? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] @ as scheduled