Prisoners of Destiny

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It initially introduces the "world" view of the novel and provides the protagonist with a golden finger. The protagonist's IQ is online, and the logic of the copy makes sense. But the disadvantage is that the atmosphere created is insufficient, making it difficult to tell that the protagonist is in a dungeon where his life is on the line, and there are no weird things shown in it, which are all relatively normal things. You can try to add some horror elements, such as being forced to separate due to the need to search in the dungeon. Even though it's cliché that the weird one-man thing will happen, it does work. You can hope that your dreams will go away, and you will have nothing to say about your deeds. I wish I could see a single leaf in this life, and I will return home when Heng asks. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] It feels so strange to write [Thinking]

It's good to read, I love to read it, it's my IQ anyway, I can't understand it←_← I hope the author will take a good look at my question and write something that is less brain-burning and less confusing, or you can explain it to me a little bit at the end of each chapter, otherwise I really can't understand it, thank you (*^o^*) I'd like to thank you, um, and then I'll compare. I prefer the kind of teamwork. Well, I like this kind of thing. Of course, it's not impossible to work alone. And don't engage in the kind of female rivalry where girls are jealous. I hope that each girl will be more independent and stronger. Thank you, okay, okay, I talk a bit too much. Please code it carefully [shy] [smirk] [air kiss] [admiration]

The core of this part is that Ye Meng fainted due to inexplicable sleepiness. When Li Tian was preparing to return the soul, he found that the soul coffin was missing. After being reminded by Li Wei, he decided to use the coffin in the mourning hall to replace it. At one o'clock, Li Wei put Ye Meng into the coffin, used Huoxiang Zhengqi water to make Ye Meng wake up and continued to pretend to be unconscious. The wake mission is completed, and the main mission is updated to survive until the end of the soul recovery. Li Wei tried to find Wang Ling but couldn't find him. He noticed the black shadow outside the window and tried to respond. It focuses on showing the twists and turns in the preparation process for returning to the soul, as well as the interaction between the characters and the advancement of Li Wei and others' plans. The plot is tense and full of suspense.

The suspense at the beginning was enough, not to mention the male protagonist, I was also confused. Was he drawn into the strange infinite flow and thought it was a dream, or was he just a dream within a dream?

I started to feel it after about 5 or 6 chapters, and I was a little dizzy in the first few chapters. It is recommended to read ten chapters in one go, so that you can get into the groove. A lot of the weirdness seems a bit childish at first, but the accumulation of weirdness in a small scene seems reasonable. This is not only a deliberate arrangement by the author, but also a feature of this novel, that is, the author not only forcefully takes you into the world of the book, but also makes you believe that it is real.

That's great. I hope the author can update more, even super updates. [Making faces]

Awesome, super suitable for my appetite [shy] logic is also online [blowing kiss] I really like this [shy] but why isn't it popular [crying]

In fact, I started thinking about which book to recommend many days ago and discussed it with my friends for a long time. I am very grateful for such a reading recommendation activity. It seems that in our busy and impetuous life, we are suddenly squeezed out for a while to discuss the books we have read with friends and colleagues around us, from the original thread-bound version of Jin Yong Gu Long to Qiong Yao and Zhang Ailing's Romance, Snow and Moon, from Jimi's comics to obscure books. Ancient poems by Hai Yan and Liu Meng, and now all kinds of best-selling books. Suddenly, I discovered that the charm of books is that no matter our age, gender, or what era we are apart from, we will meet in a perfect time and space because of a novel, poetry, and prose that resonates, and then we will chat, and our thoughts will spark off. For us, reading seems to be another kind of enjoyment in life. In the world of books, we enjoy other people's lives and shed tears of joy despite all the impossibilities in real life. To be honest, reading is a heart-wrenching thing. You have to empty yourself, immerse yourself in the stories she tells, and live it again before you can truly understand it. Regarding the recommended books, I actually think that you don't have to be afraid of reading bad books. Bad books will make you more clear about your true interests. When I read the preface to "Prisoners of Destiny", I was deeply moved. I kept underlining and taking notes. Every time I saw these sentences, I would have a new understanding.

Very good. Although the author is a newbie, he is very powerful. [Laughing] It's just a bit lacking [angry] but it's still worth watching [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Although the structure of the first two copies was not very good because they were newcomers. But starting from the third copy, the author began to write in his own style The plot is also very interesting and makes you wonder what will happen in the next chapter. Summary: Very interesting. The author also reads comments. If there are typos, they will be corrected as soon as they are pointed out. He is willing to listen to readers' opinions. [Laugh][Like][Like]

The author's writing is great, the logic is very strong, and the storyline is very attractive. After reading the first copy, I was trapped in school and couldn't get out. The character creation is perfect, and the dialogues are rich and interesting. The author has a lot of imagination. It is amazing to come up with such a story [Like]

I've just finished reading the first copy. It's very well written, and the author is very grateful. I feel like the fourth dungeon is a bit sloppy, but overall it's pretty good. However, the protagonist is still too weak at the moment. I hope the protagonist can become stronger in the future.

If given a chance, would you be willing to change your destiny? If there was a game, would you like to understand the meaning of life? How do you choose between fate and life? Do you want the right to change your life against the odds or a magnificent life? You... Have you thought about it? [Please update]

Like, like 👍[Like][Like][Like][Like], the author will update quickly [punch out][punch out]

I read the first story about being trapped in school. The beginning is very clever, Ye Meng's name feels very connotative, the story feels a bit like a strange story about rules, and overall it feels very logical. But all the characters have two-character names, and sometimes it's hard to tell who is who. Then the pace is a little faster, and there are slightly more characters. Maybe I read less of this type of article, and I think it would be better to go slower. [Send heart][Send heart]

I really like novels about game dungeons, and the writing is very clear. It's a novel I've read before. If Ye Meng's intelligence is very online, it would be crazy [eat melon]. Hehe, the plot is also very attractive. It can be seen that the author is writing seriously. I hope the author can work hard. It is already very good [Sending Hearts]

It looks good. The setting of the door will return to the fatal game. Come on, please update.

Good storyline, rich imagination, good writing, good characters and world view, it should become popular🔥🔥🔥🔥

This is an amazing book. The plot has ups and downs and the characters are delicately portrayed.

Overall it's very good, completely beyond the level of a new writer. Some aspects of description still need improvement. I hope it will get better and better! [Adoration]

I feel good at the moment, but the pace of the copy is a bit fast. For example, the second copy feels like there is still a lot to write about, but it ends very suddenly. I hope the author can write more. Also, I want to ask if there is a female protagonist

Nice but too short

Good looking, good luck to the author

Not bad, keep working hard

The author is great~ So why don't you add some easter eggs about Long Night Lumen?

It can be a good book that can be read. The protagonist has brains

After reading the first dungeon and chapters, I can only say that the flavor of Mugenliu is too authentic, and the protagonist also has a brain. Maybe it's because I don't read enough articles like this and my brain can't wrap my head around it [laughing and crying]

It's so beautiful and the plot is very engaging. Highly recommended!

It's rare to see this type of book, but the plot really attracted me. The protagonist's image was successfully created and very interesting. The plot is compact and supportive. It turns out that every type of book has different points of appreciation. It's really well written.

It's the first time I've seen such a beautiful infinite flow. I feel that every character is very distinct, the rhythm is tight, and it's beautiful [smile]