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Nice! ! The writing is really good! Babes, all come to see the love story between a tsundere and a gentle and gentle person [crazy]! ! This article is not a complete one. It is also very funny in some parts. The plot is something I have never seen before and it doesn't feel cliche. The ending is still happy for everyone. Why don't you read such a good article? [Sending my heart] I'm really touched. Because of the unwillingness to admit defeat and the hopeless love for each other, these two stubborn fools will still run towards each other resolutely [crazy] even if there are thousands of obstacles or even being bruised and bruised. Even if fate says that their meeting was a mistake, they don't care. They know that they will face all kinds of difficulties, but they only think in their hearts: being with him is enough. It was really shocking to see the truth that surfaced later [crazy] I didn't expect Duan Lin to endure such a huge suffering alone, which made me feel bad, but luckily all the hard work paid off, and everything was worth it [crazy]

Oh my god, I read this book out of boredom. Tsundere 1 and Gentle 0 are particularly good... The first one was heartbreaking and funny at the same time. Although the two of them were noisy in the early stage, it didn't make people feel angry. The ending was also light and sweet, everyday. It's a very good novel. I recommend it.

The protagonist's character is three-dimensional and full. The character of Duan Lin, the protagonist of this book, really made me feel a strong and gentle force. At the end, I still felt a sense of loss. The part we can watch is over, and the rest is their own life... It has been a long time since I have read a book in its entirety. This book can be said to be emotionally smooth and reasonable without any inexplicable feeling. The plot is coherent and has few bugs and is thoughtful. It can be regarded as one of the few fine bran in tomatoes. The emotions in the early stage are a bit sour, and you may have complex emotions such as hating iron for not speaking, feeling heartbroken and distressed for the development of the two of them. But after the misunderstanding was resolved later, it became a lot sweeter. It was not that industrial saccharine, but that kind of light feeling. Really recommended to my family

It's a good-looking, ill-fated, idiotic couple. Every single one of them is particularly heart-wrenching, and it made me cry a lot. It's sour, astringent and sweet, so you care about the other person's sometimes inconsistent words and emotions, which makes you enlightened and sultry. At the end, Duan Lin was able to grow in cultivation and regain his original talent, and Yun Xi was able to fly freely in the sky, which made me cry with joy. It was so difficult [crying] [crying]

It's so beautiful. It made me cry a lot. I feel sorry for all the hurt Duan Lin suffered. They still wanted to stay by each other's side despite misunderstandings about each other. Finally, they were free to be together. It's great.

The plot is intertwined and full of foreshadowings. The foreshadowing is laid at the beginning of the story and everything is explained towards the end. The writing is very good. The two people fall in love and hate each other due to misunderstanding. But in the end, there is more love than hate. No one is willing to give up on the other, and they all do it for the other. And I paid the price, but fortunately the ending was good, but this life was bumpy, and the tragic heartache left a lot of tears for the love and experience between the two of them. I like this book very much. In my heart, it is in the same genre as "The Patriarch of the Demonic Way". I love both of them! I hope that little Suzaku and Linlin can be together freely forever, live and die together and grow old together♡

This book is very well written. After reading it, my heart was filled with sadness and joy. There was too much helplessness and powerlessness between Yun Xi and Duan Lin. It's not that the love is not deep, it's just that fate has played a trick on people [crazy]

The novel is great, and the story is a bit profound. The plots of the novel are interlocking, and there is no superfluous plot. There are no coincidences in the novel, and all plot developments are logical. The ending is he, but the scenes seem to be torturing me. The relationship between the two protagonists has no time, no location, and no harmony, but they face many dangers and go in both directions. They relied on each other in childhood. Although life was difficult, they were happy. Yun Xi was a proud Suzaku, but what impressed him was not his power or status, but the young man in the cold snow who would not let go even if he was about to freeze to death.

The first few chapters are quite vague, and can be regarded as suspense, but the dialogue is also ambiguous and has a bit of a preface and a lack of follow-up, but it is not a big problem and does not affect the main plot; Xiaolin and Xiaoniao's daily life story is quite good; the 180,000 words are considered short and medium-sized novels, so the pace is quite fast; later on, there are more emotional lines, one There is a bit of puppy blood, but I can accept it if I like to watch daily life, and the writing is pretty good; I feel that Xia You is also a very good person, but he is just a little arrogant in front of Xiao Lin, which is not bad in nature; the main plot is a bit bland and boring, and I wanted to give up halfway through it. Those who like a sense of light happiness and daily life may like it, overall it is not bad To add, I still insist on watching the back part. It would not be very cruel, but it still has some knives. The first part is dull, but it starts to get a little ups and downs when it comes to the chapter of cause and effect and love and hate. The knives are also concentrated in these two chapters. It is here that I start to fill in the holes, and the plot can be connected with the previous chapters.

I highly recommend the published book! ! ! ! The young couple is really in love! ! Hom! ! ! Damn! ! ! ! Got it! ! ! ! ! Who knows how hard I cried when I saw the ending where everything was revealed and all the foreshadowing was filled in. This young couple had such a rough time, but fortunately everything turned out to be joyful. I am a person who gets stuck very easily. I took the time to read the rest of the content intermittently today. I originally thought it would be a little bit cruel, but the ending directly gave me a big knife, but the little couple in the extra episode was so sweet, and everything was worth it, because that person is you.

