It's Better to Be a Hokage Than to Be a Rebel Ninja

The blank space in the finale is good. This is what a novel should be like. It ends when it needs to end. The only regret is that there is no reincarnation of the earth to summon Madara, Hashirama, Tobirama, and Minato for a final showdown in terms of both thinking and combat power.

I stayed up late to read this book. I really enjoyed reading this book. I have read several dark books before. Either he is seriously OOC, or he is an adult in time travel, but his mind is immature, just for the sake of being black, humiliating Sasuke, and swearing profusely. But the Naruto in this book is a bit of a lover of immortals. Everything is a chess piece, there is no eternal relationship, only eternal interests. In terms of combat, the author writes in detail, such as the use of the Flying Thunder God, and there is also an element of wits in it. In short, it is very interesting to watch. The description of the high-level people in the ninja world at the back of the book is very good. "Because from Konoha's point of view, everything Danzo did was for Konoha. Although his actions were "wrong", the starting point for these actions was "right". How can there be such a ridiculous "good and bad balance" in this world? The so-called opposition between Tsunade and Danzo is just a difference in political ideology, a check and balance between radicals and moderates. They are essentially the same type of people. " Indeed, this passage made me realize something. The ninja world is inherently dark. Everyone is trapped in their own class, implying the unfairness of fate from their own perspective. However, in this class division, it is already an injustice. The merits and demerits described by the senior officials are equal to the merits and demerits, but in the eyes of the civilians, it is a disaster that destroys families and kills people. Peace does not exist in the ninja world at all

How can I put it this way? The transformation of Sakura in this book is very good. It is not overly annoying like other fans or the original work. This is also the first book where I want Sakura to be the heroine. I hope that all the seven teams in this book will defect together (no) Come on, author, please give me more articles. It's not enough to read. It's really not enough.

Overall, it's not bad. The subject matter is good and the writing is okay. However, the original setting is conflicting and a bit whimsical, but ignore it and you can continue reading it. I thought I remembered it wrong at first, but after replaying the plot, I found that it was good and my memory was fine. In the original Naruto novel, Naruto's graduation exam is a clone technique, not a transformation technique. Then there is the issue of magic. Well, if you don't worry about it, you can still continue reading. If you worry about it, you will really give up. After all, you can't just practice magic by yourself because your body needs to adapt. If you don't adapt, it will turn into stone. At this time, you need someone to help you expel the excess magic energy from your body to prevent your whole body from turning into stone. But overall it's okay.

It's nice to watch. The protagonist is very patient, but it's too little. I haven't reached the stage of rebelling against the village yet. It's not enough.

[The darkened version of Naruto takes Sasuke to build a new world] [Every character is very vivid, not just mindless.] Overall, I feel good after reading it. Everyone has independent thoughts (whether they are right or wrong). There is no sense of mindless and cool writing that piles up the corpses of supporting characters in batches. Instead, it is pulled repeatedly (such as pulling people I had to fight until I lost my soul hahahaha), it was quite interesting anyway, I felt like I had never seen the design in many places, it was very fresh, the plot was reasonable and the ending was perfect (the victory of Nazusa's party), all the small details were OK, the hook was relatively big but not invincible, and the characters had grown. Recommend!

It's a really nice book, and it's rare to find a logical book. And although it is a defection line, the bond is also well written. I hope it's not a harem story. Some novels change their flavor as soon as the harem begins, and they don't know how to write emotional lines. It might as well be pure drama.

