Ben 10: I'm Handsome as Hell, but I'm No Womanizer

There are still so many episodes to come when the juvenile server is launched, such as the seasons when Tian Xiaoban and Luke are paired up, and the seasons after Xiaowen grows up, and other parallel universes can be written. The author continues to update. You can't just ignore your copy of Harry Potter. This Young Hacker is so good, it would be a pity to stop updating it.

When I think of heroes, I think of Yu-Gi-Oh! The designs have very good effects, are clearly written, and are quite handsome. I feel that the author is writing very fast, and it feels like it is about to be finished. The pace is too fast and the content is too short. This is a common problem in fan fiction. If you write too fast, you won't be able to write later. Bai Zichuang can't keep up with the pace. Try to write it longer and highlight the details. The pace is too fast. After the meeting There will be big problems in the interview. I won't be able to add anything when I want to write about it. I need to review and watch the Young Hacker animation. Don't write too fast. You can write about the changes in the character's form and personality. Well, I feel that there is basically no change or breakthrough in the mentality of the protagonist. Well, how to describe it? I don't know if the author has read it. Well, the second part of Yu-Gi-Oh!'S Ten Generations of Yujo Castle uses a hero deck to change the mentality and grow. Okay, I've said it before, this sentence doesn't count. In short, the protagonist has a mentality and psychological growth and change. If he is always invincible or there are some things that cannot highlight the main character characteristics, the most perfect one is also the most imperfect one. In summary, the author writes too fast, and the core article is very short. Fan fiction is easy to write, but it is not easy to write. It is easy to write because there are animations, comics, and various plots. The author can directly follow it. However, if you want to add the protagonist to the plot, you cannot be like a passerby, or be invincible and meaningless. Although it is perfect, it is not perfect. The greatest perfection is the most imperfect. People's mental journey and growth are different and must be highlighted, otherwise the character will easily become dull. What you like and dislike, the characteristics of the character, know the characteristics, encounter some things, and undergo changes in mentality. Only in this way can the character's image be completely established, instead of being a passer-by and an invincible, too bland image in any plot. If it can meet these requirements, this fan novel can reach a score of 9:8. Of course, this is a huge problem. I am just a reader, not an author. I can only make these evaluations. If you ask me to write, I will definitely not be able to write it. I just read a lot of books similar to fan fiction and discovered the common problems of fan fiction. Some of them are just like the author's writing, which is not too ugly, but it does not meet the high requirements. Some fan novels are written directly as group portraits, almost separated from the protagonist. Some directly became harem novels, and some directly became romantic dramas. Fan fiction is easy to write but not easy to write, that's the problem.

There is no point in grabbing the original version of Xiao Ben and Xiao Wen. There are also subdivided original characters. There is also the ultimate alien chapter. Xiao Wen has also successfully won it. The girls I have met all have a crush on the protagonist. But when it comes to the ultimate alien chapter, there are basically not many other female roles, and there is no daily life. It is recommended to add more daily life of the protagonist and Xiao Wen. Overall, it is a very good book, but the early stage may be a bit boring. Compared with those things that add original characters with unclear meanings, integrate the world, change the gender of small classes, seek some novelties, and steal the scenes of the original characters, it is good and cannot be better.

It's very interesting, but the update is too slow, the chapters are too few, and the number of words is too small. The author should write 24 hours a day, and eating and drinking is a must. Except for having diarrhea, you can just sit on the chair. Author, you only need to eat and drink. Come on! Don't stop writing. It's not enough to read. It's not enough to read at all! ! ! [Petrochemical]

The most comfortable book I have read on Tomato so far is Young Hackers. More points.

1. Personally, I think this book is quite good. The author generally follows the main line of the original work. The protagonist has not encountered any opponents so far and is invincible all the way to the end, which makes me very happy to watch it. 2. There is no special suppression of small class roles. Mainly the male protagonist is the main character, and the small class is the supplement. 3. The author's writing style is quite good, although sometimes the description is a bit strange. The use of "(joy)" is a bit like the description of a dialogue novel. 4. The author actively communicates with readers and intersperses corresponding plots in the text. 5. Generally speaking, although the writing style is a bit strange, it is acceptable, and the protagonist is invincible in the plot, and it is enjoyable all the way to the end. It's worth reading when you're bored, or when there's a shortage of Ben10 fanfics.

It is very well written, and can be said to be the best among hacker fanfics over the years. The heroine includes Xiaowen, her childhood sweetheart, the cursed witch Hope, and the sex transfer Abedo who has a love watch, but it is a pity that the original plot of the love watch is It is Abedo's love that generates his will. He breaks away from Abedo and becomes a sex shifter and directly kills Abedo. The plot here is that Abedo fell in love with the protagonist when he was still a little female frog. I hope to write more TieTian Shura field plots. It's good to watch.

It's okay, but the constant presence of parentheses in the text affects the reading. The author actually doesn't need to explain so much, which makes people feel separated when reading. Others are just some small bugs and nothing serious. Overall it's okay, keep up the good work

Overall, it's really good. I've been following this book for a long time, and it's really well written. This fanfic is very well written, but I stopped updating it for a while, but I still came back to read it once it was updated. I just didn't expect it to end too quickly. After all, I haven't written about comprehensive evolution yet. Those, but anyway, among the young hacker fanfics I have read, he ranks first. This novel that I have been chasing for a long time has finally been completed, but it is still a bit regretful. After all, it has to be completed for some reasons, so let's finish it and look forward to the author's new book [Thoughts]

Ben10's fanfics are basically all newbies written by "Love to Generate Power". I've also read the other ones, and the writing is basically quite plain. I may be at the same level as me. The quality of this book is unique. Unfortunately, it seems that the author doesn't want to write it anymore. I've read it four times, my God! How boring am I? As long as there is a shortage of books, I will come back to read [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Some people secretly resurrected