Iruma: I Became Iruma’s Older Brother

I have read more than 30 chapters so far, which is generally okay. However, I feel that this book, like many fan fictions, often cannot distinguish priorities. Iruma is the protagonist of the original work, and Shesi is the protagonist of this book. The protagonist must occupy the main position of the conflict. Therefore, I always feel that the protagonist of this kind of fan fiction can have intersection with the original protagonist, or even a big intersection. However, if you want to have a story of your own, you cannot just follow the original protagonist through the original plot. Otherwise, what is the meaning of the existence of this protagonist? The meaning of existence is to be the pendant of the original owner? So who is the protagonist of this book? What I hope to see is a wonderful story belonging to the protagonist, instead of just seeing Iruma at first glance, because I have read Iruma's story before reading comics. Iruma is the reason why I clicked on this book, but Shesi's story is the motivation for me to read this book. I hope the author can think more and don't blindly follow the original work, but expand on the basis of the original work and find his own way.

(Personal preference, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you) I thought it was pretty good-looking at first, but at the end of The King's Classroom of the Evil Cycle, the male protagonist knelt down and called me the king… and for a moment I felt… ugh Although I also like the evil cycle Iruma, but... I think the male protagonist should be the only one who can stand behind the throne and be on an equal footing with the Demon King without having to kneel, instead of like this... 🤦 🤦 🤦 Oh

I personally think it's very beautiful, but there are some places where you don't have to watch it with your brain. Don't watch it, otherwise you won't have the patience. You really can't watch it. When the music festival part just comes on, the next sentence ends. I always feel that there is a missing paragraph in the middle. So I suggest you watch it with your brain, or if you don't have the patience, it's better to skip the few pictures.

Quite fun. Iruma gives me a very cute image, like a younger brother. So it is very unsuitable to have a harem.

I personally feel very good, but since I don't like multiple heroines or harems, my rating standard is 3~4 points (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it). The reason why I give five stars is because my personal habit is to give five stars as long as it is not too ugly. In addition, the author's writing is very good, and it is also a rare Iruma fanfic, so I give five stars for encouragement, and the author is very encouraged. (If the author sees this, can you please give it a like?) Where can the author write? I hope you can stick with it, and the author will give it your best.

The previous book was rated three stars, so I will reward myself with five stars this time. After all, I feel that the writing is still good, but... There are still typos [laughing] If you see it, you can @ me and I will go back and change it immediately~ I hope everyone enjoys reading it.

Nowadays, I rarely see Iruma fanfics on Tomato, and this is the best one I have read so far. The whole article is very smooth. I want to ask here, is the Demon King the protagonist? It doesn't matter if I'm not the protagonist, I actually like Iruma, but I personally think the protagonist is also very suitable.

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This is the first Iruma novel I've seen here. I don't see the OOC aspect yet. I like it. If I'm not sure about the CP, I'll read it again. But it doesn't matter. Anyway, they have been alluring each other in the comics. In the end, as long as it's not outrageous, I can accept any CP. Come on The protagonist basically doesn't have his own plot, and most of it uses Iruma's plot. It would be okay if I saw Iruma himself split, but it would probably be uncomfortable if he saw the two as different people.

After all, this is the first Human World fanfic. I would like to encourage you. I hope the writing can be better and the logic stronger. As for why it is not five-star, I hope that the original work can be respected. The cp is better than the original one. After all, the Human World is the protagonist, and it is better to have a halo.