I Just Returned to Konoha and My Home Is Gone.

Yes, although the protagonist does not know the plot, he has his own way to become stronger. At present, it is Sage mode plus Eternal Kaleidoscope. He has his own thinking, and the timing of returning to the village is also very clever. There are no cliche plots written in the early stages of Naruto when he tortured Zabuza, and he did not miss the wonderful episode of Orochimaru returning to the village. As long as he keeps updating, he should become a masterpiece among Naruto fans.

I just discovered the book today, and I immediately caught up with it. It's really well written. The current plot is roughly divided into four stages: investigating the truth about the genocide → exposing Danzo/completely disappointed with the shinobi village system → joining the Akatsuki → turning to the industrial revolution. The plots related to Shikamaru are really well written. It's hard to imagine that these are high-quality content that can be seen in Naruto fandoms. The male protagonist is calm and calm when faced with the situation. He was not overwhelmed by anger when he learned that the Uchiha clan was exterminated. He slowly arranged everything while investigating the truth step by step. The relationship with other Konoha ninjas is also handled very well. The male protagonist does not favor anyone and has taken care of most of the original protagonists. The early transitional plot makes people very comfortable. In the middle period, the male protagonist gradually understood the truth. After being fully prepared, he was ready to deal with Danzo. He also respected Sasuke's opinion and allowed Sasuke to make his own choice. In the end, the two of them defected together. In the later period (currently speaking, in the later period), he joined Akatsuki and Nagato to explore technology and develop in Amegakure Village. Scorpion became the technical director to build tanks, fearing that Scorpion would have to drive a Gundam later. At the same time, through Shikamaru's perspective in Konoha, the story of the ordinary people at the bottom was shown, allowing Shikamaru to gradually discover on his own the fact that the village had been "eating people." It is already foreseeable that the major ninja villages will end up betraying their relatives and leaving their relatives, and everyone will join the male protagonist one after another. It really made me so happy that I couldn't help myself. I beg the author to update it quickly. It's completely unsatisfactory [crying] It's a happy ending, but it's a pity that the last part of the plot is a bit too rushed.

I am a time traveler, but I have never watched Naruto. It's an Uchiha, but he avoided the night of genocide, Sasuke didn't follow Orochimaru, and Sakura even learned earth escape. I think this subject is very interesting. Good luck to the author, I'm optimistic about you!

It's not bad for now, but there is one thing. I hope the protagonist has his own opinion. He is a time traveler, and he must not be a dog under any circumstances. Although this novel does not have the plot of being a dog, but don't let poison later [send heart] The plot became a bit unsightly later on, and Shikamaru felt like he had been outwitted. It's more than just wisdom! Shikamaru has simply turned into a clear-eyed college student who was deceived by others, sold around and counted money for others [vomit][vomit][vomit]

The visuals are quite good, and the description of the protagonist's character is also good. It's not that dark and incomplete. The plot is handled very smoothly. It doesn't deviate too much from the original work, but it also writes something of its own. The powerful description of the protagonist is just right, and it's not bad at all. I also prefer the relationship between the protagonist and the protagonist, who is both a teacher and a friend. I don't like the dark flow very much, but the author doesn't describe it too much. Anyway, Danzo will definitely be killed later [Thoughts] I hope to keep up the good work and work hard to update more [laughing]

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I have not seen such a pure fanfic for a long time. The main character incarnates in the plot, and it looks the same with or without you.

It's beautiful and well written, especially the description of Shikamaru's psychological transformation. It's not just a cool story. It focuses more on the description of the character's psychology. Most of the plots show the character's personality and the transformation of the character. (I don't understand. The volume written by Shikamaru is obviously very good. But many people can't read it without reading the protagonist. Haven't you read enough stories where the protagonist is crazy and cheats and defeats everything?) (There are also some things that reflect reality and involve class and capital. And so on) (and he really has not forgotten the core. The darkness of Konoha and the mistakes of the ninja world. They are all designed and corrected with great efforts, and they do not just stop at the pain and pleasure of the Uchiha being exterminated. This is actually better than Kishimoto. Originally, Nagato Kishimoto pursued peace, and Obito pursued Tsukiko-eye. They were just hoping that there would be no war, but in fact they were ruined in the end. After Naruto became Hokage, these issues were still unresolved, and Mingmei's approach was similar to that of the first generation.) It can only be said that his rating is much lower than the quality he actually displayed. The actual quality displayed can at least give a score of about 9.5. In my opinion, 8:00 is more of a cool novel with some logic and battle scenes, but this book completely exceeds the quality of 8:00.