It is written very rigorously. No cheating, the protagonist has a high IQ, takes every step of the way, and is patient and dormant in the early stages, which made me happy to watch. The subsequent time travelers immediately realized that they were in a difficult situation after traveling through time, secretly strengthened their strength, and planned the defection of the 12-year-old. The battle between Sasuke and Lee in the Chunin Exam also had ups and downs. Because there are too many changes to the original work, this is a test of the author's ability. If the continuation is not done well, it will easily collapse later. I can't watch many fanfics after reading them halfway because the adaptation is getting bigger and bigger, and I can't justify it. I feel like the author has very good control over the details of the characters! There is almost no ooc feeling! The protagonist's cold-bloodedness, which is revealed from the bottom of his heart while living in darkness, is awesome! I think this novel is excellent. While authors are following the trend and writing one hilarious article after another (I don't mean to disparage the cool articles written by other authors), there are actually authors who are willing to carefully consider the details, follow the original work, and write a book that is not so in line with readers' preferences. At present, there is no harem, no cheating, no cheating, and Naruto relies on his own efforts and wisdom to challenge the enemies of the original work. The author's description of the battle is gripping. The fight between Sasuke and Lee brought me a sense of tension that other cheating novels cannot provide. The battle with Payne was also excellent. Who knows the excitement when watching the time count down! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] The emotions of the characters are very real and more consistent with the original work. Especially after Naruto defected, Sakura's actions made me really see the charm of the original Sakura. I also feel very uncomfortable when I see some negative comments in the comments. But everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. I just don't want the highlights of this novel and the author's efforts to be buried and ignored. Although I don't know why the author has no motivation to continue updating. But I will keep waiting and look forward to the day when this novel will be updated again. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's really awesome. I had a blast reading it. When I first saw this book last year, it was still being serialized. Then I found out that it was finished, so I came in to read it. I found that it was really enjoyable to write. It was written in my heart, and it was completely out of the scope of ordinary fan fiction. You can call it a god. The idea of Sa Ming becoming a rebel ninja and reforming the ninja world is really good and awesome. The relationship between Sa Ming and Nao Ming is also very exciting. Anyway, I enjoyed it. It is rare to give it a five-star rating. It is simply worth the money. I feel that I can give it all stars.

It's invincible and beautiful. It's rare to find a fan with non-black characters. In my opinion, the characters in the book are more in line with the original work. The most enjoyable part is the fighting plot, and the lines are also very good. The author's writing style can completely write his own original work, but the length is short, which leaves people unfinished.

It can be said that the author has definitely studied a lot about the psychological changes of the original characters, and even understands many aspects of the worldview of ninjutsu and chakra. All in all, it is an excellent work worth watching, showing another side of Naruto. Putting aside the possibility of Naruto's dark side, the protagonist actually traveled through time, but he does not have the peaceful thoughts that a modern person has, nor does he have any hesitation or fluctuation in his murderous mentality, nor is he kind. This is something I am more doubtful about. It might be more reasonable if the author describes the background of the protagonist's predecessor.

This book is very rigorous. Whether it is the portrayal of characters or emotions, it pays attention to step-by-step and concentrated bursts. What is rare and valuable is that he respects the original work very much when describing the political situation in Konoha. There was no deliberate attempt to re-create the roles of Sarutobi, Danzo and other high-ranking officials, but focused on developing the original story line, basically maintaining the mystery of the high-ranking officials from the reader's perspective. In this way, readers will not lose interest in the subsequent plot because of the protagonist's excessive combat power. Coupled with the delicate emotional drama, the story is about to reach the climax of defection. I am very much looking forward to the future direction of the story.

This is one of the most interesting fanfics I have ever read about Uzumaki Naruto's Revenge. The author's logic is very strict most of the time, and the character creation is also very smooth. There may be some minor problems in the early stage, but it does not affect the viewing experience.

I don't know why this book has such a low rating, but I feel it is one of the better ones among the fanfics. The protagonist, Sparrow, is like an adult who has traveled through time. He has a very mature mind and knows his own strength, so he hides and disguises himself in order to defect. He also takes risks and encounters crises when encountering opportunities. It is considered one of the higher quality Naruto fanfics.

No cp, finally reformed by destroying the Five Kingdoms with two people together with Sasuke The writing is first-rate and the logic is first-rate. The plot is top notch. Highly recommended. The protagonist is strong-willed, not a saint, not a philanderer, has a consistent goal, is thoughtful and decisive, and turns into a tree of wisdom. The combat descriptions are very vivid and graphic, and the psychological descriptions are also very detailed and comprehensive. The only "shortcoming" is that many tactics and behavioral discussions are described in detail. There is a lot of thinking content and extremely detailed logical analysis in the article. It may seem tiring, but it doesn't matter if you skip it. It's a pity that the author has no new content. It's still unsatisfactory. With such good writing style and brains, I should write more "Kou Ya"! It is not recommended for those who have deep feelings for the characters in the original work. Many people died. The protagonist's goal is to stay alive, so everyone who hinders his survival is dead. All the characters serve the plot, without any preference. Reading the comments, some people said that the author was Chef Sakura, and Sakura was only alive in the end. After the protagonist defected, Sakura's plot was very little. The plot of this book comes first. In the early stage, the protagonist formed "bonds" with many people in Konohagakure and Vixen. It was very like the vixen of Konoha Succubus. It had the feel of the original work. It was abandoned as soon as it left the village. It was a very delicious cold-hearted and decisive protagonist.

