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The early writing is very good. I like Alice very much😋

Originally I wanted to give it 5 stars, but after thinking about it, I felt a little unhappy. First, for me, the heroine is the opposite of the protagonist. She will be injured if she dies, but you don't beat her husband, which is not good. Also, why didn't the protagonist drag one of Didi's heroines over to him and insist on letting him peek at his woman? Secondly, I feel uncomfortable. Every time I see the heroine being teased or something, I get upset. Because this is a novel, I can be as arrogant as I want, so this inexplicable feeling of discomfort makes me very uncomfortable. If it weren't for the fact that you write well 👍 (seriously) and you are still a novice, I would directly give you a one-stop service from a 2-star troll. But overall, it was well written. This is just my personal opinion, "the heroine cannot be touched." If you've finished reading, thank you. Come on, I'm optimistic about you [Like]

For a relatively niche jobless person, the writing is very good. The potential is very high, but I don't know if I can keep updating it all the time. Come on [sending my heart]

There are currently more than 100 chapters, which is no different from reading the original work again. It can create more high-quality original plots and characters, and enrich the protagonist's image and personality charm. I hope the author works hard and doesn't supervise, after all, it's rare to find a story about Tomato without a job. I read some comments from some book friends and they agree with me, especially that the protagonist has no sense of tension. I agree with it. After all, it is a common problem among time travellers, the sense of comfort from a God's perspective. I suggest that you stab the protagonist in a maze or other plots to make him nervous, starting from strengthening the belief in protecting Alice and defeating the gods, and then just make up for the regrets.

Tomato doesn't have a decent Jobless series yet. You can be said to have opened the door to the Jobless series in Tomato. It would be better to make the relationship between the male protagonist and Alice more sincere and affectionate. You can consider traveling around the continent with Alice in the future, but the death of Rudy's father must be carefully thought out. If the turning point, feelings, and growth are written, this book will become a god. Come on [love]

It's really beautiful. Among the books in the Jobless series on Tomato, this one ranks first. I feel that there is no one better than this one. [Like] [Like] I really hope that this book will be updated well and never be cut in half. Although the author said that he is just starting to write, the writing is really smooth and clear, and he is really sweet with Alice [Love]

Among the jobless fanfics, it can only be at the T0 level, because there is no one with a quality higher than this one. I have been reading it for a long time and have been waiting for the update. Basically, I read it as soon as it is updated. The setting of Dongfanglong in Jobless is also very novel.

This is a very well written fictitious fanfic. It is true that fictitious fics are difficult to write. There are not many good ones. Finally, I have one. The author should work hard! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

A very good jobless reincarnation fanfic, with a plot that no one has ever written before, and the writing is also very good.

The only role of the no-job reincarnation fan is still very good, and it fills the gap in my heart. However, it is a little bit that the protagonist always hits Rudy casually. Now it is a bit abstract to see him being beaten next to Rudy, but it is still very good. I hope the author can update it faster.

This is the best no-job reincarnation fic I've ever seen.

Come on, author, don't stop updating [crying] It's hard to find an anime fan novel that I like

I just started watching it yesterday afternoon. I was just listening to the book and I was excited, but suddenly it disappeared. I looked at my phone and saw that it was the latest episode [smile]. I know how good it is. Needless to say, the author will update it soon!

Don't give up, author, straighten up your man, it's really good-looking, even Alice is good-looking

Bokan [OK] Support me, I must write it down [please update]

What a great book, haha. I was listening to it in the middle of the night, and I found out that you were updating it in the middle of the night. What a coincidence. I just finished listening, and you updated a little more content. You also said that you would keep following me. I am really looking forward to this book.

One of the best novels among jobless fans.

This is also the only fan work I have seen about jobless reincarnation. From the current point of view, the author does not want to change the general direction of some plots, but the small directions are not left behind. The author should find time to sort out the outline.

The no-job reincarnation fanfic is very in line with my taste. It is well written and reflects the character of the original work very well. There are just a few updates, not enough to watch. It will definitely become popular, guaranteed to win [top post]

A very high-quality novel, very well written, the characters' personalities and characteristics are all displayed. It is not just a Long Aotian novel. It changes the original plot and also cleverly integrates it into the plot. I can only say it is good-looking!

There are very few jobless fanfics, come on! I hope the author can come up with more innovations of his own and not keep following the original work.

It is rare to see novels about joblessness. Japan is undoubtedly outstanding. The novel is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The update speed is also very good.

This book😁😂😃😄😉😊☺️😌😍😏😘😚😋😀😆🥰🤩, in short, it is very beautiful

I've only been watching it for a long time and I can't bear to watch it. I hope it will be updated soon so that I can enjoy it once.

Come on! This is the only job I recognize currently, so don't stop it!

Jobless is one of my favorite animes, and I hope this fanfic can put an end to my frustrations.

It's one of the best-written no-job fanfics I've ever read. All in all, it's not enough to watch at all

This is one of the better books among the novels. The author will continue to work hard.

It is very well written among unemployed fans, I think it is worthy of this rating [Like][Like]

The best jobless fanfic so far.