Don't brag, this book is really good. Currently, I don't think it has any bad points. The characters and Naruto plot are very good. The setting is also a well-founded extension and it won't be too abrupt. However, the updates are too Buddhist-style. It is fixed at 1:00 and 2:00 every day, which is really too little. It's a bit unfinished

Hmm... How to put it, given my personality, I like long reviews, so this article is worthy of my long review. I have read many Naruto fan adaptations, and this one can be said to be the best in my mind. The protagonist is time travel, but I haven't read enough of the original work. This is a highlight. After all, the second version of Naruto is basically about time travel and having read enough of the original work, and planning and development according to the original plot. But what's different about this article is that the protagonist doesn't know what will happen in the future plot, which gives me a sense of refreshment when watching it, because he doesn't know what will happen next, who is the BOSS behind the scenes, and all the plans are like a mud bodhisattva crossing the river, one step at a time, that's the only way to achieve success, and it is also in line with the major thing the protagonist wants to do, to unify the ninja world, which is not easy to do. If he knows the future plot development and has watched the original Naruto, maybe there will be a change in thinking. And it's not fun either. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] The way the protagonist Yelan handles the problem, and is very determined, even ruthless, about the genocide of Uchiha, I won't go into the specific content, but the author's attitude towards Konoha is not good, and the protagonist does not have a particularly favorable impression of Konoha like most second-generation characters. This is the charm of the original plot, because I have not seen it, so the protagonist's treatment of Konoha completely depends on how Konoha treats him. My favorite plot here is Yelan's teaching to Sasuke, his decisiveness to kill Danzo, Orochimaru's changed person, changing his name to Mi, refusing to admit that he is still the original Orochimaru, and his confession of his ideals after the battle with Hashirama, and Hashirama here is not a silly and sweet image! ! ! They directly sealed Tobirama [note] [note]. The most important thing is the plot the protagonist set for Shikamaru, which turned the brain trust flat. I like this plot. It can be said that it shows a large part of the ugliness of Konoha. [Cool][Cool][Cool] I think the author's handling of characters is okay. Characters I haven't had much contact with conform to my stereotypes, such as Naruto, Tobirama, F4... Overall, it's pretty good. Don't worry, there will be a little more plot in Konoha in the early stage. In the later stage, the main characters Sakura and Hinata Tenten appear less, and the ones who appear the most are Shikamaru's team. Hmm, it's almost 750 words. I hope it will be helpful to other people's reading [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua][Learned][Learned] I have my own personal thoughts, and if you have any additional information, please see my reply below. Gee, I feel like I can't stand the rest of it. The plot tends to be uniform and a bit boring, and the protagonist is already considered invincible.

It's well written and enjoyable to watch, with a reasonable plot and logical logic. A few suggestions, the theme should be closely related to the background of Naruto, and don't dig into the ancestral plot you want. Those who read the book must read Naruto. The author should not just add background stories randomly when writing. Firstly, it is easy to lose control of the content. Secondly, it will disgust readers who only want to watch Naruto. At present, the combat power system is still under control. The protagonist is strong but not brainless. There should be no situation where chakra is dispersed and the natural ability is restored, making the protagonist superior to others like cultivating immortals. The reason is the same as above.

This book is really a masterpiece among Tomato fanfics. The character logic and three-dimensionality are very strong, and the reduction of force value is a genius. The only flaw is that the world view is a little immature. The author has not fully checked the setting of Naruto. Apart from making some jokes, there is no problem. The highlight is the creation of the protagonist. It is too complete. If a modern person comes to the ninja world, it is extremely logical to do these things if you are more conservative. The character motivation is extremely accurate. If the protagonist himself is a radical, just do it directly The transitional revolution has been completed, and the conditions for the Ninja World are fully met. How to implement it in detail still needs to be studied. However, the Ninja World is half-employed, semi-feudal, class-based and has a solid social structure. Basically, it is easy to understand [Like] [Like] [Like], the author keeps working hard, this kind of Good writing is so rare in the fandom field. Firstly, writing about fanfics is so stuck in the original work that it is difficult to make a good plot. Secondly, writing about fanfics has a narrow audience and is not profitable. Thirdly, Naruto's values ​​are too low-key. It's hard for you to endure nausea and make the plot so exciting.

