“Obtain the Creation Stone of Heaven and make the Heaven-Creation Sword recognize you as its master!”
“Enter the bottom of the Valley of Despair and master the heavenly-grade martial art, the Six Brahma Seals!”
“Split open the Cliffs of the Primordial Sea and release the Primordial Heavenly Demon!”
“Build a civilization, become the progenitor of a race, and usher in a new era!”
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“You’ve got some nerve assigning me tasks like these. Why not just have me create a whole new world and become its creator god while you’re at it?”
Chen Xuan read through the task list, ranting furiously as he went.
He figured that if he had the ability to complete even one of these tasks, he wouldn’t need this System. By then, he’d pretty much be invincible anyway.
The purge missions didn’t ask me to kill someone. They wanted me to wipe out entire sects, or casually slaughter a whole nation and butcher an entire clan!
The scavenger missions demanded Creation-grade weapons and heavenly-grade martial arts. Materials that appeared once in ten thousand years were as common as trash in this System!
“On the whole, the partner missions are the only ones that are even a little easy,” Chen Xuan concluded.
Personally, I think it's okay. There could be a little more emotional scenes with the heroine. Also, is the third heroine defiled? The writing is a bit unclear.
Not too much. I like this book very much. Please keep it up. I am looking forward to the following plot. I hope it is not the kind of story that ends all the way and ends quickly. I really want to see the protagonists live for a long time and then see what the Dan Emperor looks like [laughing] [laughing] Gu Qingling, who was chasing and killing the protagonist before, didn't get the subordinate mark, so he directly teleported him to the origin to get the treasure. He also got a wood origin, 6 Generally speaking, the first wife is normal, the second wife is having sex with someone else, and the third wife is her own opinion. As I said, some people may not be able to accept it.
The setting is very interesting, and it's okay to read carefully. It would be better if the pace were faster. There are so many poisonous points. It was pretty good in the early stage, but why did it collapse like this in the middle? Oh my God. . . . . .
Well, I can write more about the male protagonist, although the male protagonist's talent is a bit weak. You can write more emotional scenes, you can move forward faster with the second heroine, and you should write something with the third heroine that will make readers feel more comfortable [I learned it]
Few people can accept the third one
I hope the third heroine is not green.
I feel it's a 3.5, But since I don't have this choice, I'll give it 4 stars. The main reason is that the protagonist has always been easy to win, and he's been trying to find a wife. Before he can become a hero, I feel a little frustrated.
Except for accepting the order, everything was okay, and the subsequent processing was also okay!
If the princess's experience is not changed, I guess there won't be many readers, but the subject matter is pretty good.
Not bad, the world view is quite good, just write it carefully. The story background of the third heroine feels more realistic. The first two heroines feel too empty. Come on 🙂