It's really beautiful and well-written. I've never seen a book that's written so well, and the name is so good that I feel like I could be signed. The content is very rich, unlike what other people have written, and it really made me feel happy when I wrote it.

The book "Sparrow in the Cloud" is very interesting! The setting of the two male protagonists is very attractive, and their characters form a sharp contrast. Just like me and my good friend, I am more impatient and he is more gentle. When I saw the scene where Duan Lin was caught by the Suzaku Immortal Lord, I remembered how nervous I was when I had an argument with my friends. However, Duan Lin can handle problems calmly, which I want to learn from him. I think this book is very similar to "The Patriarch of the Demonic Way", both are in the style of ancient fantasy, and the characters are very charming. I can't wait to know what happens next!

Duan Linyunxi, two proud men of heaven. Obviously I don't meet one who is famous and one who travels in the sky. But the fateful meeting caused them to be bound together by chance. But on this wrong path, the two of them will end up together. A really nice article, the writing style is very delicate. Don't open your mouth because two people have two people's pride. In the middle period, Duan Lin clearly expressed to Yun Xi time and time again that Yun Xi didn't want Duan Lin to leave, which was clear from the beginning.

Good looking! ! ! I love it so much. The two protagonists are really a little awkward. Hey, they are just two awkward kids. Here, I wish you both a Happy New Year and a happy marriage. The New Year has not yet passed, so my best wishes are here first.

Super pretty! It was a two-way rush. Both of them were hiding their thoughts. They both thought the other didn't want them, but they couldn't let go. There was a bit of abuse in the front and in the middle [I almost cried]. Later when the misunderstanding was solved, the little bird died too [I almost cried]. Fortunately, they ended up being hesitant. It made me cry and laugh sometimes.

This is the second sour novel I have read. To be honest, I didn't like it before. But I read this book in one sitting without skipping a chapter. It is really well written. I really like the bond between the two people. It is a kind of misunderstanding that has reached a deep level, but they are both willing to continue to fall. The ending is also very good, it can be regarded as a reunion ending. I wish Xiaoniao and Xiaoduan will always be free!

It's really beautiful. The writing is also very good. The first part is a bit depressing, and then it becomes sweet and sour, like soda. The last part really makes me cry. It's so sweet. The two babies are really going through all the hardships. They will get better and better in the future. I was really emotional when I saw the end.

The end of all suffering is a kind of nirvana. This is a sweet and sour story. Readers and the protagonist lick the honey together, making this prose-like fantasy more beautiful and warm👍 The story is not long, but the characters are portrayed in detail, and the emotional narrative gives people a lingering and delicate sense of sweetness and sourness in the author's rhyme.

Sour and bitter, we have experienced so much suffering together. Fortunately, the two of us are the most important ones in each other's hearts. We have resisted countless things in the world. Fortunately, we are free in the end. Let us continue to be happy. Xiaoniao and Linlin [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The immortal king who screwed me said I was the one who made the first move, and it looked good. Cultivation background, mainly online dating. A proud man and a gentle man. Ha ha. Good-looking and good-looking.

The two went through some things in the past and always misunderstood each other because of bad words, but things got better later. They cared about each other and were cautious. They had a deep bond, but it was a bit sadistic and sour. It was a reunion story. After they reunited, they worked together to help each other, heal, and he

The writing is like a breeze blowing on the face, the new moon is rising, fresh and natural. The content is foreshadowing and interconnected, and even though the emotional part is young, it is my preferred category. It's just that the plot is a bit too tight and too fast (maybe I read it too fast). In short, it's well worth reading, but there's just too little! Not enough ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

It's very beautiful. I'll give you all your suggestions.

What kind of magical work is this? It's over, I'm poisoned, why am I still watching? It's so beautiful, I love to see it, want to see it, and want to see it again. When the cycle meets, it is endless, the reason is still confused, and the two are inseparable. Even if we are separated, cause and effect are entangled, but you and I will not be separated.

The big words really have a sense of destiny, and I really like the sense of mission.

The relationship is delicate, it was so cruel to watch at the end, but luckily all the hardships came to an end. I wish our little couple a long life in another dimension [Blow kiss]

The writing is beautiful and profound. The early and middle stages are sour and accompanied by tenderness, and the violent point appears in the later stages. At the same time, the past events and the foreshadowing laid down are explained clearly, and the links are interlocked and the rhythm is tight. May Yun Xi and Duan Lin be free and happy forever. Thanks to the author for this wonderful journey.

Very beautiful, very beautiful! But I stood on the wrong side...[Petrochemical]

Very nice, a letter of conscience, a few years on Tomato, this is my first comment

It's so touching. I'm not a person with well-developed tear ducts, but the writing of this book is really good. It can easily bring out the emotions of the characters. I shed tears for this book several times. Their stories are very good and not so sweet (no ky meaning), sweet and sad. I like it very much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]. The most important thing is that after reading this book, I can't seem to read other books at all [crying]