Matriarchy: Girl, You Smell So Good

There are a lot of poisonous points, and it only deserves a three-star rating. Four stars can be considered a masterpiece among female heroes. 1. If you can't find a reason not to see Yuan Yueling, your IQ should not be too high or too low, and you can give advice, but you can't just make up excuses. 2. If you have to go up a mountain, you have to fly up and collide with the opponent's mount. If you can run directly, you have to taunt a few words, for fear that you will not die slowly enough. 3. The problem of character design is that the protagonist is worried about being exposed, and the protagonist is said to be running wildly on the mountainside. 4. The design of the male protagonist and the time traveler are somewhat of a failure. The relationship between the characters was not introduced uniformly at the beginning. If you expect the reader to draw a relationship diagram, it is better to expect that you can draw it first. Reality does not need to be logical, but the author cannot forcefully push the plot. The characters are established once they are established. Even if there are changes, you must write the turning points. You can write a brain shelter in the first chapter, maybe to avoid danger.

I can't stand it anymore when I read Chapter 6. The male protagonist has been married for two generations, and he still has a classic sibling misunderstanding with his sister. Moreover, the map changed too quickly. From the awakening of the Lingbao to the latest chapter, it is basically a story about the new map. It's too jumpy.

Is this a male video? It's not the same as the female channel White Lotus, but this kind of character is not described. And when meeting a prince/daughter, this person will encounter difficulties, and then the protagonist will solve them. Isn't this a female harem novel?

My F*#, the author, you can't change the original book, at least make it into two books. It would be a pity to lose the original book. At least leave a little bit, a little bit is fine. (Crash face [shocked] 😠)

I haven't figured out the original map yet, so I went to a new map.

WC brother, I am really speechless. I wrote it well before, but after I awakened that spiritual treasure, it was a complete mess.

Why don't you want something if you give it to me? Pretending to be reserved? Why not practice hard! Won't you die quickly enough if you cause trouble everywhere?

It's pretty good among female protagonists. Anyway, I don't think it's a big deal. I just hope that there will be a plot in the future where the protagonist pretends to be a woman and teases others, so that his identity won't always be revealed and teased. I also hope that there will be multiple female protagonists. It would be quite interesting to have a Shura field in the future.

Md It's like a sand sculpture. I'll give it to you after you wake up a spiritual treasure TM.

I have read Chapter 30 so far, and I can say that your plot is okay in my opinion. The writing is basically around the protagonist. The plot is not bad. Except for a little less meat, there is nothing to criticize in the rest, and you will not interject in the text. This is worthy of praise. I hope you will continue to work hard. Why is this novel gone?