Iruma: I Became Iruma's Older Brother

I have read more than 30 chapters so far, which is generally okay. However, I feel that this book, like many fan fictions, often cannot distinguish priorities. Iruma is the protagonist of the original work, and Shesi is the protagonist of this book. The protagonist must occupy the main position of the conflict. Therefore, I always feel that the protagonist of this kind of fan fiction can have intersection with the original protagonist, or even a big intersection. However, if you want to have a story of your own, you cannot just follow the original protagonist through the original plot. Otherwise, what is the meaning of the existence of this protagonist? The meaning of existence is to be the pendant of the original owner? So who is the protagonist of this book? What I hope to see is a wonderful story belonging to the protagonist, instead of just seeing Iruma at first glance, because I have read Iruma's story before reading comics. Iruma is the reason why I clicked on this book, but Shesi's story is the motivation for me to read this book. I hope the author can think more and don't blindly follow the original work, but expand on the basis of the original work and find his own way.

(Personal preference, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you) I thought it was pretty good-looking at first, but at the end of The King's Classroom of the Evil Cycle, the male protagonist knelt down and called me the king… and for a moment I felt… ugh Although I also like the evil cycle Iruma, but... I think the male protagonist should be the only one who can stand behind the throne and be on an equal footing with the Demon King without having to kneel, instead of like this... [Face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Oh

I personally think it's very beautiful, but there are some places where you don't have to watch it with your brain. Don't watch it, otherwise you won't have the patience. You really can't watch it. When the music festival part just comes on, the next sentence ends. I always feel that there is a missing paragraph in the middle. So I suggest you watch it with your brain, or if you don't have the patience, it's better to skip the few pictures.

Quite fun. Iruma gives me a very cute image, like a younger brother. So it is very unsuitable to have a harem.

I personally feel very good, but since I don't like multiple heroines or harems, my rating standard is 3~4 points (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). The reason why I give five stars is because my personal habit is to give five stars as long as it is not too ugly. In addition, the author's writing is very good, and it is also a rare Iruma fanfic, so I give five stars for encouragement, and the author is very encouraged. (If the author sees this, can you please give it a like?) Where can the author write? I hope you can stick with it, and the author will give it your best.

The previous book was rated three stars, so I will reward myself with five stars this time. After all, I feel that the writing is still good, but... There are still typos [laughing] If you see it, you can @ me and I will go back and change it immediately~ I hope everyone enjoys reading it.

Nowadays, I rarely see Iruma fanfics on Tomato, and this is the best one I have read so far. The whole article is very smooth. I want to ask here, is the Demon King the protagonist? It doesn't matter if I'm not the protagonist, I actually like Iruma, but I personally think the protagonist is also very suitable.

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The Demonic Cycle by the author Shesi, I want to read it! @ Dead Corpse Story

This is the first Iruma novel I've seen here. I don't see the OOC aspect yet. I like it. If I'm not sure about the CP, I'll read it again. But it doesn't matter. Anyway, they have been alluring each other in the comics. In the end, as long as it's not outrageous, I can accept any CP. Come on The protagonist basically doesn't have his own plot, and most of it uses Iruma's plot. It would be okay if I saw Iruma himself split, but it would probably be uncomfortable if he saw the two as different people.

After all, this is the first Human World fanfic. I would like to encourage you. I hope the writing can be better and the logic stronger. As for why it is not five-star, I hope that the original work can be respected. The cp is better than the original one. After all, the Human World is the protagonist, and it is better to have a halo.

I hope the author can continue writing. I am a little curious, can the protagonist of this book defeat the protagonist of that world? Who will become the devil? At present, I think the protagonist in the book is more likely. If not, there is nothing we can do. The plot requires

It's so good, I look forward to it every day, but I'm really worried about whether I can watch it at 10 or 11 o'clock in the morning when it's updated. The author's wonderful rejuvenation is so beautiful that people can't stop watching it even after they die [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] @ Dead Corpse Story @ Dead Corpse Story

It's pretty good, but can we write more protagonists? I feel like the proportion of scenes and the changes to the original plot are a bit small.

Very interesting fanfic but Iruma's harem was robbed —_—

It's pretty good, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist. It would be better without a female protagonist.

Hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, I am the king of hurry, update quickly [laughter]

Five stars, I finally have a writing room and the subject matter is my favorite.

I finally found a fan of Iruma, the content is very interesting

The writing is okay, but some people in book reviews don't like to use their brains. I suggest those people read the fan and manga first. I don't want to understand more, but I can straighten out the logic.

This is very good, okay, if you like Iruma fan fiction, you can read it, it has multiple female protagonists.

The first time I saw this comic, especially Ashes and Iruma, they were really good. Ashes had a bit of a dark personality, and the content was very good. I also went to read the comics. So I will update more when I have time and I will be waiting.

The rarest of rarest, this is a rare and beautiful Iruma fanfic. The plot is light and will not make people feel uncomfortable. If you keep it up, you must support it with 5 stars.

I just like to read some Honkai Impact novels, such as "Princess Princess" and "Demon High School". There are relatively few fanfics about crosses and vampires. It's a bit awkward that this book doesn't suppress the male protagonist, but it may be because many people like it. If there is no market for this kind of writing, good people must treat him well. If the male protagonist travels through time, he must be the god of this world. A middle school student will remain a middle school student for the rest of his life. [Laughs][laughs]

The writing is very good. I haven't read Iruma's series for a long time. Come on, boy!

More, please. I also want to see Shesi Evil Cycle (should it be?) And women's clothing!

The real protagonist is Iruma, and Shesi follows Iruma every day. I feel like there isn't much of my own plot, it all revolves around Iruma. Three sentences are inseparable from Iruma, and the nanny story is complete. In addition to taking in all the heroines, opening a harem, and having cheats, otherwise it doesn't look like a protagonist. Now I see that the army has just entered its first hunger cycle. I read a comment that the protagonist even kneeled down to Lu Jin later. How should I put it? I don't understand it. Maybe it's because I personally don't like this type. It's pretty good to have a harem. I'll give it a five-star rating. Overall, it's pretty good. There are very few Iruma fanfics, and this is the only one I can read for so long [plus one on bookshelf] [like]

Yes, if you continue to update your book, it will definitely become popular. Just this content for you. Very well written.

It's okay. There aren't many Iruma books, but the protagonist doesn't have enough sense of the world.

Tomato 🍅 is one of the rare things that has good reviews.