It's great. Many people care about the fact that time travelers don't know the plot. Knowing the plot is not a must for time travellers. What is necessary for time travellers has always been to have ideas that transcend the times. The previous part of this book is about the growth of the protagonist, understanding the corruption of Konoha, and communicating with Nagato after leaving Konoha before feeling that he should do something. ([Thinking] I think this is the idea of ​​bringing great virtue to the world that only time-travelers have.) The middle part of the text describes the impact of the protagonist's thoughts on some characters (mainly Shikamaru [laughs]) The character description is very well controlled, and it naturally leads to the subsequent protagonist to launch a war and start a revolution. It is really good. [Thinking] The ending at the end (probably too hasty to finish, with many problems and typos) dropped one star.

In the early stages of the novel, the author's control of the rhythm and plot was not very good, but as it got better, the psychology and behavior of each original character were well written. Their changes also followed the changes of the plot, and the details were very good. This fanfic is really like the parallel world of Naruto. The protagonist who has never seen Naruto is just a person who was born in the world of Naruto, but his personality is similar to his previous life. The reasoning and logic are not bad. The changes in the plot and the behavior of the characters are also very consistent with the setting. I am looking forward to the direction of the ninja world, because the author has also laid other foreshadowings. Also, this is a slow-burning novel, so don't read it until you read it at a glance. The ending was a bit stretched. Too deliberate.

The early writing of this book was average, but the quality improved significantly after the protagonist killed Danzo and announced that Uchiha had left Konoha. Overall it's good, I'm satisfied. No, buddy, it's too much for you to force the protagonist to disconnect before the battle [smile]

I finally finished reading it. Overall it's pretty good, but I'd like to give a suggestion to latecomers. You can skip the fourth battle and watch the ending. The author's later period gave me the feeling that I was in a dream. The war was too incomprehensible and the turn-based game was really a bit overwhelming. But the first and middle stages are still very good. Many of the pitfalls of the original work were perfectly solved. The protagonist also has his own character and ideas. If it weren't for the fourth battle, I would have given it five stars🤔

I would like to call this Naruto novel Baturu the number one Naruto fan novel. The plot is very exciting and the imagination is really big. The only shortcoming is that the description of the fights is not very exciting, but it is also within the standard level of Naruto fan fiction. The plot is a plus. . . . I don't understand why the rating is so low. Is it because of Itachi?

It's very interesting. Among the novels that changed the entire world view, Naruto gave me the most frustrating feeling. In my opinion, Sasuke was really forced to change his past by Naruto. This novel can be said to have completely changed this. It's a good read and has five stars.

Super nice reform type! My favorite Naruto fanfic on Tomato! Also, the author, can the main character have no cp? QAQ It's really not possible. The cp is in the extra story, but the main text can also have no cp. QAQ I really like the setting where I don't know the plot. I feel more integrated into the world. I change because I can't stand the injustice, rather than changing for the sake of change.

Most of the plots and characterizations in this book are very good, especially the main characters' personalities and transformations are well described. This book does not completely focus on the protagonist. There is also quite a lot of ink about other characters, such as Shikamaru, Sasuke, Ino and others. It allowed me to see how each of the familiar characters has changed after experiencing different experiences. Although there are still some small problems with some details, and some plots are a bit sloppy and abrupt, it is undeniable that this is a rare book that I can still read when the protagonist is invincible.

Regarding the design of the traveler who does not know the plot of Naruto, I think that knowing the plot is equivalent to opening a God's perspective. It is difficult to grasp the psychological dynamics of the characters and the rationality of the development of events. Like Escape from Konoha at a certain point, this book is based on the original work and adds the author's understanding. It requires a lot of knowledge. In the middle and later stages, the theme is also sublimated and concluded from Ma Zhe's perspective. It constructs the world of Naruto and ignites the red flame. It's very flammable. This idea is not new, but it is difficult to write well. It tests the author's knowledge reserve and conception. Fortunately, the author has handled it well. This book is especially suitable for old bookworms. It has reasonable plot conflicts and character creation. It is not recommended for beginners. After all, there is no system and God's perspective to bring you into the pretense.

The one who feels the most normal among the time-traveling Naruto, not the kind who wants to destroy the world when he has the strength. He is only 50 chapters long, so let's take care of him first.

