Spiritual Qi Revival: Wielding a Superpower Scanner

A very good novel, with sharp writing and humorous language. Having a female protagonist is the icing on the cake!

The author writes very well, the content is novel, and he creates female characters. I also like the description of female characters. There are no descriptions of jade legs, pink fists, pouty mouths, etc. You know what readers like and hate, and you will avoid writing parts that readers hate. It's very beautiful. The best thing is that there is no female protagonist. It's really great. It's written according to your direction and your ideas. I think it's great.

It's pretty good among ben10 fanfics, but the plot of the aunt is not handled very well (it suddenly appears + a large paragraph of text to explain something) and the protagonist's strength is also a bit weak. Although I know it is a growth story, the protagonist is either always failing or is on the way to failing. It seems a bit frustrating and I hope the protagonist's strength is redefined. Finally, a friend said: Hero, come on stage! !

The author's writing is quite good. Of course, I mainly read this book because of my feelings about it. I always like to read Young Hackers (Why is there no heroine? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying])

It looks good, the story is compact, and it has elements that I like to watch. It can be understood as having 100 levels, each level has an alien hero, and can unlock more skills. In other words, in the final stage of development, you can even become more than 10,000 alien heroes in the Wanbiao class [laughter]

I found that there are indeed quite big differences between novels. Sometimes when reading a novel, something is obviously wrong. For example, in this novel, maybe it lacks some detailed descriptions? For example, the environment, the character's demeanor, etc. All in all, it reads like a running account I wrote in my spare time () However, this book is really good to read. There are no strange descriptions of the female characters (jade legs, slender feet, exquisite little feet, etc.), Nor any weird psychology (wandering thoughts, evil thoughts, etc.). The values ​​are also very comfortable. They keep talking about dedication, but there is no shortage of things that the protagonist should get.

I came here because of the title of the book, so wild and imaginative, 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

The author's firm attitude towards the lack of a heroine made me laugh. I like the one without a heroine. It must be five stars! The subject matter of this book is interesting, and there is nothing wrong with the worldview. It's just that the writing style is a bit immature and wordy, and some paragraphs are too long and seem inconvenient. Generally speaking, it is still recommended, and I can look forward to it in the future [sending heartfelt wishes]

Cutting snow into paintings, rubbing wind into poems. May the years be gentle and fill the world's joys and sorrows bit by bit; may you be happy all your life and create galloping stars day and night. [Like][Love][OK][Cool][Top post][Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention]

After reading the whole story, I generally recommend it [like it]. The story is complete and smooth. Although the ending is a classic and a bit rushed, it has a beginning and an end and clearly recycles the foreshadowing and origin of Goldfinger. This has already defeated 80% of its peers. In the field of spiritual energy recovery, supernatural power awakening, and small broken watches, this book is quite interesting. One of the highlights of the early stage, apart from the various heroes of Xiao Po Biao, is the author's chat with us about breaking through the dimensional wall and his thoughts... [Laughs] (The author himself can write and can't write, so he just chatted with us in the article!) The classic power academy style in the early and middle stages, but he didn't step on any of the old pitfalls! [Like] What a slap in the face, what a mindless supporting role, etc. The author has directly vaccinated it here [Like] It looks very sober, and there is a sense of refreshment that is not the traditional refreshing style. Late classic race war goes cosmic. Compared with the early and mid-term, I feel that the writing in this section is a little bit worse. Maybe it's because the author's writing skills have improved, or maybe it's because the author vaguely mentioned that the description of girls in some articles was not written by him when he was talking to us about it. [Laughs] Anyway, there are some details written later that conflict with the previous article, which makes the details a little uncomfortable. Then it changed from the classic vernacular writing at the beginning to a little bit of the writing style of my old high school composition... What about "as if", "he knew very well..." [Eating Melon] Of course, the author also explained this in the finale of the day-to-day talk. It is understandable that he was unconsciously infected while reading and writing novels [OK] Generally speaking, these small shortcomings are innocuous, and even except for a few details of contextual conflicts, they can be regarded as the growth of the author [Thinking] Therefore, I can give 5 stars to encourage and recommend [Love]