Great book, the only Naruto fanfic I have ever read in its entirety. I am also an old Naruto fan. I have read many fanfics, and basically they are all in the following directions. They are either mindlessly pretending to be X, or going to crazy extremes, or driving big cars (bushi). This is one of the few people who has his own ideas, and this idea originated from the original work, but it is also transcended from the original work. It has been sublimated again on the basis of the original work and has become a complete work. It is eye-catching and has endless aftertaste. [Like] [Like]

The flaws do not hide the flaws, it is quite exciting. It can be said that the author has completely written another Uzumaki Naruto, and created a Naruto that is completely different from the original story. It is very, very exciting. It is good to read and read more.

I read it from beginning to end in one go, I like it Whether it is the changes in character or the development of the plot, I have to say that it is very smooth and ignores some minor flaws. This is indeed a rare complete reform of the Naruto novel. After all, although Naruto is passionate, reality is not that fairy tale. Overall, great looking!

It's a very well-written and enjoyable revenge drama. The logic is self-consistent and there is nothing wrong with it. I feel great. In addition, those who have deep feelings for the characters in the original work can avoid lightning first [cover their faces], which has killed many people.

Naruto, a parting gift. Sakura: If Naruto denies the unfair Hokage, then I will become the Hokage, and then change the Hokage so that Naruto can affirm the Hokage. Sasuke: I will bring Naruto back, no matter what means I use to bring him back. This plot must be held in your arms, it will definitely be fun to watch.

So far, everything is good. The plot is non-toxic, the protagonist is not invincible, there are too many wits, and the plot has ups and downs. It seems like watching a wonderful ninja wits drama. The characters are not OOC, and the protagonist is decisive in killing. The plot of this book so far is a rare masterpiece among the Naruto books I have read.

The most taboo thing about novels of this type is that the protagonist is weak and hides and encounters obstacles everywhere. At present, the protagonist is too weak and threatens a lot, so he will be regarded as a traitor. However, if he becomes stronger later, he will easily fall into disgrace. Hope the author can handle it well. Secondly, I think Sakura is really good as the heroine, I support her! [Like] What is the significance of Sakura liking Naruto in this book? There are not as many scenes as there are phosphorus

This is undoubtedly an excellent fanfic. The protagonist's disguise, decisiveness in killing, and unscrupulous means to achieve the goal are still fresh in my memory. The sparks of the collision between a Naruto who had lost his salvation and the prophecy of a time traveler made me see a different darkened Naruto. (By the way, according to this setting, how could Hinata still like this Naruto at the beginning) When watching "Naruto", we follow the perspective of the protagonist Naruto and watch his ninja way. This made me ignore that ninjas are not synonymous with love and peace, and villains like Nagato are just people suffering from the legacy of war. So, maybe this disgusting pupil technique of Beitenjin can really change the ninja world. For reference only.

I felt so happy after reading it. Although there is one drawback: it is quite verbose. But what he wrote is really great. This is the only book I've seen where Sasuke and Naruto become rebel ninjas together, and then rule the ninja world together. It's amazing. It's normal for Naruto to go dark here, and then he and Sasuke find the same goal together, which is perfect.