This book reminds me of the book Hitomi Izuna during the Warring States Period This book is very good in terms of character creation. Although the protagonist is a Blue Star time traveler, he has never watched Naruto. The Sasuke in this book is completely in control of his own life. Unlike Kishimoto's Sasuke, Konoha's dog from head to death, even Itachi used his Shisui eyes to prevent Sasuke. There is also the millennium Otsutsuki invasion set by the author himself. This setting is very reasonable. It turns out that the planet uses natural energy to resist Otsutsuki.

The plot is good. As a Blue Star traveler, the protagonist does not know the plot of Naruto, but he returns to the village step by step to continuously explore the inside story of the night when the Uchiha clan was exterminated. Taking Sasuke away from Konoha is reasonable and orderly. The Thunder Falcon clan with the psychic contract teaches the protagonist the use of natural energy and allows the protagonist to keep up. In the later stage of the battle, Amegakure Village is used as the base to change the feudal daimyo ninja village system in the ninja world. It is written with very progressive ideas. Come on, the author [love] [like]! I hope that the follow-up can successfully change this failed system from Ōtsutsuki Hagoromo to ninja sect Ashura to ninja village Hashirama.

A book that sticks closely to the original work and makes changes. The author's writing skills are still good. The protagonist is a modern young man who has never seen or been exposed to Naruto. His soul has passed through Uchiha. As Shisui's younger brother, he can complete S-level missions at the age of ten. Then during a certain mission, he was accidentally homeless and escaped Itachi's clan massacre ceremony. After wandering outside for a few years, I came back to the village to catch up with the plot of the third generation's death, and then a series of detailed Naruto plots. As the "evil ghost of the Uchiha clan crawling out of hell", the protagonist completes tasks in Konoha, integrates into the village, and at the same time investigates the truth about the genocide of the Uchiha clan. In fact, a qualified fanfic must not only adhere to the original work, but also be innovative. Most of the current Naruto fanfic protagonists have things that they don't carry. If they don't carry things, they can't write the flavor of Naruto. I have now read the 100 chapters, and I think it is okay. As a "Kun" Hokage who has not read a few chapters, the plot that closely matches the original is not a new plot.

It's quite good, with a very clear story line of the protagonist's growth, but the later growth aspect feels stumbling in the writing. However, there are many wonderful parts in the portrayal of other characters' personalities, such as the part between Shikamaru and Konoha Factory. The writing is very delicate, from the budding consciousness of resistance, to action and frustration, to the final explosion and rebellion... This is very much like another re-enactment of the protagonist's previous experience of rebelling against the village. This kind of plot has a strong sense of story, and the emotions are in place. It is very enjoyable to watch! However, the overall plot of the early and late stages has a sense of fragmentation. At the beginning, he is a victim who resists darkness and injustice, and then he becomes a revolutionary who liberates the ninja world. In the end, he becomes a savior recognized by the enemy...

Very good article. There is neither the excessive cruelty of killing innocent people nor the compassionate heart of a holy mother. It's a pity that there is no love line between the heroine and the supporting characters. But it is understandable, after all, as an Uchiha, he is destined to break up with Konoha. I finished reading it in one day. It's worth watching. You can skip it appropriately. The whole story was good, but the ending was too long. The protagonist was instantly killed as soon as he appeared on the scene. Then, instead of continuing to unify the world, the Will of the Mechanical God Planet chose to compete.

The writing is quite good, and it is considered one of the best among Naruto fanfics. The plot development and character creation are good, basically not toxic, quite good [like] Everything before was fine, but the plot behind this is a bit unsatisfactory. The protagonist defected to Amegakure to develop. It would be fine if he concentrated on improving his strength. Now he wants to carry out reforms in Amegakure. Will he use Amegakure to transform the entire ninja world in the future? It's a bit putting the cart before the horse, it's better to focus on improving yourself, and wait until your strength overwhelms the entire ninja world before doing this. Look again, I wish it wasn't written like this.

It's a very good novel, especially the plug-ins given are very reasonable. The psychic beast in Kazekage's book felt funny and abrupt, but the falcon in this book feels natural.

Except for my initial frustration, the whole book has no moisture at all. The more I watch in the middle and later stages, the more exciting it becomes, the plot is rich and compact, and the character portrayal is much better than in the original work. The ending was handled quite well too.

Why do I feel that the quality of Tomato's finished books has suddenly become higher recently? The plot of this book is silky smooth. I can't find any faults in other parts. The setting is also relatively novel. It is worth reading. Good luck, author. Looking forward to the next one.