It's okay. I've read Chapter 73 now. (There's fun in it, come on, come on!) The character is quite full, but I don't want to talk about Ino anymore. It's a bit, uh, very bad. Chef Ino, don't look at it. Chef Sakura can come and take a look. To be honest, Sakura's character changed a little quickly in the early stage. As for her being able to like Naruto, I actually I still maintain a skeptical attitude, but I can accept it, because to be honest, between the cold-faced cool brother and the warm little sun, I know who to choose with my eyes closed. Although I feel that Naruto's purpose of defecting to Konoha is not pure, it is somewhat reasonable. The main reason is that this title is really popular among Naruto fans. Is this traitorous ninja Uchiha worthy, but I, the Uzumaki clan, can't be worthy? Sakura's words show that the cowardice and timidity at the beginning turned into a little more rational and gentle. He understands Sakura better than Kishimoto. The shaping is pretty good, but this can only be seen in the later stages, and the early stage is a bit eye-catching. Not to mention Ino, we can only look at the later stages, not the early stage at all. But fortunately, except for these two, everyone else is okay and the characters are not broken. It can be seen that the author is a full-time cook, but please be kind to my Ino. Even if you die, you have to find a good reason. Or you let Naruto's character dictate that he kills whoever he wants without a reason. Of course, I don't think you can write like this. The current plot, Sakura took Naruto's script, Sasuke took Sakura's script, Naruto took Sasuke's script, yes, you read it right, the current story is that Naruto defected at the end of the chunin exam, Sasuke and Sakura discussed it, and then Sakura said Naruto's classic line, even if he breaks his hands and feet, I will bring him back (it should be this) (sentence), and then Sasuke agreed very much, and then Sasuke also defected, and then Sakura followed Jiraiya to find Tsunade, and convinced Tsunade that a woman determined to become the Hokage was okay. I think it was something Sakura could say, at least this experience allowed her to say this. Instead, I remembered a sentence, if everyone can be the Hokage, why can't I? Since everyone wants to be, why don't I be the first? Not bad, interesting

A very logical book. The identity of the time traveler is not obvious, it is only reflected in the plot prophet, as if he has been assimilated into the world. In terms of social relationships, the protagonists are always acting out, and there may be times when they are sincere to each other, but they are not written out, leaving it up to the reader's imagination. It can be said that the protagonist has no emotional sustenance, but only interests. The purpose and strength are both enjoyable to watch, and the reasoning is not boring. Don't stop updating ah ah ah ah ah

It's pretty good. After reading more than 20 chapters, I can tell that the details are well controlled, but I don't know what it is about at the beginning. Why did Iruka die? There are some deficiencies in the setting. But it is very attractive and can be said to be a treasure book. But many Naruto stories are smooth sailing in the early stages, but can easily fall apart in the later stages. I hope the author can work hard! Furthermore, this cover can be said to be really unattractive. I hope the author will make some changes to attract more people to read it. Come on, author! [Laughing out loud]

There is no problem with the protagonist's character of being decisive in killing, and his path is correct. He faces up to history, unifies first, and then educates (other gods). Although he takes shortcuts, it is better than Madara's self-deception of Infinite Tsukuyomi and Hashirama's method, and solves the historical problems that the original work has never solved. Moreover, the protagonist is not greedy for power, and he and Erzhuzhu protect the world against Otsutsuki. One star is deducted because the plot is too short, there are too few high-end battles, and it is purely based on numerical values ​​+ intelligence. Moreover, the protagonist is too amazing, he practices very quickly, and his combat power increases rapidly, but there is little description of the training process.

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking. It's the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read in Tomato (if you don't agree, recommend a few books to me). The only drawback of this book is that it updates too slowly [smile][smile][smile]

Villain protagonist! Naruzu unifies the ninja world! ! Delicious! ! ! Okay, just say something → The characters and plot are very comfortable, and the reading process is indeed enjoyable. There are no repeated jumps and hesitations, all "bonds" are calculated, this is the darkened Naruto I want to see! Moreover, the author also wrote out the shining points of other characters. Both his own side and the enemy were written with flesh and blood and full of personality, and there was no phenomenon of smearing or distorting the original characters. However, sometimes the author will repeatedly explain some previous situations, which feels a bit confusing (but just skip it like I did). There will also be a larger plot analysis and in-depth interpretation of the original plot in the middle of the plot. Personally, I think it may not be suitable for friends who have never read the original work (but since they have all watched Naruto fanfics, there should be no situation where they have not read the original work). In fact, there are still some places where the logic is not smooth, but they are very few (just close your eyes and let it go, don't worry too much) All in all, the faults do not hide the faults, it is a very good Naruto fan! And I simply didn't see enough! I dream that the author can write some follow-up stories🤤!